IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 190

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance tech which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, as technology got more advanced, we witnessed many changes in the world including security services mostly provided by the governments to reduce crimes and increase efficiency. One example could be the need of signing up with all your personal info to use diferent web based servises. So, i tend to agree with the topic.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to question and offer criticisms to their teachers. Other think this will lead to a loss of respect discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

People are divided as to whether school students should be allowed to involve in performance of teachers as to enhance education system or not. In my mind, were this method to be carried out, it would be good approach in many significant ways.

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Many people believe that family has the strongest influence on a child’s development, while others believe that external factors such as television, friends and music play a big role. Discuss both views

Many people argue that child's are more influenced by their family, while others believe that the influence their get from school, friends and television has more impacted on their development. In this essay, I will exploring both view.

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In their advertising business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, businesses often promoted that their products are new in some way. This marketing strategy can not only have beneficial impact on attracting the customer attention, but it can also enhance the career opportunities.

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Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people wonder if news plays a big role in people’s live. Therefore,they consider reading newspapers and watching television to be a waste of time.While news may seem unnecessary to some people, i believe that news helps us keep up with the times.For example, we can easily find out about what inventions people are making,what holidays are celebrated in which places,and similar news via the internet or television.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Many people refer to having their own house rather than renting. The following essay will discuss about reasons, advantages and disadvantages of this perception.

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Some individuals believe that higher education should be funded by the government.Others, however, argue that it ohs the responsibility of individuals to fund their education. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Education in almost all nations needs money to go as smooth as possible, espacialy at higher stages, which the costs get multiplied. In this essay, i shall give my idea about if governments should be in charge or the people themselves have be responsible for the expanses.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing.

There is a widely spread opinion that governments should take a huge part of citizen’s money for the state necessaries such roads and schools. At the same time there are supporters of the idea of low taxes. Probably, such a controversial position could be connected to a fear of trustful money management in governments. Obviously, some people prefer more to have bigger amounts of money and to diversificate them according to their priorities, and another part is ready to contribute more taxes and receive quality conditions of their living.

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Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

There are many methods that parents do to raise their children, some of them might leave positive impacts while the others might have negative influences. There is a parenting style in which the parents provide everything that requested by their children, and permit everything that their kids want to do. This essay will state that this is a bad style in raising children continued with addressing some consequences that may occur to the children in the future.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace. Do the benefit of this mobility out weight the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While working outside their workplace allows people to complete their tasks, I personally believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because it hinders their health because employees work extra hours.

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Some people think that companies and individuals should pay to clear up the pollution they produce and that the government should not pay for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Paying amounts of money whereas by insividuals or governments through cleaning up the pollution has been a vital topic of debate. While some individuals believe that people and factories should pay money to approch this trend, I strongly blieve that governments need to investigate in decreasing the pollution, which will be discussed by compelling reasons.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, it can be seen that some countries students are not encouraged to study science as a subject. The main reason behind it is due to the education system is not appropriate for students. As a result it could bring a vast amount of damage on our economic growth in a country

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Controversially, many people believe that they rather keep all the money they earn with themselves than pay tax to state as they view it as a pointless budget that will be return back for them. Hence, I strongly disagree with the statement as taxes are crucially vital for them in terms of services and benefits as a payback will be elaborated on in this essay.

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In some countries, the number of people visiting art galleries is declining. What are the reasons for this? How can we solve this problem?

Nowadays, there is a huge decline in the attendance rate of visiting art galleries. This problem is mainly caused by the appearance of the e-Museums and we can solve it by instilling people a sense of civic pride about national art objects. This essay answers both provided questions, while depicting the main features of each.

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People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Taxes provide the government with revenue to fund public good and health, some argue that the local authority have no right to have tax and they would rather keep the money to themselves than giving it to the government, although I highly disagree with this belief, as paying taxes bridges the gaps between the haves and the have-nots, it is an attempt also to share the burden of economic growth.

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TOPIC: In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?

Nowadays, we might see many men who can do houseworking or we might see many women who can repair cars. In the years, everything has been changing and they have a lot of effects. This essay will explain the role of family members are affected positively and negatively.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays era, it is easy to find some kids that glued to their smartphons everyday. While it brings some positive feedbacks, spending excessive time on smartphone everyday brings more harms than the good.

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

School is a educational temple where young ones are given the shower of knowledge. It is discussed by some individuals that in learning centres can be toxic for the kids are there is too much competition, whereas others think that it bring best performance of a child. Upcoming writing will shed light on both the perspective discussed above. I believe that contesting with peers motivate youngster to elevate their performannce.

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Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara does it or the Antarctic what are the benefits and disadvantages for the tourists who visit such places?

There is an increasing trend among youngsters today to visit new and exotic places all over the world, such as the Sahara Desert and Antarctica.Exploring such places with extreme weather and harsh living conditions promotes the feeling of achievements and reeling the beauty of these scenarios become the source of income for many. However these hotspots can cause facilities and serious health related issues.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties having enough sleep What are problems caused by lack of sleep? What can be done about this lack of sleep?

It is a common issue in the modern world is lack of sleep, a lot of people saying that. The possible reason would be a lack of physical activities and running social media a lot. Having a daily routine can solve this problem.

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