IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 388

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that children should play outdoor games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, learning foreign languages is becoming trendy in academic sectors, and parents are frantically wanting their children to study certain languages. However, it is argued that some pupils have no talent for learning extra languages because of brain memory limitations or because they are lazy. And, if students are not offered to learn, institutions should not put pressure on them to do so. In my point of view, I completely disagree with this statement because language is the key to opening the world.

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both those views and give your own opinion.

I strongly disagree with putting children into paid work. There are a lot of disadvantages to this kind of nature and I will give you two reasons. First of all, they are easily exploited. Most of them, if not all, do not know their rights as a worker. They might be given longer work hours for lower pay. Second, senior coworkers will abuse them while at work. These abuses can be scarring and can lead to trauma in their life later on.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Over the last few years, the question whether work for the same organisation and work for different organisation debated among people has become one of the most controversial ones in many parts of the world. While some people strongly support the opinion that many individuals prefer to work for the same organization , there are other people who think that some people argue that working for different organisations is beneficial. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and try to draw some conclusions.

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Success is often measure by wealth and material belonging. Do you think wealth is best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

In the contemporary era, physical possession of assets and monetary value are among the most prevalent factors that determine a person's success level. It is my contention that although high economical status is an effective tool to measure the success, there are some other alternative indicators such as physical shape, wisdom and discipline to address how accomplished a person is.

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If some people get a chance to choose between life without work in spending most of the time working, then they would choose not to work. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, if any group get two options, first of them is , to live life without doing job and another one is that, to use most of the time for working. Then, they will only go for 1st one. I am completely convinced with these Statement. In further paragraphs, I will mention some of the reason for these.

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International travel is becoming cheaper, and countries are opening their doors to more and more tourists. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh its disadvantages.

There is an argumentative phenomenon sparking a debate over a travel-related issue, whether cross-bordered tourism is not prohibitive anymore, so there are an ever-increasing number of holidaymakers to several outbound nations. While this reality has both merits and demerits, I would contend that its disadvantages may overshadow its counterparts.

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Parents are the best teachers .do you agree or disagree

Father and Mother are the role models for their children. There is no doubt that their kids are being affected by their behavior at all situations of life.so, I strongly agree with this view, because children will do what parents do exactly, think the way their parents think

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In many countries, people increasingly talk about money such as how much they earn or how much they pay for things in their daily conversations. Why? Is this a positive or negative trend?

There is an increasing trend towards people repeatedly mentioning money-related topics in their mundane conversation. This can be accounted for by many reasons and this trend, to my perspective, should not be encouraged.

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Some people think that living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.

It is widely recognized that people who live in big cities are bad for their health. From my perspective, I agree the pollution in big cities can significantly affect respiratory health.

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In some countries, university students live at home, while in other countries university students go to other cities rather than live with their family. Do you think the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's interconnected world, the decision regarding whether to stay at home or venture to another city for university education is a pivotal one for many students. While both options offer unique advantages and challenges, I firmly believe that the benefits of living away from home outweigh the drawbacks.

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The most effective way to solve traffic problem is to encourage people from the sububrs to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree?

Allegedly traffic and transportation problems are given significant attention in people's lives. People believe one of the most significant ways to solve this problem is to encourage people to live in subrubs and countryside instead of leaving in centre of cities. I agree with encouraging people to live in the countryside for reduce this problem, but I totally disagree with this part that is the most effective way.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Dicuss both view and give your opinion.

Whether the elderly or the young people who are more crucial bears some consideration . This essays agree that it is more fundamental to believe in the youth due to their desire , despite who consider that elderly population have lots of experience.

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Some people say industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty, while some believe it should be stopped due to environmental problem it creates. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Industrialisation is proven to be critical in addressing socio-economic problem however, the environmental impact of it has sparked a debate with some arguing that it should be fully stopped while others argued that it is necessary in order to continue alleviating poverty. While there are merits to both sides of the argument, I firmly believe that the benefits of industrialisation outweigh the costs.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other culture youth is considered more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In today's digital age, many people argue that elderly persons are more playing an important role, while other believe that teenagers impact is highly valuable. In my opinion, having more youngsters causes more benefits. This essay comprises both these views and my opinion, followed by a logical conclusion.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures yourth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are frequent debates regarding the worth of people, and age is one of the bases on which some people try to measure it. If asked whether old age or youth is more important, I would say both have significance but are distinct in nature.

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In some place old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While in certain regions, older people is considered more value than the young, many others say the opposite. It is this writer opinion that support the benefits from youngster are greater than the old because of the capability and modern knowledge despite being inexperienced.

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In some places, old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Age is a significant aspect of cultural identity and social norms in many societies. In some cultures, old age is highly valued and older people are respected for their wisdom, knowledge and experience. In contrast, youth is often considder more important in other cultures, where the emphasis is on innovation, progress and the potential of the young.

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more imporant. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this recent times, the elderly people have many significant effects on our society, whereas the young are much more essential for our lives that many thoughts believe so. This writer totally argues that the talent of youths is quite more beneficial than in the old ages.

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In some places old age is value, while in other cultures youth is consider more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is debated that values of former people outweigh these of young generations. The writer will look at the controversy from two sides and explain why this tendency should be advocated.

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In some place old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether elderly people or the young should be the priority is a controversial discussion. Whilst acknowledging the huge contribution of the old to the society, the writers contends that youth is more significant.

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