IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 296

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that when buying a product(for example, a mobile or cell phone) or choosing a service (e.g. medical treatment) , price is the most important thing to consider. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is claimed that price of the product or service is the primary thing to be evaluate before making the purchase. From my perspective, it is inaccurate notion which is believe by others. I will discuss this in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Issues related to wellness are frequently discussed these days. It is true that junk food are more attractive to purchase than clean eating at schools. While this trend offers certain advantages, I contend that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits. This essay will critically provide explanations and examples to support my viewpoint.

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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Others thinks face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The advancement in technolgy has been convenient in every manner. One of them is making new friends, social networks is a easy way to start talking to new people for individuals who lack communication skills and are shy in person. Though face to face interation is a vital element for friendships but social interation can become a initial step to make life long friends. In this essay, we will discuss weather internet interactions are safe for an individual or not.

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An increasing number of people do not know their neighbors, and there is no longer a sense of community. What do you think are the causes of this situation? Can you suggest some solutions?

In today's era , the number of individual who do not know their surrrounding people is increasing day by day and their is no longer sense of community between them . The main causes of this problem can be the busy schedule of masses and mobile era . The solutions related this problem will be defined in brief in upcoming paragraphs .

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Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this advancement of techology era has covered all parts of the globe including internet, medical programme and education.However , due to the improvement , there are some arguments among the public on whether this changed has lead to widen or unite the gap between the wealthy and unwealthy individuals. I believe that in this statement will bring equal to the communities which I will explain in the following paragraph.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate involving whether governments should support creative artists financially. While it is reasonable for governments to support artists, I do believe they can be funded by other channels.

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More and more people understand the need for more diversity in science, technology, engineering, and mathematics (STEM) fields, but few women decide to study and work in STEM fields. Schools and universities should implement specific programs to encourage and support women in doing careers in STEM fields.

In recent years, there is the huge demand for diversity in fields related to science, technology, engineering, and mathematics because a large number of women opt to start their careers in other fields. It is argued that particular programs and campaigns should be conducted to encourge and advocate women in pursuing jobs in STEM fields. I totally agree with this statement because many women have insights and potential talents that can contribute to breakthroughs in these fields as well as many corporations need more gifted people to improve the quality of their products despite of what their gender are.

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Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

Technology is increasing day by day and with this technology robots can free people from difficult and dangerous work. So this thing creates a lot of benefits .And on the second, Behalf some people are worried about the possible dangers which robots may create.

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Nowadays people live longer after they retire. How does this affect indivuals and society? what cana be done about this?

In recent times, there has been increased longevity in people after retirement, which has drawbacks on the society's economy and the families finances. This can be controlled by increasing the retirement age of the population.

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Nowadays an increasing number of people are working from home instead of going into the office. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In current times, there’s been a rapid surge in employees who prefers to work remotely from their homes rather than travelling to workplace. With fast pace life, people get minimal time to spend with their families. Hence, they avoid commuting to office and prefer to work from home to achieve work life balance. This essay will illustrate both advantages and disadvantage of this notion.

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The data below shows information relating to companies holding bank accounts in the British Virgin Islands. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The data illustrates the number of different countries that own various facts about businesses that hold money in bank accounts located in the British Virgin Islands (BVI). An initial analysis reveals that Switzerland leads the top 5 countries.

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These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

Media is the soft power for any nation nowadays. However, it is a weapon with two sides. It is agreed that violence on television has within it a bad effects on children's behaviour. Analysing the rapid increase of crime levels, as well as the change of the image of the offenders will prove this.

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If an individual acts in an anti-social way, such as committing the crime, who is to be blamed, society or the individual? what are the causes behind such behaviour? who should be responsible for this?

Knowledge of right and wrong makes it easy for every individual to choose what path to trade on. The society should take share in the blame but a person who commits crime should take the major blame. Although there are various factors leading to crime which ranges from person-influenced to society-induced, the individuals involved should face the consequences for their actions.

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The growth of online shopping will one day leasd to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that online shopping is getting popular, and as a result all shops will shutdown in towns and cities at one point. However, I firmly disagree with this statement because many online shopping websites are not trustworthy. Also, online shopping is not satisfying to all individuals.

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The only way to improve safety in our road is to give sticker punishment for driving offenses to what extent do you agree or disagree?

increasing the rate of deaths caused by traffic accidents, many people believe that only implementing new stricter laws can emhace the safe for commuters. In my opinion, I think there still have several ways to improve that problem.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?(KN)

Over the last few decades,using social media has risen dramatically in the world.It is clear that the usage of digital networking is affecting in every one's life.As a matter of fact there are a lot of various pros and cons of using social media for people.In this essay I will address some advantages and disadvantages of this and I will draw my own view.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Nowadays, some individuals state that less rubbish from house is reprocessed. They state that the government alone will increase recycling by legalising it to the public. In my view, I think that laws should be greatly introduced because they are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

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Nowadays, students sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals?

In the present pupils sleep fewer than they slept in the past. This essay will show the main cause of this problem is using their smartphones before they sleep, and the result of this is staying late and their bodies can not develop well.

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Full-time university students spend most of their time in class or working on assignments. However, some people think that it is important for students to get involved in non-academic activities on campus as well (for example, to join a sports team or take part in drama). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this era, the student in the university was spent more time to finish their assignment from lecture and attend the class, but several non-academic activity or extracurricular outside the class is imperative one. I am very agree with this statement because non-academic activity can increase the leadership skill and networking.

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Nowadays,children watch a lot of TV and play video games.However,some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child's mental health. In what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days,children tend to spend their major time,watching the TV besides playing video games.Although mankind,incorporating experts do not contradict with the aspect of 'the TV and video games should be restricted as it is detrimential for a child's mental health',I believe these technological activities must be pursued as it has more dominant pros than living without it.

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