IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 190

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many people think that money is the best gift to give a teenager, but others disagree. Discuss bot the views and give your opinion including relevant examples.

Money people battling whether it is good to give cash money as a gift for a teenager or not. While giving money as a gift will encourage them to learn how to manage their financial and give them freedom of choose what to do with the money, others argue that teeanagers will view this as a non-valuable gift and too material-related. This essay will discuss both arguments and state my own opinion and examples.

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Some people think government should ban dangerous sports; others, however, believe that people should the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,a part of people argue that government should prevent people to do dangerous sport, another part of them believe every one is free to do his chosen sport.As for me,people should not be limited to whatever sports they prefer,even the government needs to provide some support to them.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio- diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

It is clear that throughout the history of humankind mankind has influenced changes in the nature drastically. It includes processes such as die out of various animals, insects and plants.

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Modern technology,such as personal computers and the internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home atleast part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

Modern technology, for example, personal computers and the internet, have made it easier for many people to work from home at least sometimes instead of going to an office every day. There are advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

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Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, numerous teenagers can learn productively by using electronic devices, so their guardians should allow them to access the TV at home and school while others think that it is not a crucial learning method. In my opinion, I believe that learning from different sources such as books and newspapers is more important than devices.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Reports stated that the health levels of many citizens have deteriorated. The optimum way to address this problem is by adding the number of sports facilities, however, others argue that this solution will only make a slight impact to public health therefore, another measure must be taken. This essay will discuss both arguments and state my opinion.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful in persuading us to buy things. Other people believe that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are opposing views regarding the outreach and determining influence of modern advertising methods. Many believe that they are a huge success is shaping our purchasing behaviour, while others underestimate their impact as marginal. I am of the opinion that advertising is still of significant effect to the extent that even lack of attention does not prevent its penetration into our unconscious mind.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some regions, international sport is achieved by providing top athletes with high-level training centers, instead of equipping public spaces with an affordable inventory. I, personally, think that this practice has a negative impact in terms of restriction potential athletes, who are not wealthy enough for expensive trainings. For others, it is believed that such policy could be a positive development.

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Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Can people be happy without much money? What other factors contribute to happiness?

Money is an essential factor in our life today. Moreover, some people believe that money is a crucial thing to promote happiness. However, I believe that money is not a mandatory factor and I will explain more aspects contributing to happiness in this essay.

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Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media sich as software, videos or DVDs. Do you agree or disagree?

The debate over whether local libraries should provide books or invest in expensive hi-tech devices, such as computers, software or videos. While some argue that libraries should focus on books, others believe that digital libraries more demand at this time. I believe that the balanced way more beneficial, which integrates books and technology media, is the best way at the current time.

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Some people believe that the academic success of students depends on good teachers at schools. Others think that it depends on the attitude and determination of the students. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Success is a key element in many settings including academic schools to achieve higher levels. Some people relate that academic success to qualified educators, while others assert that success depends on students efforts. I support the view that without the motivation of students, success will hardly be accomplished.

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Crimes and other kinds of information on TV and newspaper have bad consequences. This kind of information should be restricted to be shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

Some people opine that unlawful activities and various other type of content should not be printed in newspapers and shown on TV by media because this might have negative impact on people. I, completely agree with this and shall be discussing my viewpoint in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different opinion about whether promote competing in daily life is better than encourage co-operating, no matter in working, studying, or daily life. In my opinion, even though people need motivation to do things better, I believe co-operating is better for our lives.

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many governments think that economic progress is their most important goals.Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Economic progress is thought to be the most important goal for many domestic organs.Whereas, some other groups declare that other kind of approaches have equal importance for a country. I totally agree with the former idea.

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Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some believe that most of teenager's spare time are spent on shopping, which afficts both young people and the community they live in. I partly agree with this statement because this cause some problems to their finance and also the environment and there are other adventageous activities for them

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Nowadays，a lot of people enjoy watching sports on TV. Do you think the advantages of watching sports on TV outweigh the disadvantages?

Although, advertising sports products is thought by some to be fair for sports players, other people think that sports should be leisure activities. In my opinion, I believe that athletes can advertise sports products as they have a strong influence to the audience.

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Crimes and other kinds of information on TV and newspaper have bad consequences. This kind of information should be restricted to be shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

Some information about crimes and others have negative results and therefore should be shown to a limited extent. I firmly agree with the restriction of some knowledge or news in the media that is about bad actions such as crimes.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

Most of the offenders commit more crimes after their first period of being arrested.This eassy will explain the causes of this situation and show some ways how to take measures to address it.

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Some people think that the main factor influencing a child’s development these days are things such as TV, friends and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, in child development, there are few notions. Some of them is based on the importance of external factors like TV and friends; However, others believe that family has a crucial role in children growth. I heartfully believe that family has a highlighted role in kids world, and the reasons for both views will be discussed below.

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Some students choose to work or travel after leaving school and before going to university. Many people, however, say that working experience is more useful in adult life than travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement？

These days, pupils who graduate from college have various plans from time which they have it until university , so a group of their design working, while other ones choose to travel to other areas or countries; however, some people believe it is important that they working instead of travelling owing to the fact that they obtain a lot of experience that helps them in adult life. In my opinion, working is a good thing and is the best thing for people who have money problems, but others can improve their knowledge about the world by travelling.

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