IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 379

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that universities should only offer places to students with high marks. While others believe that people of all ages should be allowed even if they don’t do well in school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education indeed plays a crucial role in people's lives. Some say that a university education is only for those who get high scores at their high school level whereas others opine that should be permitted all students without barriers of high academic scores even if they get lower marks. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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In some countries increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food.government should improse high tax rate agree or disagree

No doubt, In some nations high number of citizens having fast food in their diet, therefore they also deal with many health issues as well. I completely agree, if authorities increase taxes on the kind of food it saves their people from health problems such as obesity and leads the people towards healthy food items.

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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people feel that younger generation is happier than the older ones however, There are some individuals who are of the thought that adults are more happy then teenagers beside having more responsibilities.I personally feel that life in teens is better.I will discuss both the views in further paragraphs.

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Some think dangerous extreme sports such as skydiving and rock climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's generation, there are some individuals who love to live a life full of adventures; therefore to accomplish their goals, some take part in extreme activities including skydiving, rock climibing , river rafting etc. Few believe that these sports are dangerous and should be banned. Although there are arguments on both sides but I strongly feel that ban is not fair for some individuals who are professionally trained to participate.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Taxes, which belong to public schools should not be allocated by those parents, whose children are participating in private ones. I strongly agree with this view.

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Colour is a powerful tool that is used to great effect by manufactures and retail companies when they try to sell us something. In fact, many of the purchasing decisions we make are partly or largely influenced by colour. How true is this statement? How much does colour influence us when we buy something?

I think this statement is true, colour is a very powerful tool to sell us something. Colour plays a huge role in perception and influences human behavior and decision-making.

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Write about the following topic: In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries, kids are made to follow a set of strict rules. whereas in other countries, they are allowed to do whatever they want. In my opinion, children should follow a set of rules. However, these rules should not make them emotionally broken.

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Nowadays, some employers thought formal academic qualification are more important than life experience and personal qualities when they look for new employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree

A faction of employers holds the notion that academic qualifications should be considered as imperative than life experience and personal qualities while appointing new employees. I completely agree with this view as ample of reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay will delve into my viewpoint with relevant illustrations.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, around the world there is a significant number of minors ho start to work wery early on. This topic became controversial, as some disregard any type of child labour, while others argue that involvment of children in spesific jobs could be very beneficial fo them. I personally lean towards the second position. The essay will focus on adressing the above mentioned issue.

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Exposure to international media such as films, TV and megazines has significant impact on local culture. What do you think has been the impact? Do you think its advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Media content has increased exponentially in last few years, because of growing number of video editing tools and platform which not only provide simple features like uploading to creators but also give free access to viewers to watch these content. The rising trend of contents have brought new ideas and cultures into people's mind. These trends have pros like free education, informative videos related to a topic but also cons like hate speechs, disinformation, etc. We will discuss each side of impact with examples in below paragraph.

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Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that the main interest is in world business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some individuals that global businesses should protect the environment for the benefit, while others claim to focus on their world business would be better. However, what I personally think is that they pay attention their works for some reasons that I will elaborate on my essay.

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There is no denying the fact that nowadays, children spend several hours on smartphones daily. Despite people having arguments views about this topic, however, in my opinion, I consider that this is a negative development and in this essay will express my perspective, as well as discuss the reasons behind this case.

There is no denying the fact that nowadays, children spend several hours on smartphones daily. Despite people having arguments views about this topic, however, in my opinion, I consider that this is a negative development and in this essay will express my perspective, as well as discuss the reasons behind this case.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence.

Modern world products and services put extra costs on families. This has led to many of mothers work besides their husbands for their children’s welfare. Although some individuals hold the view that working of both parents may cause problems in children upbringing, others believe parents can pay enough attention to their children as well as work outside.

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For some people, the ideal holiday is to get away from their normal routine by staying in a hotel or camping in a countryside. Others prefer to stay at home and do things they do not normally have time for. What do you think are the benefits of going away on holidays? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The benefits of travelling and getting away from daily routine outweigh the pluses of staying at home and doing household things. I have a lot of compelling reasons why I do think so.

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Raising children is one of the most important missions for many countries. It is recently updated that new mothers and new fathers should take trainings before getting a child. To what extent do you agree ?

A topic regarding raising children has grown to be a pressing matter lately. Some people belives that young parents who want to have a child should take some practical educations. I agree about this problem is because of the psychology and economic consideration.

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More and more women are now going out to work and some women are now the major salary earner in the family. What are the causes of this, and what effect is this having on families and society?

Nowadays, as females enter the business world, it is seen that many of their peers get the highest fee in their group. The social reasons and aspects of this are the subject of research. In this article, I will discuss all these.

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All over the world, people watch foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why? Should the government provide financial support to local film industries?

Nowadays, people around the world tend to watch movies from foreign countries rather than from their own. Overseas movies offer more incredible experiences to the audience as they come stand with creative plots. The government should help this industry by giving financial aid for and sending film makers people overseas so they can study and improve the quality of their production.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and eletric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, electric vehicles are becoming more famous between people. While some groups believe they should completely replace gasoline ones, I disagree that and think both of them has their own upsides and drawbacks.

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Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days, many people steer clear of visiting doctors and choose another ways for treatment.

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WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, modern technology has become an essential part from our life. There is a debate about whether the modern technology plays a significant role in brining people together or is a main reason for isolation . In this essay, I am going to discus both point of views. In my opinion, a balanced using of technology is a brilliant solution to deal with this argument.

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