IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 355

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In many parts of the world, there is not enough food for everyone. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Insufficient food become a problem in many countries. Having said that, many people can not fulfill their needs, which is food that contains nutrion. The causes of this issue are lack of water resources and the land is arid. However, there are some ways that the government can do to tackle this problem, such as doing import meals from another country.

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Have you ever considered how to recover from school before attending a university or getting employment experience? It's common knowledge that having your parents push you to attend college after high school offers some benefits, but it also has drawbacks. This essay will examine the benefits and drawbacks of young people working or traveling for a year in between high school graduation and college enrollment, and it will do so in a rational manner.

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The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health. To what extent do you agree with these views?

Obesity is the first step that can leads us to many health problems in future. Nowadays, there is surge in the weight of children in many prosperous countries. According to some people it is mainly due to increased in number of junk food intake whereas, other believe that it's parents responsibility to look after their kid's wellness. In my opinion, they both are right and I completely agree with both statements. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will shed light in some points to justify my opinion.

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Many people one weitten tengsagain ass formal and me way Wha dinadopment have schvantages and advantages

Significant number of individuals prefer utilising informal form of speech in writing. Using less formal language might simplify communication between persons and make it more friendly. However, it also may lead to loss of professionalism and establish increasing of vocabulary.

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The most important element in a person’s life is their work. Without a satisfying career, life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays working is a cornerstone in our life. Some people argue that the presence of asatisfying job is crucial and gives more meaning to our lifes. I agree with the statement, In this essay I will discuss my argument followed by reasons and examples.

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some people agree with studying at home is better than studying at libraries, what do you think? do you agree or diagree

Some poeple believe that it is better to study at home than libraries. They believe that home is more convienent and they feel more comfortable while studying. I tend to disagree with the given idea and think that libraries are much better choice comparing to your own bedrooms for so many reasons.

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Topic : children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

In this modern day,kids have been lining increased pressures from various issues of their existence,such as social,academics and commercial.This essay will analyse the reasons of pressures and suggest steps to less them.

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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this¬? What solutions can you suggest?

It is clear that nowadays except the big amount of gyms in cities, the part of citizens prefer slow pace life, although experts suggest that this may lead to numerous health problems.In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why this might be the case and put several solutions to tackle these issues.

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In the past, lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach in teaching?

These days online lectures and gadgets during classes are a common thing thanks to the progress of technology. New technologies have essential benefits as teaching despite a long distance and better opportunities for both teachers and students. However, it has some drawbacks for health and is not affordable for everyone.

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it was predicted that people living in the twenty-first century would have more free time than ever before because of improvement in technology. To what extent has this prediction come true?

Due to the advent in technology, a future in which individuals would have more leisure time than in the past has been in trajectory for a period of time. In my opinion, in present days, this prediction has become a reality to some extent for certain group of population, while there is the other who must work harder and have less free time than before.

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Some governments say how many children a family can hare in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

Some countries in the world have a higher number of people and in other countries is not the same case because governments say how many children a family can hare in their country. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. some people suppose that It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. In my opinion, it is a necessary action from the government for some reasons.

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Traditions are about the past and innovation is about the future, and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for the sake of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? What role should traditions have in our lives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

t is said that tradition belongs to the past and people should put it aside to keep innovating for a better future. I completely agree with this argument because many tradition customs are outdated and rarely verified by any reliable scientific evidence whether it is effective or not. As a result, I believe that people should consider traditional customs as a useful advice to maintain their social relationships.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Science plays an important role in solving environmental problems and improving the quality of people's lives. I totally agree with the statement that the primary aim of science should be to improve the activity of human beings.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buy them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home

It is universally acknowledged that house is one the significant necessity in life. In the modern era, people are able to opt their houses differently, renting or owning homes. Despite all benefits of possessing houses, renting weights more than having. The following essay will express benefits and drawback of this phenomenon.

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Being famous on the Internet is a good because of some reasons Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, many people have been posting their videos on the internet for being famous. According to me, there are more upsides than drawbacks to put videos on the internet.

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

I believe it's due to the fast development of technology. Back to industrialization era, machines replace human work. For instance, in the past, we had to weave by our hands. However, there's a lot of sewing machines which save time for the employers, because of the advancement of science and technology.

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Older generation often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thoughts and behavior. Most people argue that it is not helpful for younger generations to prepare for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is a trend for vast majority of people to hold an opinion that the previous generation usually have ultra traditional thinking about how people should live and behave. However, other people think that these ideas are not so useful to prepare new generations for modern life. This essay completely agrees with that statement, because old and young generations lived in different time with completely another mentality. Moreover, over time, in our world there are changes in some rules that old generations do not recognize.

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Being able to speak a foreign language is an advantage these days. Some people think that children should start learning a foreign language at primary school, while others think children should begin in secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinio

With advancement in technology, the education system has also revolutionised which eventually has changed the demands of job market as well. Knowing more than one language for communication is always good. Some people are of the opinion that new languages should be introduced earlier whereas others believe that it should be taught in secondary classes. This essay will discuss both sides and then give opinion.

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

We live in a world with growing contrast between countries in terms of wealth and acces to welfare. Hence, the treatment of severe illness is polarising depending of the region you live in. If you are lucky to have a good health system, the probability of dying from or even suffering certain diseases are minimun. By contrast, living in an undeveloped nation does not allow you to have the required treatments, is this fair for them?

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Some people believe that governments should ban dangerous sports. Others claim that they should have freedom to choose their favourite activities. Discuss both views and present your opinion.

Recently, there has been a lot of debate about the emergence of dangerous sports in the worldwide. Some argue that goverment shoud take a note on this activity, while others have a different perspective that people should be freely to choose what they like to do. Therefore, I will discuss my point of view in the following essay.

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