IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 356

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Obesity is an ever-growing pandemic that is affecting more and more of the world’s population. The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this issue be resolved?

Nowadays obesity has became a growing problems that affects many people around the world. Not only causing serious health problems such as cardial or digestive diseases, but it also reduces people's quality of life by damaging their self-image and self-confidence. Obesity can be attributed to several reasons, and some viable solutions that can be adopted to alleviate the situation will be outlined in this essay.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

Access to computers have significantly widespread, and numbers of children who play video games noticeably increased in this century. As a result of this, children became tendency of violent and numerous diseases occurred, such as obesite and hearth diseases. This issue will be discussed in this essay along with some possible solutions that may be implemented to alleviate the bad effects.

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In some societies, it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports, special diets, or preventative medicine conventional or alternative. Some people, however, believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life.

Nowadays, many people think that they should live a normal life rather than trying to do more exercise or eating healthy food to stay in shape and have good fitness. I partly disagree with this opinion and here are the reasons why:

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Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few people are of the opinion that advent in technology and internet has connected people irrespective of their residence while others contradict that it has developed a gap between human resulting in bereft of direct communication causing a distress in their relationship. My opinion is divided and reasonings shall be discussed in the following passages.

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Some people think that the amount of noise people may have to be controlled strictly. Others, however, say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Voice pollution is recongized as the indispensable problem that individuals have to encounter with in theri daily lives. People have different views concerning about whether to control the amount of noise made by human rigorously. From my perspective, I think the sound made by citizens are supposed to be supervised strictly.

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Some countries have implemented mandatory community service programs for young people. In these programs, children aged 16 to 18 do charity work, help old people or work with animals. What are some advantages and disadvantages of this for young people?

In the present, teenagers don't communicate with each other as much as they can. Some countries have implemented mandatory community service program.In these programs, young people do charity work,help old people or work with animals. These activities have advantage and disadvantage from this following paragraphs,

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Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The question of whether death penalty can be abolished or it is a necessary punishment for monstrous crimes has become a subject of debate. The writer believes that the injustice of the court and the criminals deserve a second chance are the reasons why the death penalty should be abolised. By contract it is not a justice method for victims.

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Many parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, the parents and their children relationship are so different. It is argued that, the majority of mothers and fathers imply immense pressure on their offspring to make them successful. I strongly disagree with this behavior due to the number of negative effects that could have on children confident and mental health.

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The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life of city dwellers be maintained?

Encouraging urbanization as a solution to traffic and shipment issues poses both benefits and challenges, particularly concerning the effects of rapid community growth in metropolis and the maintenance of city dwellers' aspect of life.

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Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this day and age, it is thought by some people that kindergarten is the best suitable for offspring. Others, however, hold the opinion that family meeting such as offspring’s grandparents will be more useful in caring for their grandchildren. From my personal perspective, I believe that offspring should be in the care of both family meeting and babysitting heart to ensure their mental and physical health are well-being.

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It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Living in a society, our identification are usually strongly influenced by others' opinion and reaction. While it is true that we often define ourselves by others' perspectives, it is also crucial to avoid the social tags from confining us and our possibilities.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In modern society, more and more highlights are given to the young while the money of authority should be expenditure on outdoor activities for youngsters. It is the opinion of this writer that it is better to administration to spend the income on the leisure activities of the child rather than give too much for schooling because of stress in learning and lack of social skills.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays , some people believe that the government should be invested money to break time activity of the young that becoming an important decision to young people education. From my perspective, I totally agree with the statement for some reasons.

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In some countries old age is highly valued, while in others youth is emphasized. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is thought by some people that the elderly is highly appreciated in some nations, while others believe that youth is important. The writer of this essay argues that young workers are more essential than the old due to their plenty of health and the wide range of soft skills.

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Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activities of young age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People argue that should use government budget to invest on leisure activities for the youngster rather than concentrate too much on education. This essayist is fond of such state and will give reasonable evidence.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

It must be acknowledged that the number of fauna and flora is diminishing from all over the globe. The writer believes that it is due to the overpopulation in human society and this can be addressed by raising public’s awareness and punishing people who pose a risk on the ecosystem.

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Parents will provide food and housing to their children throughout their lives. However, when parents become old, many children do not want to take care of them, and will instead send them to a nursing home or leave them alone. Do children have a duty to take care of their elderly parents? Or should someone else be responsible?

Although taking care of elderly parents is a crucial mission of the children, there is still some rejection coupled with sending the older to social houses among those children. This writer believes that the children should assuume the responsibilities of maintaining a sustainable living standard for their parents instead of the government owing to proving the humanity along with the reduction of financial burden on the local authorities.

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Too much emphasis on is given for educaton of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern age, especially living in the ceaseless developments of the world, education becomes the compulsory obligation of young generations. Therefore one supposes that it is worthy to spend money on education while there is a controversial opinion about the insufficient handout of leisure activity for

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is decling. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Recently, flora and fauna throughout the world is getting more and more deteriorated, which results in the decrease in their amount. This problem has occurred for a long time due to human activities in fulfilling desires. Despite that, it can be resolved by organizing preservation both in lab and nature.

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In many countries, the number of animals adn plants is decling. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

The assumption of wild animals and plants are being decreased. Due to having deforestation without permission, the problem is becoming worse. However, the problems can be tackled by generating some heavy rules with significant punishment.

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