IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 449

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

band

Some people think parents should take childcare training courses. do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some individuals that all parents ought to take childcare coaching. In my opinion, i agree with the notion that every parent, this day, should take some training about how to take care of their child because it will lead them in the right direction in terms of being good parents.

band

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.

It is necessity for persons to take risks in their professional and personal lives. The risk takers may get failure initially, however, I believe that later on they achieve the success. The essay will discuss both merits and demerits and argue it.

band

Some people believe the best way to deal with the problem related to traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in suburbs and the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is an argument that someone believe that if all people move to urban areas, the problems related to traffic and transportation will be solved immediately. I firmly disagree. Although there is an advantage such as reduction of using private cars, there will be some disadvantages for people who live in city center.

band

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views on whether studying other subjects with the main subject has positive or negative influences on students. This essay will discuss this phenomenon from both perspectives, and I believe that students should study extra subjects at the university with their main material, because of the options for their future jobs.

band

It is common that in many companies people from different ages work together in a same team. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantges?

A number of companies which combine individuals that originally come from different ages to collaborate together in one group is a common phenomenon. I strongly believe that this way brings more advantages than disadvantages.

band

Many people judge success solely by money and material possessions. however, success can be achieved or measured in other ways. What are your opinion about this subject?

Real success is not the way people think.

band

Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a common belief among experts that if a rich nation's government make any attempts to improve the financial wealth, it will not have any more effects in terms of the citizens' satisfaction. However, this writer disagrees with this because of the comparison between individuals and the misinformation stemming from the wage gap.

band

Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that children should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that children ought to go to school when they are very young, while other people believe that it is not necessary until they get older. This writer agrees with the statement and will explain why in the following essay.

band

Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that children should not go to school until they are older. Dicuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether children should attend school early or when they get older. This writer believes that starting school early will help children have a stable knowledge when they grow up older and easier to change their bad habits, however, some people think going to school at an older age helps schools and teachers manage them easier.

band

Some people say that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others say that it is getting easier. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

As the time passes, there are a lot of voices arising from people who say that it is getting harder to live in urban areas while others say that it is getting much easier. I'm in the opinion of living big cities is becoming more problematic. This essay will discuss both views and state my own position.

band

People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people naturally resist making changes in their lives. This essay will first suggest that the biggest problem caused by this phenomenon is worrying about making decisions and then argue that gaining more knowledge is the most viable solution.

band

The youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled, while at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary for both physically and mentally. Now individuals are beginning to realize that the youngsters in many countries are unemployed and unskilled, while at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Personally, I tend to think that the youth must not serve their home country and protect it since they are can be essential reasons behind it.

band

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the internet is more admired by individuals, whereas newspaper a object of the previous days. I totally agree with this view because online platform is a easy and convenient way for everyone.

band

Some people say that the government should ensure that people lead to a healthy life, while others believe that individuals should have their own choices. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that the government must make sure that people lead to a healthy lifestyle. However, some people argue that individuals should have their own options. In my perspective, implementing healthy lifestyle gives many benefits for people itself. Meanwhile, sometimes healthy lifestyle is something that not every person could provide. This essay will discuss both perspective and provide reasons why healthy lifestyle is essential for the people.

band

Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child’ development as other objects, so it should be compulsory in high school. To what extent you agree or disagree

In today’s society, the issue of whether many art subjects should be compulsory to learn in the curriculum of the high school or not has sparked a degree of controversy among people. Although this tendency appears some problems, I do totally concur with this.

band

Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important to a child’s development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In recent times, art courses, regard as painting and drawing are as crucial to a develop of children as other core subjects, therefore, it should be obligatory for students in university. This writer will agree with this statement and show the viewpoint in this essay.

band

Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that the curriculum should allow the art classes to contribute to the fluency of gaining knowledge. This writer believes that art classes could improve the level of creativity. It has been suggested that these courses can develop the other subjects due to improving the various of skills.

band

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Taking risks has become significant for individuals’ lives, for their proffessional lives as well as their personal lives. Despite some possitive effects, I certainly believe that disadvantages are outweighed the advantages.

band

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many produced foods consist of high levels of sugar, hence, it contributes to many health problems. Therefore, some consider the increase in cost can lower the frequency in purchasing This essay agrees with this statement because it raises awarenes among people and also make it impossible for people with low income to buy it.

band

Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that the Government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people may think it is their responsibility to take care of their diet and health because they are the one who control their own lives nevertheless other may argue that the Government should be responsible for them. This is a bit controversial to disscuss in the public but in my opinion, individual should take their own responsibility no matter it is for their health or diet because I believe as an individual we should be able to make our own decision and we should be the one to lead our way.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.