IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 384

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is better if an extended family for example uncle aunt grandparents are involved in a child upbringing than just parent alone. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Upbring is a crucial factor to determine child’s personality, and its variety becomes more broad than before. Some believe that extended family should assist a child upbringing while others say that it should be done only by parents. In my point of view, though I partly agree with that parents need to educate their children by own, it has some profits that grandparents help this.

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scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Whether educating community about the effects of fast food on one's physical health like scientists have identified or using other efficient methods is a highly effective discussion point. However, from this prior experience, it is more better to teach the public about the hazard that these foods cause, despite of those who believe that this way will not useful.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has become increasingly prevalent for people to accept the painting and drawing courses in high schools. Each has its own perks; thus, I partly agree with this view and discuss the reasons as follows.

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Some people think that climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think it provides more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Climate change has become one of the biggest threat to the human extinction, however, many businessmen think that this threat provides more opportunities to their respective businesses whereas some think contrary. In my opinion, climate change has adversly affect the business around globe because of certain reasons.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV dramas are becoming more and more popular? Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In contemporary days, crime novels and TV dramas are becoming more popular in the majority of the countries. Firstly, this essay will discuss the reason why these books and TV shows are becoming popular. Following that it will discuss my opinion on crime fiction and TV crime dramas.

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Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

In recent years, most of the countries are fighting against housing crisis across the globe. This essay will discuss two main causes of homelessness including lack of economic statbility and rise in population. This essay will suggest two solutions to this problem including effective financial management and infrastructure improvement.

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In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? How to change their views？

In a handful of countries, citizens believe that tourists from other nations are not good for their country. These views are due to certain number of reasons which are to be addressed by the local governments and other governing bodies. This essay depicts reasons for these views and things required to change the point of view of host people.

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Some people believe that the government should financially support retired people. Others feels that those who have retired should pay to support themselves. Discuss both these points and give your own opinion.

Some individuals agrue that administrations ought to extend monetary aid for those who retired, while others believe that they should self-support. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?

Every person at one time in life decides to do something new. When it comes to shopping, some prefer to visit malls, shops and various stores to find and buy products they might like. however there is a specific group of people who are really choosy about their choice. These people may end up wasting hours to find what they like or simply prefer to order online if it's listed on a digital forum.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The prospective of declining human's health is a modern day concern but how much will it decline in the future is unpredictable. The decline of both physical and mental health could be accelerated or either slown down by several factors. In the essay below I will discuss about the consequences and expect to agree.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Some are of the opinion that shows on Tv and certain destructive games on computers have detrimental effects on society, while others contradicts, saying they have mere effects on people. I strongly believe that media plays a crucial role in shaping our minds and I will explain my reasonings in the following passages.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays, with the increasing usage of the internet, websites replaced newspapers. I firmly agree due to some justifications and will discuss the main causes of this phenomenon as well as support them with examples.

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Some people think that social media platforms are useful for business and making new friends, while others think that such websites are harmful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.

Social media is the talk to the decade, which points out two opinion one describes opportunities in multiple business & bringing people closer and the other shows harmful aspects of it. To describe the issue in hand I would like to present advantages and disadvantages of social media.

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Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?

The intricate interplay between an accomplished individual and their native region constitutes a dynamic relationship of profound significance. Undoubtedly, one's upbringing within a specific locale imbues them with distinct values, perspectives, and opportunities, sculpting their trajectory towards success. Varied factors such as the caliber of educational infrastructure, economic prospects, cultural ethos, and communal support networks diverge significantly across regions, exerting a pivotal influence on an individual's journey to achievement.

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Nowadays, as women and men have to work full-time household duties should be equally divided. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that if both sexes have their full time jobs then they need to share the responsibility of household chores for a happy and hormonious life and I am totally agree with the statement given.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, it is often said investing big amount of money in building new rapid railway lines for among cities is very important. The alternative view is the budget should be used for upgrading the existing public transportation. In my opinion, Jakarta citizen is highly dependent to existing public transport, hence I strongly agree the money would be beneficial to refine current public transport.

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Healthcare should always be funded by governments, and it should always be free for people to use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?

One of the basic human rights is the access to medical care when needed, it is a garenteed right by the Genovee convection. However, in the capitalist world we live in today, healthcare serveices became increasingly expensive. I strongly advocate that government shall cover the medical expenses of all the population, though I am aware of the obstecles that makes this idea seem utopian.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, some children spend most of their time using their smartphones. This phenomenon has been one of the major issue in the world. Although there are some positive effects, I believe this trend might provide negative influences on children.

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The debate exists on whether young people should have the freedom to select their own profession or if they should adopt a pragmatic approach, considering their future more seriously. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that teenagers should be able to choose freely their future profession, while others consider a pragmatic approach make youngster's outlook on future more responsible. In my opinion, having the freedom to choose is the best way for pupils to follow their dreams.

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Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to be a good citizen or worker rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that teaching students to be a good citizen better than teach them to knopw only individuals profits. For my perspective, I completely agree with this statement, and the following example will be provided in order to support my point of view.

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