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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people argue that the retirement age should be raised significantly, given that average life expectancy has increased greatly. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since nowadays humans live longer, there is a belief that we should start retirement later. Certainly, medicine development delays death . Nevertheless, I strongly support to maintain our current system because above the certain age, we are not able to deal with the easiest responsibilities.

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Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is some people think that music can affect positively to the person who an aggression. Now people are beginning to realize that at all related with psychology of people and what kind of music which he listens. Personally, I tend to think that it depends to our feelings and what kind of music we like.

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In some citites and towns all over the world ,the high volume of traffic is a problem.what are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem.

The problem of high traffic jams occurs in several cities and towns all around the world. There are existing difficulties in urbanization that need efficient and immediate solutions.

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Some people believe that modern technology encourages more social behavior. Others say that this leads to lesser sociable behavior. Discuss both views with examples and provide your opinion.

There is an ever-increasing use of technology, such as smartphones or tablets. While many claim that technological inclusion incentivizes users to be more socially active, others argue that this can result in a more isolated attitude. This essay agrees that modern technology affects social interaction in a negative way.

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Some people like to try new things.for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with Discuss both these attitudes and your own opinion.

The majority of people like to try new things like visiting new places and trying to eat a variety of foods. On the other hand, they love to visit and usually visit the place and try day-to-day eating foods only. In this essay, I will discuss both views and I give you my opinion.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent days, there has been an inclination that children are now spending hours immersing themselves into virtual world. Some people are holding the expression whether this mobile device is a beneficial or detrimental advancement, I am of the former opinion. In this essay, I will elucidate the causes of this trend before presenting my thought about this phenomenon.

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More and more tasks we do at home and at work these days are done by robots. Is this a positive or negative duvelopment?

Due to the development of technologies and AI, individuals have contributed to the popularity by applying on daily house chores or at work environment. Although it allows users to have more spare time which is essential for everyone, on the other hand, it might encourage sedentary lifestyle. In this essay I will examine both the advantages and disadvantages of the dilemma and provide examples for this trend.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Whether humans from all ages have been facing the increase of overweighting problems or not is a crucial subject of public concern and debate around the globe. There are a number of justifications regarding this issue, however, I will argue that it is not insurmountable provided some meatures are taken.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.Why might this be the case?Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Being a homeowner is more vital for individuals than living in rental houses in specific countries. The reason for this belief may vary, but the benefits of renting are far greater for people struggling for basic needs and have trouble to save some cash.

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Governments should spend money on rai/ways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The statement whether the governments should allocate their money on making roads or railways is often debated in the community. Some people think that prioritizing the road making will improving many sector on the city where the road made. I firmly believed prioritizing the road to be made is the best way to accelerate the development of the country.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people who live in another country they face very crucial issue is that language.so I agree

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Some people think that arts (for example, music or painting) don't directly improve people's wellbeing, and therefore the goverment should spend money on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art is a great way to express emotions. Some folks think that art does not upgrade people's interest and authority should spend people's taxes on other things like IT, education,health, etc. I do not agree with the statement and explaining my view in the next paragraphs.

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Some people say libraries are important in society as a place to get information and use books.often say as computers are advanced, libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Due to the advancement of technology there is an debate ongoing between public regarding library. Alot number of individuals believe that libraries are an essential place for the local communiety and people can use all the books from it and get desired information. In contrast, other folks argue that libraries uses a lot of money and resources and therefore advanced technology such as computers should be used. Hence, both the views are further discussed in this essay and my opinion at last.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present world, children spend a substaintial amount of times playing computer games and scrolling social media. Some believed that participating in outdoor activities can be more helpful for children development, due to the fact that this time span is a particularly important for tennagers to grow both phsically and mentally. I agree that it is crucial to devote one's time into create outdoor hobbies, and this will be analyzed by bringing up the downsides of over-using electrical device as well as the internet can have, and the benefits of outdoor activities in terms of phyiscial strengths.

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Some educationalists think that international exchange visits will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, many intellecturals suppose that international exchange visits will have a positive impact on adolescents at the school. From my perspective, I personally think that more advantages will be brought for students instead of drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss both views of this phenomenon and give my own view.

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Nowadays an increasing numbers of profession such as doctors and teachers are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can done to solve this.

In modern days, an issue such as the rising amount workers like professors and medics departing their poorly developed home nations to work in a more advanced countries is becoming a concern for various governments. This essay will look into the problems this will cause and how it could be solved.

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The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both this views and give your opinion.

These days,it is asserted by some that Internet induce individuals to interact with each other using social media instead of face-to-face communication.While some contend that it can have positive consequences such as time efficiency ,others,including me,believe that it can result in many health concerns and sedentary lifestyle.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Do the advantages of using computers for learning outweigh its disadvantages?

Computers are essential tools used in education. There are different ways of learning at the same time different modes of learning. Learning may be enhanced by the use of computers by improving visual aids, communications and other aspects of learning. As what every technology entails it has advantages and disadvantages.

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Today's society provides people with various ways to lose weight, such as special diets or exercise regimes. Many people believe though that poor food and today's lifestyle should be addressed first. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary modern world, people are more concern about their weight and part of the society believes that best method to lose weight as diet and exercise while others think lifestyle changes and changing in the type of food as the ways to do it. In my conviction, change in the lifestyle and the type of food should be the first thing to adress, in focus of the goal of loosing the weight.

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what is the causes and effects of water pollution? what are the solutions?

Nowadays, the pollution of nature is stronger than ever due to the advancements in technology, particularly the ocean and seas are the most affected by it. This essay will examine the cause of this issue and try to give it a possible solution.

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