IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 427

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Parents often buy their children many toys. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children having a large number of toys?

In the contemporary era, kids get toys to play often provided by their parents in large number. This could result in some upsides and downsides which will be discussed further in this essay.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a common belief among many people that academic subjects, such as math, physics, business studies, should be the only subjects included in the school syllabus. The reason being, society value the students who excell in these subjects at much higher standards than others. However, I think other topics hold their own value and firmly disagree to the notion that these subjects should be excluded from the curriculum.

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Although family is a powerful influence on child's life, it is also influenced from outside the home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that family have a great impact on the children's well being ,but they also think that the outer environment also encourage their life in diggerent way . I agree with the given statement to a great extent because they spend their most of their time with their parents in their earlier age ,but schools and teachers also play a great role in their life in late age . I will these points in details in the upcoming paragraphes along with the conclusion.

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In some cultures, children are more often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some nations, children are informed that they work hard to gain anything. The subsequent paragraphs will explore some the benefits and drawbacks of informing children that they try hard to get anything.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to the advanced technology nowadays with cheap and easy access, people have start to do activities remotely from their house, a debate has emerged regarding whether this technology leads a positive or negative consequences. I believe that technology brings a positive development despite its possible influence on social life.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to the advanceed technology nowadays with cheap and easy access, people start to do activities remotely from their house, a debate has emerged regarding whether this technology leads a positive or negative consequences. I believe that technology brings a positive development despite its possible to influence social life.

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Some parents believe that extra private lessons outside school hours, where students work alone with a teacher, can help them do better at school. Others disagree. What are the advantages and disadvantages of private tuition?

Nowadays some parents prefer to higher a private teacher for their children tohelp them at lessons for the school, however, others believe that this work does not good influnce for students. In this essay I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages that could be made by this issue.

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Some people believe that children should learn to paint and draw. Others believe that is a wast of time. Discuss both wiews and give your own opinion.

While some people believe that children have to know how could paint and draw, others do not believe this opinion and say that is not necessary to spend their time with that also I believe the rather opinion.

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Some people believe that children should be banned from using their phones during the school day. Others believe that children should be allowed to use their phones. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

An argument appeared among people that phones are not allowed to be used by children during the school day but others believe the opposite. Mobile gadget during the school day can distract children from studying, but on the other hand, phones can be helpful for them to study with many advanced features. I believe the use of gadget by children in school day should be ok as long as parental control exists.

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Globalization has connected societies, but it has also raised concerns about cultural homogenization. Discuss the impacts of globalization on cultural identity and ways to preserve cultural diversity in a globalized

Nowadays, globalization dominates many aspects in citizens’s life widely, while it brings a significant worry about cultural homogeneity in the world. There are some effects and solutions to this issue which I will explain here.

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Some people believe that it is best to encourage children to have a healthy diet at school while others believe that parents should be the ones to teach children to have a healthy diet.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people claim that school is a suitable place for encouraging children to have a healthy diet. By contrast , the majority of people think first of all , parents should teach their children for have a healthy diet. I will discuss both views as well as my opinion.

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Some people believe that having a job you enjoy is more important than earning a high salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are some people who believe that having a job that you enjoy is more important than that of earning a high salary. I do not completely agree to this because I feel that earning a high salary is commonly desired by everyone as it not only gives a lot of motivation to operate but also helps to fulfil our financial needs. This essay will discuss why I believe high salary is as important as being able to enjoy a job.

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A 14-year-old young who seriously damaged school was made to clean streets as a punishment. Do you think young criminals should be sent to prison or there are alternative forms of punishment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Crime punishment depends on the circumstance, the suspect was in. When it comes to children or students or a minor, these circumstances change drastically. I believe sending a minor to prison is not the right way of dealing such crimes. This essay will discuss the examples and reasoning behind the psychology of underage criminals while suggesting alternative punishments for minors.

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Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in word, picture, music or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

opinions are divided on whether producers of art projects need any attention from anyone. many argue that politicians should not pay attention to those professionals who can help them to absorb the art inspirations. This writer completely agrees with this viewpoint.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternatives medicines and treatments instead of visiting the doctors. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Recent trends suggests a decrease of traditional doctoral consultations which have otherwise been replaced by alternate medications. Following the increase costs of living and medical bills, many have opted towards this decision since it may appeal as the most optimal choice. However, it's not all sunshine and rainbows, the majority of health experts have warned the public of such practice as it may contain unwanted complications towards our health. Thus, I believe the most coherent approach solution is to be cautious of these practices and it's reccomended to avoid this approach at all costs.

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In many countries, governments spend significant resources on promoting national culture through festivals, museums, and public television programs. What are the advantages and disadvantages of governments promoting national culture?

In the globalization era, some traditional cultures are threatened to fade in time, hence why, the governments have been spending more budget to promote the national identity. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of spending significant resources for maintaining culture.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of helth and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

It is often thought that in several countries, the common amount of extra weight is growing and time of physical activity and well-being level is going down. There are number of reasons for this to happen, in this essay they will be discussed and given solutions to.

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crime is the big problem in the world, and nothing can be done to prevent it. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that nowadays, the number of offences is recently increased, and it is creating problems for society. Some people believe that any forces cannot avoid it. In this essay I will present arguments against this statement.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Children treatment is one of the debateful discussions among people. Some believe that giving freedom to youngsters could lead to selfish generation; while others think that giving choice to the youngsters to opt their wishes, is a positive behavior. I heartfully agree with the second opinion, and in this essay I will discuss about the reasons.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is the case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, in spite of achievements in food resources, still there are people who suffer from starvation. This matter can have reasons, and also, there are solutions to defend from this condition, that in this essay will be considered.

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