IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 297

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays, the ratio of diseases triggered by manufactured foods has been increasing around the world. However, many people still prefer to eat them as the staple due to the inexpensive price. I strongly agree with the opinion that processed foods should be made more expensive than now.

This is a controversial issue regarding processed food as it contains high levels of unhealthy ingredients such as trans fat, sugars and sodium, which contribute to lifestyle disorders such as diabetes, hypertension and obesity. Although still some netizens believe in consuming frozen food because it is affordable, do not want to waste time in cooking. Although I agree with this statement to increase the prices of manufactured food items, I will explain with examples to support my views.

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In some coutries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them

Obesity has become an alarming problem due to less exercise and consumption of unhealthy food . There are many reasons behind this problem such as excessive use of electronic devices, busy schedules prefer fast food and inadequate urban planning. To tackle this problem, the government should build more parks and gyms; In addition, awareness campaigns of unhealthy habits. I will discuss the reasons and how to tackle this problem in the upcoming paragraphs with relevant examples.

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Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it isnecessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and poorest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern society the differences between the rarnings of the richest and poorest people has been an issue that sparks considerable debate amongst people. A majority of people believe that it is necessary to be small difference in the earnings between people. I strongly agree with this view and in this essay will provide reasons and example to support my opinion.

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Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary schoolsuch as reading,writing and math How far do you agree or disagree?

On a large scale , perhaps reading and writing and math or even sience look more important and basic than computer , but the world has changed today .

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

In today's world, learning a foreign language is an integral part of our daily lives for various reasons. While some people believe that main reasons are requirements for travelling or working in a different nations, others say that these are not the only causes. I firmly believe that learning a foreign language has cruical impact on our self-development such as able to exposure to new ideas or cultural understanding for wider perspective.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be change, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that humans are responsible for having detrimental effect on plants and animals which cannot be altered, while there are many people who think that this behaviour can be mitigated by introducing some actions for individuals. I opine that the onus should be on human who can make an effort to protect our biodiversity by considering it as a part of their life.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. what are the causes of this problem? How lo overcome il?

Nowadays, many people fail to maintain both of their work and lives due to the lack of discipline. However, there are many solutions to achieve this balance.

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Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Do you agree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It is widely argued that peers have more strong control than parents over the success of the children. In my view, I strongly disagree with this statement, since parental contribution is far more important than friendship owing to instill moral values among children by parents as well as continuous guidance.

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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this? How could more people be encouraged to come into the teaching profession?

Variety of jobs are occuring in the community nowadays. Doctors, technicians, police officers are all vital members in the society we cannot progress without. Teachers rank the first in all countries around the world, as they are the keys of knowledge and learning. The world today is exposed to a decline in the number of knowledge givers. This essay will shed a light on the reasons behind this and how could people be convinced to be involved into the teaching profession.

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Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Some people may thinks that globalization have a lot of positive advantages for business field especially for multinational companies. Beside of that, many people relize that globalization also brings a lot of drawbacks to the environment. This idea makes me agree that the globalization creates a new trend for some business in specific country for utilize bigger resources or opportunities from another country without thinking about the negative side for the environment.

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the last few years, variorum people utilising their available time to watch TV which has their lives become sedentary lifestyle also they become estranged. However, spending leisure time watching some beneficial programs are wholesome. I strongly agree that it causes detrimental impacts on our minds and well-being. This essay will discuss my views with supporting proof.

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Q. Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the last few years, variourum people utilising their available tame to watching TV by which their life become sedentary lifestyle also they become estranged. However spending leisure time to watch some beneficial programs are wholesome. I strongly agree that it causes detrimental impacts on our mind and well-being. This essay will discuss my views with supporting proofs.

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Nowadays people use social media to keep in touch with others and be aware of the news. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that people started to use social media for communication and watch news from smartphone to now what happens around them. It is undeniable that network become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find beneficial, while others consider everything associated with social media negatively. Surely, there are both pros and cons to internet but I believe adventages outweigh disadvantages.

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A country's future depend on its young people. Therefore, it is often argued that government should invest heavily in its youth. Do you agree or disagree?

Countries should spend a lot of time developing their youth. because, there are the countries future. I agree with spending on our young people. Because, they are going to be our future leaders and employees.

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Some companies have uniforms for their staff which must be worn at all times. What are the advantages for a company of having a uniform? Are there any benefits of having a uniform for the staff?

Many employers provide uniforms for their employees to wear always when they are working. It is beneficial for the company as well as workers. For the company, it helps to maintain hygiene and also enhance productivity at work by creating a sense of equality at work. However, it also gives a significant advantage to the worker.

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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children, while others think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that the government is in charge for the increase in obesity among younger generations, while there are many people who think that parents are responsible this health problem. I believe that parents are more in fault because children are highly influenced by their parents, they can be a good or bad influencer in child’s life.

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Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

It is often argued that testing on animals is essential need of medical science, however others opine that it should be banned as it is cruelity amongst them. I, personally believe animal medical testing should be banned as it is ethically wrong.

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More and more people understand the need for more diversity in science, technology, engineering, and mathematics (STEM) fields, but few women decide to study and work in STEM fields. Schools and universities should implement specific programs to encourage and support women in doing careers in STEM fields

Increasing diversity in STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics) is essential for fostering innovation and addressing complex global challenges. Despite growing awareness, the participation of women in STEM remains disproportionately low. This gender gap stems from various factors, including societal stereotypes, lack of role models, and limited access to resources and encouragement from an early age. Schools and universities play a crucial role in bridging this gap by implementing targeted programs that encourage and support women in pursuing STEM careers.

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These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, more and more people can travel various countries easily for sightseeing than before.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people say that governments should spend money looking for life on other planets. However, I strongly believe this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on Earth that need to be prioritized.

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