IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 297

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of advertisements that try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys, and other goods. Some people claim this is unfair as parents feel under pressure to buy these kinds of things for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people say that it is not fair for parents worlwide to deal with such a huge amount of stress caused by their children due to the rise of ads encouraging children to buy their products. I strongly agree with this because of parent's longer working hours and the strain between family members.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because univeristy education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

The majority of people believe that students should spend their money on studying due to the advantage of education at academy better than society. This writer totally agrees with this statement and the reasons will be explained below.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people believed that students might have paid full cost for their own study because university education provide some benefits individual rather than society. The writer of this essay agree with this statement and will explain a good evidence for students should pay and gain benefits at the university.

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Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the 21st century, technological development in computer systems is ever-increasing. Many sectors such as communication, medical and transportation highly depend on this technology. Some believe that dependence on this computer technology has led to dangerous situation. I agree this statement and facts related to my view will be discussed.

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Many cities have installed cameras in public places in order to reduce crime. However, some people think that those cameras restrict our privacy. Do you think the advantages of this system outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently there has been a claim about the installation of cameras in specific spots such as parks playgrounds, supermarkets, and other local areas. Some people believe this will aid in providing safety while others argued it will invade the people's privacy. In this essay I am going to discuss both the cones and the pros of this issue.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a problem thoughout the developed world . Because of this , some people think that adverts for fast food , sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

Obesity in children is worsening at an unprecedented rate and many discussions have been made to overcome such situation. Some people view that the best way to prevent obesity in children is by banning fast foods and sweet snacks in schools' cafetaria. Although I believe it is a good precautionary measure, I do not agree it is the best way to fight against child obesity.

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Some old people today's struggle with the use of modern technology such as smartphone and computers. what is the cause of this? what are the some possible solutions?

Technology has turned world into a global village. In this time and age it is very important to master a skill in technology conversely, today's grey population is struggling with modern technology such as smartphones and computers. The main reason is invention of new devices and globlization and possible solution to this is raising awareness about recent inventions and introducing easier ways to use this technology. I will discuss the causes of this and the possible solutions for this in the forthcoming paragraphs

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in many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

Education is always a heated topic in today's society. Single sex schools are popular among some parents because such schools are believed to have positive impact on the children. However, I cannot agree with this point of view, I reckon co-educational schools have more advantages.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In spite of the technological advancement, more and more people accepted to the animal rights, whereas the other belive that animals are the main resources for human to aim their target, such as doing research. This essay firmly agrees that it is beneficial for human to preserve and give animal a right on account to the ecosystematic balance and the new way of solving environmental problems, despite those who assume that researching purpose is more advantageous.

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The use of social media, e.g. Facebook and Twitter, is replacing face-to-face contact for many people in everyday life. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that social networking sites has taken over traditional form of interection with others. While this shift brings some health concerns in recent societies, I believe that socilising with people on the internet has more benefits.

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Crime rate in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. What are the causes and solutions?

Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.

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some people believe that professional such as doctors and engineers should work in the country where they did their training. Other believe that they should be free to work in another country they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the beginning, working in another country was always an area of debate and has become more controversial. People are divided into two groups, some of them claiming that country job opportunities should give the periority to its population while others reject this notion. In my opinion, It could has both positives and negatives for many reasons. My point of view will be discussed in further paragraphs with suitable conclusion.

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The number of children that read books for fun has dropped dramatically in recent years. What are the reasons for this? How can we encourage children to read more?

The majority of children has failed to read books in recent times for entertainment. In this essay, I will explore the causes for these problems, and I will suggest a way that children can read more.

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Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

A considerable amount of people have opinion that government should allocate money on public services rather than on paintings, arts amd music, which is waste of money. I agree with this statement because there are many areas, especially villages where these services are not available such as roads, transportaion system, besides, institues for education and hospitals.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the fact that there is a deterioration in the number of animals and plants in various nations. To some extent, I would contend that there are abundant justifications, followed by some equivalent effective solutions to this severe problem.

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Some people think that online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Is Chris both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,there is an intensive debate about what is the effective way to learn our kids . While lots of individuals believe that internet reading items must be used for a toddler to show him how to read , others thought that just handbook has to be took. I completely agree with the initial attendance.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Global hunger is worsening at an unprecedented rate. Even though there are some developments to the production and distribution of foods, it seems that they are not enough to reduce the rate of people who suffer from hunger. This essay will discuss the causes of global hunger and what can be done to help.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The data shows a comparison between a university’s sport centre current setup and how it will be redesigned in the future. Overall, the sports centre will have a larger size and various additional features and facilities will be added to it.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of outweigh the disadvantages?

Countries with higher portion of elderly people have their own perks. The further explanation about this statement will be presented in this essay.

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Some people believe that having sports in schools is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that sports in school are a vital part of education. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people believe that including sport in school programs is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a crucial part of education.

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