IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 350

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Prison is the comman way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

Beberapa orang percaya bahwa para profesional, seperti dokter, profesional teknis dan insinyur, harus diizinkan bekerja di negara lain setelah menyelesaikan pelatihan mereka, sementara yang lain berpendapat bahwa mereka harus diwajibkan bekerja di negara tempat mereka menerima pendidikan dan pelatihan. Esai ini akan mengeksplorasi kedua pandangan ini dan berpendapat bahwa mereka harus diwajibkan bekerja di negara tempat mereka menyelesaikan pelatihan. Di satu sisi, mereka yang mendukung kebebasan para profesional untuk bekerja di negara mana pun percaya bahwa hal ini memungkinkan terjadinya pertukaran pengetahuan dan gagasan global yang lebih baik. Hal ini juga memberikan para profesional peluang karir yang lebih baik dan kemampuan untuk bekerja di lingkungan yang mungkin lebih sesuai dengan minat dan kebutuhan pribadi mereka. Selain itu, dengan kemajuan teknologi, banyak profesional dapat bekerja dari jarak jauh, yang memungkinkan mereka bekerja dari mana saja di dunia. Di sisi lai...

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime level?

The number of young people committing acts of violence in this society is increasing. This phenomenon is thought to be caused by the younger generation's low education level. A feasible solution to this problem is to provide educational benefits to the less fortunate

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Challenge 5: Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is no denying the fact that many kids lay out hours each day on screen time. This essay will discuss the reasons beyond this and evaluate whether it is a positive or a negative development for individuals and society as a whole.

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Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. They think all health problems can just by ‘fixed’ by visiting doctors. What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?

In todays' world, popularity of going doctor has increased for any illnesses. Many individuals do not know what to do when they get sick and this could be a major problem to health system. There are some solutions to fix this issue.

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Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games waste their time. What are the advantages and disadvantages of computer games? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People have different views about whether playing digital games helps the children to enhance useful skills or it is just a time waste. I shall analyse both the views while i prefer the former.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The left picture displays the current layout of Southwest Airport, while the right picture illustrates the planned changes for next year.

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Many jobs used to be done at home by hand, but now a days an increasing number of them are done using machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

With the 4.0 era, technologies have become more common in several jobs by using modern machines, while using people's abilities for doing jobs was applied a lot in the previous decades. This essay will explain both the benefits and drawbacks which come with this situation.

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The government spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

In this modern era, a eourmous amount of currency is spend on discovering whether life on planets other than Earth is possible or not by the higher authorities. Regarding this, numerous individuals argue that due to this a large sum of money is wasted by the law makers and this money should be utilize to tackle public problems. However, I am partially agree and dis agres with the given view and my stance is further discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

Traditionally , humans and animals always friendly relationship. And they always helped each other . Until now there are plenty distinguish views about keeping among the people. Majority of people believe that having a pet benefits them. However some people refer to that it may harmful for their children . In my opinion the pros outweight the cons of having pets

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Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums and art galleries are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that visiting museums and art galleries are not necessary as majority of the sources about culture and history are available in the internet. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that existance of museums and art galleries are crucial.

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Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The notion that formal education guarantees superior knowledge compared to self-directed learning merits a nuanced response. While traditional institutions offered an undeniable advantage in the past due to limited resources, the democratization of information in the modern era compels a reevaluation.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The maps show recreation area facilities, consisting of two gates; the upper one for Arnold Avenue and below for Eldon Street, flowers, water feature, performing area, and places to sit. I will discuss the changes occurred during the present moment compared to the time when Grange Park was initially established.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

Now a days, due to advancement in technology, many working professionals are able do their work remotely, at coffee shop or home, away from their work office. Although this modern technology have many advantages, it also creates health and relationships problems.

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Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in society today. How important is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

In recent years, some state that people have to be ambitious to be a great part of society. In my opinion, this idea is quite crucial because of a certain reason that I mention in this essay, and the characteristic is considered as both positive and negative personality.

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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, popularity of working abroad has rapidly increased. Global world provides oppurtunity to individuals for working abroad. People believe that leaving country for working abroad has both advantages and disadvantages.

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Many people prefer to stay in the same type of work all their life, whereas others prefer to change the type of work. Discuss both sides and state your own opinion.

In today's world, individuals like to explore more professional opitions.It is considered by some that changing field of work is better, while there are others who thinks that choosing the same kind of work is more stable. In my opinion, combination of the two is the best way forward.

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With a growing population many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM foods. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of doing this?

In recent years, the human population has rapidly increased. Because of the growing population, individuals need more food. Some people argue that producing GM meals has some advantages. However, others think that there are a lot of disadvantages for the public.

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Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification.

Recently , the major of universities has providied additional subjects for their students.whilst these subjects may have advantages, others argue that it is should give all interesting in studying the main majors. This essay discusses both views, and finally l will draw my own opinion.

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Some people think that robots are important for humankind's future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, digital technologies have become more sophisticated in human society. Hence, it is argued that robots are significant for community development, others consider that they bring detrimental effects to people. We will discuss both views which are elucidated in the following paragraphs.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of poverty has sparked a heated debate among many. It is widely argue that the most poor contries ometimes need a financial support from more successful ones. It is notion without its critisizm, because the origination of poverty issues might relate to completely different area. I am firmly of the beliefs that a support from the another government should be more complex and consists of few parts.

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