IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 293

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. many of the problems young people now experience such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?

Internationally the women position have significantly changed in the last two decades, although this has boosted the world ecomony quite a bit, but this change have caused direct impact on children personal growth resulting in juvenile deliquency and other such problems. I partly agree with this statement as the women position in a family has changed, I believe men should understand the change the family dynamic and support family in other ways than financially. This essay will describe this change with reasoned examples.

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Young offenders should be treaated as adult criminal? to what extent do you agree or disagree

Juvenile offenders should not be treated as adult criminals. I disagree with the statement because of the following reasons. Youngsters are not as mature as their counterparts, peer-pressure in groups, and the transformation of behaviours in teen is easier.

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this era of showbiz we often encounter incidents, where famous faces are followed by media personals all the time. It is a matter of debate that whether it is a positive development or not. But, in my viewpoint it is a negative outcome of their fame and they must be given space to lead a normal life and the points to back my stance are elaborated in following paragraphs.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, a lot of people have a prolonged day of work, so it looks like they have no enough time to rest and to spend it with their family or friends. I think that this situation has more disadvantages for a several reasons.

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Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In this contemporary epoch, it is vital that every nation must provide free health services to its citizens for maintaining a healthy society. However, the medical treatments are relentlessly expensive due to which some people oppose this viewpoint. This essay will delve into the several reasons behind this statement and will lead to a logical conclusion as well.

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Some people think that government should not give international aid since they have disadvantages people like unemployment and homeless in their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, many people argue that various views about international aid for poor countries.

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Recycling is now an essential measure: it is time for everyone in society to became more responsible towards the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, our Earth planet suffering from a life-threatening issues due to the implementation of factorial and industrial processes during daily lives of inhabitants of each country around the world. Many people claim that, recycling becomes more useful and essential measure, apart from this all society members should become more responsible and self- conscious about nature and surrounding environment. I am quite inclined to this opinion and my arguments will support this view in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are some arguments about sharing information freely. Some people think that it is a good idea to give all information in hand in any section to other people while others believe that sharing this information is not a good idea. I personally believe that some information is too important to be shared freely.

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Some people say that the increasing business and cultural contract between countries is a positive development, while others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People hold different veiws whether international contracts give profit to native population or not. Some people claim that international contracts bring numarous benefits in many terms, others respond that there are more drawbacks in multicultural trade. Personally, while I do not refuse cross-border trade has multifold positiveness, meanwhile I accept this trend cause losing national identities.

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Too much attention is given to headline-grabbing disaster like earthquakes and floods. Governments should concentrate their resources on educating people about their risks they face nearer to home, which can cost far more lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.

It is undeniable that a headline-grabbing disaster such as earthquakes and floods is paramount for governments across the globe. Some people claim that this issue is exaggerated and there is more important educating people about other tragedies which have more victims. Personally, although I do not refuse this option, meanwhile, I believe two sides are vital for protecting lives.

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Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession. what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be done about it?

On a large scale , the best scenario is everyone start and continue the career related to their studying field . Of course , when you spend years to learn some skills about an occupation and then get hired in a non-related job then you had wasted your time .

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Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think they should be knocked down and give way to modem building. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that some people believe that the government is spending too much money in ancient buildings rather than giving a chance to modern buildings.while it is commonly held belief that investing in modern buildings may be more effective. there is also an argument opposes it.

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the pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The pictures illustrate the fifteen steps involved in making tomato ketchup, from picking the tomatoes to enjoying your food with some tasty tomato ketchup.

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There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, encouraging them to buy toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements put too much pressure on children, while some advertisements claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the advertisement of every products including toys and snacks for teenagers are easily available everywhere, not only in the TVs but also in the gadgets. Some people believe these advertisements will be dangerous children, while another group of thinkers support that there are bunch of useful details for children. Personally, I completely agree with the first statement, and in this essay, I will discuss the supported arguments.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Whether experimentation on animals should be banned or encouraged, is a difficult question to answer. I believe, that there are many advantages when it comes to inquiring scientific data and helping research move forward. However, there are alternative methods to explore, without the need to experimenet on animals.

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Write an essay of 250 words on the topic below. You have 30 minutes. ( May 2023) People are working harder and longer hours in our modern society. That means they are also earning more money for themselves and their families. But does this lead to a happier society? Why, or why not? Discuss your ideas and support them with reasons and examples

In modern days, people always seek for the happiness. As a result, it is very common that people want to earn more money by working harder. I side those who feel that money could not buy happiness. Moreover, it could lead another problem that make them more suffer, so in this essay I will elaborate my argument for two main reasons.

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Today tourism is one of the world’s biggest industries, and many poorer countries are depending more and more on tourism for their economy. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of having a large number of tourists visiting a country?

With tourism being one of the largest industries, counties are becoming more reliable on attracting tourists in order to strenghten their economy. There are many advantages and disadvantages to being a popular country among tourists with negative effects being in the lead.

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It seems like you're writing an essay about the debate on building new homes in the countryside versus preserving the natural environment. Here's a rewritten version of your text with corrected grammar and clarity:

"In today's developing era, new shelters are essential for individuals, but space limitations pose a significant future concern. As a result, more space is being utilized to construct new buildings in the countryside. While some people believe it's crucial to protect the countryside and not build new homes there, I agree with the latter statement. There are several reasons to develop new houses in rural areas.

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree or disagree?

Having the opportunity to study English in an English-speaking country can be a big advantage when it comes to learning a new language. I mostly agree that is can be a very effective way of learning, however, there are many other methods a person can try to reach the same results.

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Vehicles should be driven by computers, not by people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, there are conflicting opinions about using auto-transportation to replace vehicles controlled by people. I completely agree with this view and I will explain the the reasons behind this aforementioned opinion in two paragraphs below.

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