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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Today our communication, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, everyone is addicted to technology, even old people. Individuals should know that there is life without technology. Even though it can help people in every situation.

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shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013.

The table illustrates the range of international visitors in 5 developed countries between the year 2012 and 2013. In this table there are two rows that present the number of travelers and the received income from their journey.

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Some university students wan to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some students studying at higher level in university may feel like looking into studying other subjects as an addition to their main subjects of focus. On the contrary, others argue that it is crucial to dedicate the entirety of their time and efforts to studying for a certain qualification at this level. Personally, I would argue that those studying at university should aim to study several subjects as this equips them with transferable skills, which can be very useful in a work environment.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent times, some people contend that taking alternative medicines and treatments could have a positive influence on various aspects, while others believe that it could lead to adverse detrimental repercussions. In this essay, I will address two diametrically opposed views and reason out the conclusion.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problem for governments. Other people think that there are benefits if society has more elderly population. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

In a lot of nations nowadays, it is the case that people die later than has ever been the case before. On the one hand, some people may feel this has propagated issues for the government. On the other hand, some people argue that there are clear advantages with a high prevalence of elderly people in the population. In this essay, I will argue that the declining youth population has mostly created devastating economic consequences for the government, as this forces them to increase their expenditure on public services.

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Some people believe government should spend money on New public buliding such as library and museum rather than renovating old buildings. To what extent do agree or disagree.

In the current era, with the startling pace of urbanization and modernization, new-built architectures spring off every day. Attitudes towards whether aged buildings should be refurbilshed or not vary from person to person. I personally reckon that governments should allocate more budgets on public infrustructure instead of renovation.

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More and more people want to buy brands with cloths ,cars and other items.What are the reasons? Do you think it is a pisitive or negative development?

Increasing number of individuals has the desire to purchase branded attires,vehicles and other things.The most promonent factor behind this is to show their social status and riches.In my perspective it is a negative progress because it is totally a wastage of money.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people contend that taking risks in their professional and individual ways could have a positive influence on variable aspects of our lives, while others believe that it could lead to unintentional detrimental consequences. In this essay, I will address two diametrically opposed views, and reason out a conclusion.

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Technology destoy social relationship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether the destruction of social relationship is the result of technological advancements is a highly debatable topic. The writer of this essay agrees with the statement because of the rise in social media, despite some who argues that computers discourage socialization.

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Finding job satisfaction is considered to be a luxury in many developing countries. Why do you think that is? Do you think job satisfaction is important? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern era, job and financial security have become integral parts of many humans as it fulfil their basic necessities. However, it is considered a posh thing, if people get a satisfied job. I will elaborate on my view by discussing the pros of job satisfaction.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

Currently, technological devices have become widely popular in societies, especially in youngsters. Many people believe that there are many benefits because of their functions and utilities, however, reliance on technology is a theat to our growth as human beigns. For this reason, I staunchly believe that cutting-edge technologies should be carefully used, and their widespread implement have many drawbacks. In this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

The majority of the countries have mandatory military services for young men after they complete their school. Some feel that this would be the best idea for all countries to have this system for men as well as women. This essay will disagree with this statement. Firstly it will discuss how this system will affect the young people to plan their career. Followed by this it will discuss what are all the problems that can be caused to the society.

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Developing countries require international organizations' help. Some people prefer financial aid while others think practical aid and advice are better. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although it is sometimes thought that growing nations require international organisation's help. some people believe that financial assistance is great option while others think that active and suggestions create a more sense. In my opinion, i consider that developing countries need practical aids and suggestions more rather than financial support.

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The advertisement promoting toys on television should be completely banned. How far you agree or disagree?

Advertisement plays an important role in the promotion of any product, and the best way to make an announcement is television. However, in this report, I will explain why I do not completely agree with the statement.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage money. Others argue that it is bette to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people opine that accepting the worst situation, like no contentmet with jobs or lack of money is the greatest approach whereas others think that it is far better to make an effort to upgrade such situations. I support the latter view. People have to face multitude of problems in their lives like workforce problem & so on. They should try to solve those problems, otherwise lives would be more disastrous.

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Some People Believe That Nowadays We Have Too Many Choices. To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree With This Statement?

In the modern era, the advanced development of technology provides individuals various options in living while some people consider that have exceeded our basic needs. However, I completely belive that multiple choices are being created nowadays, and this situation is beneficial to the overall social improvement.

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Write about the following topic: More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, the number of children who suffer from obesity are increasing, particularly in rich nations. There are several reasons that lead to this issue, and this phenomenon will have negative impact on children's health. The forthcoming essay shall discuss the causes and effects of this problem.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether uncharghed social works have to be obligatory for adolescentes or not is an essential issue of public debate. Although these tasks bring about many advantages, I will argue that the idea of forcing youngsters to do community service for free is not beneficial for students nor the socienty.

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some people think that eating meat is not healthy. To what extand do you agree or disagree?

The consumption of meat is considered as a unhealthy to eat by people. Although meat may consist some harmful elements, I believe that there are the advantages of eating meat daily.

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Today more and more people want things instanly (e.g. goods, service, news) why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

In modern day era with due to technological advancements, a large of communities want a growing demand of instant gratification about the goods and good service. This writer frimly belive this is the positive development since it can save so much effort and time as well and increasing the opportuinity of employment for local people.

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