IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 353

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Children facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Causes and solutions.

Children have overbearing burden in their academics, social life as well as in commercial settings. Globalisation and increased parents’ expectations contribute immensely to this pressure while a well established parent-child relationship and a decreased expectation from a child can ameliorate the problem extensively. In this essay, I will elucidate on these multifarious contributing factors and proposed solutions.

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Memorizing facts is the most important way to succeed in Education. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although memorizing facts has always had a big role in the education system, it still isn’t the sole factor for success. In my opinion, enhancing your knowledge requires a set of skills that extend far beyond just memorization. For example, understanding key concepts is more significant because it encourages critical thinking.

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The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuels. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Increasing the fuel costs is one of the suitable solutions to tackle the global environmental issues. I strongly agree with this statement because it will decrease a great number of environmental contaminations.

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Most societies are based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they wanted, society could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of communities follow some rules and regulations. It is argued that, if people of society were not monitored, it would cause some problems. I completely agree with this statement because laws provide secure and peaceful environment for nation which helps individuals to progress.

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MENU Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

In recent times, there has been a significant rise in the number of people rearing pets. While some claim that it is hazardous and not healthy to keep them, others argue that keeping pets has potential benefits on kids. This essay will delve into both perspectives impartially,without favouringone side over the other.

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Nowadays, people make new friends using social media and internet chat groups. Some of them believes that is good. Other people thinks that face-to-face conversation is beneficial. Discuss both sides

Currently, social media and internet is made placed for making friends by chat group. some people argued that is acceptable, Meanwhile, other people have opinion that face-to-face conversation is very essentials. This essay will discuss both of view.

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Fewer and fewer people today write by hand using a pen or pencil. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, we live in an epoch of computers, smartphones and the internet. For that reason, writing by hand is gredually vanishing over time. The tendency has disadvantages and advantages. In this essay, the both points will be represented.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some societies, there is a belief that they told children that they can reach to anything in the future if they try as hard as they can for their goals. Creating hope and a reason for hard effort is the merits if this idea. However, by not achieving the goals, they may become dissapointed and hopeless as its demerits.

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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, parents tend to pay more attention to their works, while their children stay without due upbringing and oversight. It claims to be a huge problem in social sector of our civilisation. Therefore, I am agreed that there is a rise in teenagers' issues related to the deficit of attention from their parents. A major growth in the quantity of adolescents in the crime and suicides in the 21st century will prove this.

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Obesity is an ever-growing pandemic that is affecting more and more of the world’s population. The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth of overweight people in society? How can this issue be resolved?

Nowadays obesity has became a growing problems that affects many people around the world. Not only causing serious health problems such as cardial or digestive diseases, but it also reduces people's quality of life by damaging their self-image and self-confidence. Obesity can be attributed to several reasons, and some viable solutions that can be adopted to alleviate the situation will be outlined in this essay.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

Access to computers have significantly widespread, and numbers of children who play video games noticeably increased in this century. As a result of this, children became tendency of violent and numerous diseases occurred, such as obesite and hearth diseases. This issue will be discussed in this essay along with some possible solutions that may be implemented to alleviate the bad effects.

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In some societies, it is increasingly common to try to achieve good health and fitness through physically demanding sports, special diets, or preventative medicine conventional or alternative. Some people, however, believe that the best way to stay fit and healthy is simply to lead a normal life.

Nowadays, many people think that they should live a normal life rather than trying to do more exercise or eating healthy food to stay in shape and have good fitness. I partly disagree with this opinion and here are the reasons why:

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Some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities have become more isolated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Few people are of the opinion that advent in technology and internet has connected people irrespective of their residence while others contradict that it has developed a gap between human resulting in bereft of direct communication causing a distress in their relationship. My opinion is divided and reasonings shall be discussed in the following passages.

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Some people think that the amount of noise people may have to be controlled strictly. Others, however, say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Voice pollution is recongized as the indispensable problem that individuals have to encounter with in theri daily lives. People have different views concerning about whether to control the amount of noise made by human rigorously. From my perspective, I think the sound made by citizens are supposed to be supervised strictly.

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Some countries have implemented mandatory community service programs for young people. In these programs, children aged 16 to 18 do charity work, help old people or work with animals. What are some advantages and disadvantages of this for young people?

In the present, teenagers don't communicate with each other as much as they can. Some countries have implemented mandatory community service program.In these programs, young people do charity work,help old people or work with animals. These activities have advantage and disadvantage from this following paragraphs,

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Some people believe that capital punishment should never be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The question of whether death penalty can be abolished or it is a necessary punishment for monstrous crimes has become a subject of debate. The writer believes that the injustice of the court and the criminals deserve a second chance are the reasons why the death penalty should be abolised. By contract it is not a justice method for victims.

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Many parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, the parents and their children relationship are so different. It is argued that, the majority of mothers and fathers imply immense pressure on their offspring to make them successful. I strongly disagree with this behavior due to the number of negative effects that could have on children confident and mental health.

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The best way to solve the traffic and transportation problem is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What are the effects of rapid population growth in the city? How can the quality of life of city dwellers be maintained?

Encouraging urbanization as a solution to traffic and shipment issues poses both benefits and challenges, particularly concerning the effects of rapid community growth in metropolis and the maintenance of city dwellers' aspect of life.

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Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this day and age, it is thought by some people that kindergarten is the best suitable for offspring. Others, however, hold the opinion that family meeting such as offspring’s grandparents will be more useful in caring for their grandchildren. From my personal perspective, I believe that offspring should be in the care of both family meeting and babysitting heart to ensure their mental and physical health are well-being.

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It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Living in a society, our identification are usually strongly influenced by others' opinion and reaction. While it is true that we often define ourselves by others' perspectives, it is also crucial to avoid the social tags from confining us and our possibilities.

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