IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 298

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the function of extra classes after school. Now people are beginning to realize that education is extremely crucial for society. Personally, I tend to think that courses are beneficial for children.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and your own opinion.

Some people believe that nowadays people are more count on each other while some others think that people become autonomous. Although it can be argued that more people who depend on but I think in social life, more and more young generation are self-reliant.

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

Whether local business is now competitive with large supermarkets and online shopping is quite concerning. This problem relates to the development of technology and human needs but can be solved by applying advertisements around the area.

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The friends that children have are a very important part of their lives. What kinds of influence may children's friends have on them? What can parents do to ensure that their children's friends are a good influence on them?

It is generally agreed that peer’s pressure is inevitable, since kids are raised up in the society and contact other children daily. The impact friends have on the young people can be both beneficial and disastrous, depending on numerous circumstances. However, I firmly believe that parents may set certain conditions to provide positive influence of others on their offspring, such as instilling the right values in them and teaching them to think independently.

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Some people argue that schools are competitive and it is creating a bad impact on children, whereas others say that the competitive surroundings provide motive for the students to succeed. I believe that the competitive environment are creating more stress and negative impact on childrens. This essay will discuss how this environment is creating stress to the childer and followed by that it will discuss how it encourages children to achieve.

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Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While many believe that children should study all subjects at school, others argue that they should only study subjects they perform well or interested. Both point of view and reason why I agree with the former statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this statement.

In this modern era, every mankind is fulled with numerous options. This fact is inevitable. I Partially agree with this statement and uphold my thoughts with appropriate examples in upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands. To what extent the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands.

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in many countues , a small numbe of people earn extremly high salaries . Some people belive that this is good for the country , but others think that goverment should not allo salaries above a certain level

Only a few per cent of employees' salaries are higher in many states. Although, it will be motivation for low statistic residents, they would be frustrated with some financial dependence .

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Some people argue that art, such as paintings and music are a waste of money and and the government should spend this money on pubic service To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although, the state ought to use the capital on creating employments along the nations, however, music bring excitement as well as painting provides nice image of the city which persuade tourists to visit the place.Therefore, I personally disagree that the adminstration must spend cash on construction of roads and railway lines or paying public workers.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Children are a great imitator. They tend to follow peoples behaviors without knowing whether it is good or bad action. It is becoming crucial for their surrounding such as parents or teacher to teach youngster to differentiate what is right or wrong from an early age. I would argue that disciplining the youth misbehaviors by giving them punishment is necessary. However, it is important to note that parents and teachers should sanction children bad action without traumatizing them and is harmless.

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The presence of technology in the classroom has become more and more apparent and offers students tremendous resources with which to supplement their education. Given time, technology will completely replace the traditional teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

In general by passing time students get involved deeply with devices, apps and artificial intelligence in school,hence, some people blive that technology is going to delete the old school ways of teaching and even the teachers. Although this imagine is unbelievable, I certainly agree with it.

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Money ought to be spent on new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, new public buildings are increasing steadily in different areas. Also the existing one is continue to deteriorate. Undoubtedly, there are some people who believe that money should spent on new establishments rather than restructuring the previous one. In my opinion, I slightly disagree with this notion.

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Some people regard video games as useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

In this technological era, myriad people deem that if video games played by the people than it succour them education knowledge while other believe that it has negative impact on the people. I believe playing video games in tremendous amount has a more pros. I will elaborate on my notion in forthcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very importatnt for people. Why misht this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It has been seen that people belong to certain nations prefer to buy thier own house rather than living into the rented property. There are few logical reasons behind this preference. According to me, securing your own place for residing is one of the positive situation. I would like to shed some light in this matter in the following paragraphs.

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More and more people use private motorbikes or cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With a startling pace of worldwide technology and economy deveoplment in recent decades, private automobiles find its way to almost every family. This prevalent trend are causing problems such as overcrowded traffic, vast pollution and high rate of road accidents. In this essay, I will talk about the reasons of this trend and the solutions to tackle the issues.

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"Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs." To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Volunteering service should be mandatory in school education, I completely agree with this statement as it will help pupils to become self-confidence. I will explain it in brief in the next paragraphs.

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Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Most people dislike the changes that are happening either in their community or in their own life and needed them to stay the same. Firstly this essay will discuss about the mindset of people who want their surrounding to stay the same. Followed by that it will discuss why the change should be consided as positive.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advatanges of having an ageing population outweigh the disavantages?

Expectancy of life has increased dramatically during the last decades as well as there are more prevalent of chronic diseases. For this reason, many scientists argue that longevity has more drawbacks, however, many others believe that aging population represents wisdom. From my perspective, I considere that demerits outweigh merits, and in this essay, I explain in detail my reasons.

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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that It should be change the old building to the modern building to save the money spend for protecting and repairing. From my point of view, I agree with this idea for many reasons,described in the following paragraph.

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