IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 432

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Q> Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people's reading and writing skill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been an enigmatic quandary as to whether the device provides beneficial aspects in the young generation’s reading and writing skills. however, it is explicit that media devices apply downgrade young children’s academic skills such as reading and writing. The scope and breadth of the auto-correcting function and the accessible data are two paragons that exemplify the theme.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exampes from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a new trend among companies to distinguish their goods by pointing out it’s uniqueness in the commercials. They do it to establish their brand identity, though it can be confusing for the consumers sometimes. However, i firmly believe that this is benifitial for the buyers.

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In recent years the family structures have changed as well as the family roles. What are the changes that are occouring. What do you think can be done to mend it?

The bar chart illustrates the prevalence of three primary methods for accessing daily news across five distinct age categories during the year 2011. Overall, it is evident that microblogging emerged as the least favored option among the surveyed platforms, while the utilization of social networking sites displayed an inverse correlation with age.

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Nowadays a lot of important is given to the dress and appearance of celebrities, however, some people feel it is completely unnecessary. What is your opinion?

It is undeniable that beauty and fashion are important for TV personalities as they are always under the center of attention. However, some people think that these aspects are not necessay in reality and they should not pay so much attention on them. From my perspective, I agree this statement as their actions and behaviours are significantly influent on their fans and followers. Therefore, this essay intends to discuss how their action can affect the society.

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The following report delineates the participation of individuals aged 18-20 in various activities over the course of a month, segregated by gender.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enough time to look after them What are the problems related to do this? What are some possible solution?

In today's digital age, young people do not spend enough time on take care of elderly people. This problem can lead to loneliness and safety accidents but can be addressed by use of technology.

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nothin Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Many countries force young people to serve in the military with some people suggesting that this should be extend to all countries and possibly for both sexes. I would argue that although military service is helpful for some it may not be a good idea for everybody.

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MENU Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

Nowadays, we hardly find any house without altleast single pet as it has become an important member in families. While some people believe that animals are good for children because of the companionship, some others are of the opinion that these are harmful due to safety reasons. In my opinion, even though there are negative sides in keeping pets at home, it is always advantageous to have pets at home.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?

Some individuals argue that music is a good method for people to have a conversation with many people from different cultures and ages. In this essay opinion, it is a good way to communicate by using music.

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Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is commonly argued that watching television brings the merit for educational aspects, while many people believe that there is only one benefit in terms of beneficial entertainment. This issue offers both advantages and disadvantages, which will be examined in the following paragraphs before the conclusion is reached.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Throughout span of human being life, people always active, work to having a good living standard. That is the reason they do not want to stay in one place, where they were born and raised. Recently, in a lot of nations on over the world that rural residents are moving to cities, it led to the amount of population in the countryside is falling. In my opinion, this is a negative development.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some nations, it is noticeable that possessing a house is crucial than leasing one. This is because that the house owner can consider it as an investment and renovate it as he wants. Personally, I believe owning a home is a negative situation and the subsequent paragraphs will elaborate more on that.

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Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Most students cannot apply to job in their own profession after graduate university. In my opinion, the root of this problem caused by higher education system does not give some practical experience and modernization of this should be a good solution.

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The gap between the rich and the poor is wider than it ever has been. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve it?

In today's societal context, there is a dramatical distinction between the rich and the poor which seems to be one of the controversial issues occuring in every nations across the world. There are various factors contribute to this problem; therefore, this essay will provide some reasons and effective solutions.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have different views about how a person could be succeed in his or her life. While some individuals argue that finding a job immediately after high school is a better option, I personally agree with those who believe that education is a key to find a better occupation.

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Nuclear power is far too dangerous, therefore, countries should ban its use and concentrate instead on developing alternative sources such as hydroelectric power and solar energy.to what extent do you agree.

The usage of nuclear power in nations has to be stopped because of its danger, and the countries ought to focus on the renewable energies productions from sun and water. I strongly agree with this statement because of some reasons.

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in some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is an essential for some people in some areas to being a landlord instead of being a tenant. From my prespective, I believe it has a positive impact on owning a home in many aspects, in this essay I will explain my reasons in detail.

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In some countries family and friends who care for the elderly do not find time to look after them. What are the reasons and solutions?

People nowdays in few parts of the world find it quite hard to make time,to spend with thier elderly ones . There are sufficient resoning to it. Majority of the people in the world do 9-8 jobs, they spend most of their time during the day in the office, getting exhausted and strained from the work. They come home devastated and tired for normal family interactions. More reasons could be if they move to a different city for better work, most of them wouldnt be able to take everyone with them,So they intend to leave them at old age homes. Its sad and devastating to them but most of them may not have another option.

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Today many young people change their jobs or careers every few years. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

It’s common that today’s youngn people change their jobs frequently.I think this state of affairs due to two main reason, futhermore I think the state has this own advantages and disadvantages,however the former is greater than the latter.

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Many people in the music business feel that illegal music sites on the internet are a serious threat to the industry and more should be done to prevent them from operating. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Overall, I agree with the statement that there are so many websites on the internet which are not legal, and these sites impose a serious risk to the whole music industry. Also some actions must be taken in order to stop these sites from working.

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