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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that watching TV is bad for children, while others claim it has positive effects for children as they grow up Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Some parents believe that TV plays a negative role in watching of their children, whereas others argue that it still has significantly advantages impacts on children's growth. Both views are hold valid justifications, however, I support the former viewpoint as I believe that the adults can not prevent the imitation of their children from the wrong behaviours in television.

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The two-floor plans show the renovation of AAA Accountancy's main office.

The blueprints depict how the AAA Accountancy main office has been refurbished from the past till now.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

The traditional medicine has had a crucial impact in our societies, and our quality of life has been improved by executing cutting-edge diagnosis techniques and treatments. However, many people has replaced to visit their usual doctor for alternative and non-evidence based medicine. I think that both sides have advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The majority of people tend to live their lives nearer to the place where they were born and bought up. The crucial reason for this is that they love the neighborhood the most, as well as they don't want to move away from their relatives and friends. This essay will discuss what are the advantages of living near the place where they born. Followed by that it will discuss the disadvantages.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be in case

In some countries, nowadays, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people because the rent they pay could actually be used to buy a house, while it could also be a big debt if they couldn’t manage their money well.

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People think that it will be more enjoyable to watch performance live than watch the same performance on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Many people perceive that people will br likely to feel more intrigued when watching a live performance rather than the one on television. It is the opinion of this writer that it is more convenient and cost-effective to watch the live show on television than the live one.

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Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefits inviduals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Many people said that full cost of student's study are should pay by students because university education benefits inviduals rather than society. This writter completely agree with this statement because these thing can help student independent and have a lot of experience with development of social skill.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineer, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People have different views about whether educated persons, mostly doctors and engineers, should work in the country where they have finished their education, or some believes that, there should not be any limitation to force individuals to choose where to live. I strongly agree with the latter point of view. The forthcoming essay shall discuss the both ideas and explain my opinion.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages fo this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in some counties the young generation uotnumbers the quantity of aged people. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this phenomenon and provide a logical conclusion.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

Statistics showed that the number of population is rapidly increasing with time. In many regions around the globe, people are moving from countryside to cities. Therefore, the population in rural areas is decreasing compared to urban areas which showed a significant increase in population. In my opinion, i think that the advantages of living in a city outweighs the drawback.

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people choose their own life partner.what are the advantages and disadvantages of each system?In some culture the parents arrange marriage for their children but in other

Marriage is a momentous event in the life of one human and its important for the whole family as well.And having good,understandable and caring, life partner provides you mental and physical support.As its an important decision in a person,s life .There are two aspects for this ,one is that the individual select his partner by his own and still there societies where parent arrange marriage for their children.

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Small business should avoid recruiting young women who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on. To what level do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, women and men are recruited in small business. Some says that small business should not recruiting woman who has not been married because owner are afraid paying maternity leave later on. This essay disagree and will explain further that small business should not employs women who has not been married, because younger women works more efficiently than women who has family and younger workers tend to follow the trend that are useful for the small business.

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Nowadays ,many parents put pressure on their children so that they excel in schools as well as in other extracurricular activities. Why do parents do this? Is this a positive or a negative development for children?

In this present society,majority of parents exert pressure on their wards to excel in accademic and extracurricular activities.This essay will discuss the prominent factors behind this trend as well as why this is a detrimental development for children.

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The number of overweight and unhealthy children in developed country is increasing, and many people think that this is linked to diet and lifestyle. What are the reasons for this increase and what can be done to reduce the problem?

Statistics showed that there is a significant increase in number of children in developed countries suffering from obesity and dieases. It is though by many people that this problem is related to the unhealthy diet and lifestyle those young lives. This essay is going to take us through the cause of this problem and what can be done to reduce this.

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Some believe that people are naturally born as leaders while others feel that leadership skills can develop. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued among individuals that leadership comes from knowing some skills which is relevant to beign a leader, however, other individuals have a distinctive view they say it is comes with human nature. In this essay, I will discuss both of these views and give my own opinion.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that to escalate environmental troubles is to optimize the cost of the fuel. This essay agree that the solution to environmental troubles is to increase the cost of the fuel. Firstly, increasing the cost of fuel discourage people use personal car; secondly it motivates industrial to change to renewable energy.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that someone's achievements are related to their abilities accomplishing their academic subjects. Meanwhile, those who do not have a success story in academic usually ignored by society although she has already achieved her dream in different field. This contention leads to some doubts and the ruler should consider to remove non-academic subjects. Personally, I disagree with this opinion since children need to explore more about their preferences. A further explanation will be presented below.

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some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be released. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this digital age, in many of movies, lots of type of movie genres being produced. Some are positive but some may bring bad impact to the communication such as violence. Many citizens belive that the government should regulate the level of violence while others think that cinema should not released violent movies anymore. This essay is going to discuss both views and give the writer's own opinion.

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The most important aim of sciece should be improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree this statement ?

I agree with the most significant purpose of science should be upradge life of the world's population. Let me explain my opinion based on three factors. In other wpord, I say have science can affect global threats such as air pollution, the economy and healthy.

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Some people believe that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital Era as all writings can be stored electronically. Other think that printed books still play an important role. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is believed by some people that we are no longer in need for hardcopy books, in this digital Era as all writings can be stored and read in an electronic form. While, other people believe that printed books still plays a crucial role in our dialy lives. In my opinion, I think it is better to read an actual book rather than in a softcopy form.

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