IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 193

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that time and money spent on music classes in schools are not necessary. Instead, children should be learning useful subjects such as science and computers. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion to agree or disagree with the description that Some people say that time and money spent on rap classes in schools are not necessary. Instead, offspring should be learning useful subjects such as science and computers.is an important issue to discuss, first I will agreement supporting this explanation after which some aspects against it will be discussed. To begin with, despite my disagreement, a category of individuals advocate that pupils must acquire artistic subjects in order to conserve their cultural identity. This is because when youth study these syllabi, they acquire an in-depth understanding of their civilization along with the evolution that their country has witnessed over the centuries. For instance, in Egypt, educational institutions are keen on introducing history subjects to the current generation in order to obtain a comprehensive view of their Pharaonic civilization and how music influenced their culture. Thus, what can be said is that, according to...

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

Some university students like to attend university close to home and live at home with their family, others like to choose to study away from home and live in another city. Surely they all have several reasons for the choice. However, in my opinion, living away from home is better for a university student.

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Topic 2: These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

there is no denying the fact care childern is vere importnat,while commanly held belife that must riseing thier children in your homedwon and some people prefer rise them out country,I will discuss both other hands and drew my personal in this esay.

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Some People say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.

History and Science and Technology are the compulsory subjects that every students study at primary school or upper stage of the school. There has been a growing argument that some people put emphasis on the importance of History rather than Science and Technology but some other claimed the opposite thing. From my personally perspective, since there are the clear reasons why those subjects are applied into the curriculum all over the over, both are equally important for students to study.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones nowadays has unwanted effects on young people's reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds around the world. Some people say that youngster's reading and writing skills are affected by over using of computers and mobiles. therefore, I completely oppose this statement and I will clearly some facts behind this decision.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their productss are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that businesses frequently promote their "new" products in their advertising in recent years. There are a variety of reasons why companies are likely to introduce their new products in this way, and I believe that this is a negative development.

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It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suited to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

People varies with their opinion about whether mother's are well able to take care of their children, whereas fathers are not suitable for it. From ancient times, women were recognised as good home keeper and carer and men were the earner. However, I am partially agree with the above statement which I will be discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Population in cities is growing rapidly. What are the effects of it? What solutions can you give to maintain a good quality of life in urban areas?

In currentIncurrent society, increasing the number of citizens is causing several drawbacks, in order to keep the standard of dwellers in city areas, I decide to give both comments about the solutions

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Population in cities is growing rapidly. What are the effects of it? What solutions can you gift to maintain a good quality of life in urban areas?

Incurrent society, increasing the number of citizens is causing several drawbacks, in order to keep life-standard of dwellers in city areas, I decide to give both comments about the solutions

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A tendency of news reported in the media about problems and emergencies rather than positive developments is more harmful to the individual and to society. Do you agree or disagree?

Reporting about problems and emergency situations more than good news have a huge negative impacts on the nation. However, this essay totally agree with this statment and will illustrate how negative news effect individual minds and destory the people trust.

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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

This picture illustrates the process of making tea products and making a cup of tea. In general, there are 18 stages of producing tea from sowing tea seeds to drinking and enjoying.

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Some people find it difficult to manage their money. How could the government help prevent debt problems and support such people?

Managing money is essential for living a successful and hassle free life, but a lot of people still to this day have a difficult time with managing their money and usually leads to debt. This problem could be solved individually, but in my opinion the government also has a role in this problem. Therefore, it is important for the government to take action on preventing debt and supporting such people.

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After graduating from high school, some young people decide to start working right away instead of going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

It has been evidently seen that most youngsters prefer to start working immediately after finishing secondary school without going through a tertiary education. There are pros and cons to this which I will be discussing in this essay.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Many parts of the world are expecting an influx of people from the countryside to urban areas, which leads to overpopulated cities but scarcely populated rural areas. In my opinion, this development is having many negative impacts on both urban and rural areas.

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Nowadays it is not only large company that can be able to make films. Digital technology enables anyone to produce films. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Film production in the past was known to be an expensive affair, which only the big companies could afford. In recent times, the advancements in the tecnological sector have resulted in making it possible for individuals to release movies independently at low costs. In my opinion, this benefits both society on the whole, as a wider variety of views can be put forward, and individuals belonging to economically weaker sections by providing equal opportunities to them.

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Some people believe that it is good to hare as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals advocate that information about scientific research, business and academics should be available worldwide (should be widely available) whilst some maintain that it should remain concealed because it is too valuable and important to be revealed. Both schools have merits, but I believe that sharing data freely encourage a more synchronized world.

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Some people believe that nowadays there are too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Some guys consider that these days we have a various of options. This essay agrees with this idea because, in this modern century we have lots of possibilities to get a good job with satisfying income. In addition, technological advancement in this era gives them opportunity to think that we have a too many choices. Also, a vast number of manufactured goods, that had been very useful for our societies and lifestyle. Because of this developments, several individuals believe that right now we have a very good occasion to choose our alternatives.

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What problems does cybercrime cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

one of the most serious issues facing the community is cybercrime. the main reason is people do not pay attention to this a lot seriously. there are many reasons why people are vulnerable to cyber-attacks. hackers often attempt to leak society's computers or someone's phones to steal money or personal information additionally, some hackers send specific links to telephones from social media or numbers when you enter these kinds of links they can leak your phone and include viruses to your phone or computer. one of the main reasons is we do not approach these situations carefully and the second reason is some people do not want to help from others when they exposure to cybercrime.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams.

Owning vehicles has risen substantially during the last three decades in large towns all over the globe has caused consistent transport holdups. I will discuss the truth of these statements and how people in power could prevent the purchase of personal transport by citizens.

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Some people think that global environment problems shold be dralt with internationally. Others, however, believe that they have to be tackled domestically. What is your opinion?

Some believe that environmental issues should be solved on an international level, while others argue everyone should be responsible for protecting the environment individually. In my opinion, both aforementioned statements are equally crucial to preserve our globe from various ecological problems that currently exist.

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