IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 389

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Learning various ways of attitudes is an essential moral education for children. Childhood phase is a pathway life which advocates a growth of life. Grasping what bad-manner or well-manner is paramount in which children always interact with each other in friendships that can lead to a happy life. Then, how to learn and maintan to be well-manner where children should receive some punishment is one of ways to become well-behaved. I strongly agree that punishment is advantageous to develop characters.

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People living in the twenty-first century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the twenty-first century, the quality of life that people have is better than the life in previous centuries. This writer agrees with this statement due to the innovation of technology and the stability of finance.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the growing technology and globalization, many people prefer reading books and newspapers online rather than buying books and newspapers physically. In my opinion, the advantages of reading online far outweigh the disadvantages. when considering the advantages without any cost we can read books and newspapers published worldwide and the development of technology people can translate books and newspapers into their convenient language however some people prefer to read books and newspapers physically since nostalgic feeling.

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All people should go to university, even if they are not going to use that education In their job. Do you agree or disagree?

Education always become the main role in human civilization. For some peoples, study in college may not important for their career. However, I strongly believe that knowledge still essential for living. Although, it is does not direclty influence people's lives. Analysing the benefits of education such as networking and economic reasons will be outlined before reaching my opinion

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is essential for human to take risks, from their career to their wealth. This essay argues that the benefits of huge promotion and gigantic profit outweigh the drawback of getting into debt.

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Banks should receive billions of dollars in assistance from their governments during a financial crisis that was in large part their fault. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that governments should support banks when they have a trouble, while others believe that they are not in charge of that. In this report, I will present both sides of this conflict, and then allow me to share my point of view.

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Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Globalization and the number of multinational companies have been becoming increasingly common in recent years. Some people believe that this can bring some drawbacks to society, while others say it can have some positive effects on the environment. From my perspective, I personally agree that this growth might have numerous disadvantages in the world.

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Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to broadcast foreign films and TV shows. Others, however, think it is best to produce local films and shows. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. forgin = more, learn local = support local, maintain tradition

A conflict have arisen between two beliefs; the first side is supporting the idea of publishing foreign movies, while the other side prefers local TV shows. In this report, I will go through both sides, and then allow me to share my point of view.

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today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. This accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era, people can take pictures auth ther smartphones and further they can even share the photographs with anyone. Howear, due to evolution of smartphones which can capture photos have led to reduced work for professional photographers and their respect has dropped down. In my opinion, I agree with this viewpoint to a great extent and my stance is further discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world, while others think scientists make the greatest contribution to the world. Discuss both views!

There are many influencers who are in charge for the whole world, and some arguments arose about who are these influencers; however, one side of this trend says that governments are responsible about everything happening, while the other side says that it is, indeed, the scientists' responsebility. In this report, I will go throuth both sides of this conflict, and then allow me to conclude the right point of view.

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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at presuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so commen that we no longer pay attetion to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether or not advertising has lost its lure due to its ubiquity is a debatable matter. While some still adhere to the belief that it is the main source of presuasion when buying items, others and I believe that it no longer possesses its primal charm.

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Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A large number of humans assume the authority have to provide free housing, meanwhile others trust that it is not the government's responsibility.On my prespective housing should be responsibility by the individuals. My assumption on both of views will be disscused in this essay.

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Some people think thats it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekend. Other people, think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are two controversial opinions that socialising with co-workers after a working day and weekends is a splendid idea. Nonetheless, others do believe that it is vital to separate the working and private lifes. This essay agrees with the first statement due to the obvious fact that nice relationships with colleagues is the surefire way to productive labor, and disagrees with the second state as some of jobs imply the social relations between the workers.

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Nowadays, more and more children are being brought up by single parents family. What are the cause of this? What effects can be seen as a result of this?

In our generation, there is an increasing tendency of offsprings growed up by a family with only a father or a mother. The main reasons for that are technological fiction and early marriage. It may have a negative effect on children's mental health and behaviour

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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometime starting until the age of five or six, right up until the age of eighteen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

Exams had been widely used in a lot of areas to assess student's performances in school, but there are increasing voices on the pressure cause by tests. Whether it brings more benefits or harms towards our children is worth discussing, and I beleive tests is a good tool to support children's development if we use it wisely.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Today in many areas,individuals are living longer than before. Some people think that the old population creates problems for authorities,while others believe there are benefits if there are more elderly people in society. In my point of view, benefits can outweigh drawbacks in terms of decisions and experience,however,the potential drawbacks such as fundings for healthcare and the highest level of death.

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some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

The entertainment has been the top priority of majority of people in this stressful world. So, entertainers like comedians and singers are getting earning more money than other professionals like doctors, nurses. I completely agree with the notion that these people who are from the field of entertainment are earning much more than previous decade.

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Methods of transportation for people traveling to one university for work or study in 2004 and 2009 in the UK.

The pie charts illustrate how people of a university in the UK traveled to school in 2004 and 2009.

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some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones . why is this case / is this positive or negative development

in the contemporary era the use of technology is increasing not only in the adults but also in young generation too , which has so many reasons which i will discuss in the following paragraphs . I believe that it has a negative impact on them .

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The best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people think that make cost of fuel higher is the more suitable approach to adress natural issues. I am afraid that I will be disagree with this statement.

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