IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 448

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many local languages are dying out due to the rise of languages like English. Is this a positive or negative development?

In this fast-paced era, the English language spread to the world, and this development caused the extinction of the mother tongue. I firmly believe it is a negative development

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Some think that people should not change their jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, company and society. Discuss and give opinion

Whether employees should jump from one job to another or they should work at the same position throughout their career has been a controversial topic. In my opinion, while changing jobs can be beneficial to a certain extent, being in a similar position is more advantageous to both the individual and the employer.

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Some people think that success is the best indicator for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

According to some individuals, being succeed refers to being intelligent however, other people believe that there are several other ways of measuring intelligence. I firmly believe that, intelligence should not be measured by success because it does not mean that those who are failures are not intelligent.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some people believe that one should only focus on their given subjects at school, this essay agrees that increasing knowledge outside the school’s materials could be beneficial because it will leverage the student’s value and soft skills when applying for works.

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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work that with their children To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

Today, there is an ongoing debate whether the argument that parents who spend most of their hours at work than with their children has an influence in the social problems that involves the young childrens. I agree with this argument to a certain length and it will be discussed in this essay.

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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media _rich society.

The globalization of media has become one of the ever-relying factors in our lives, especially when getting supported by the development of technology. The ease of full access of information and fast form of communication are counted as the main benefits, whereas the dependency of the platform and the lack of in-person interaction are suggested as the principal drawbacks.

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Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Since the housing prices have been proliferating in the last few years, some people opine that the government should allocate free housing facilities. On the contrary, others said that it is not the government's duty to take care of. This essay will discuss both the views in the following paragraphs and my personal opinion is in the conclusion.

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It is propular that developed country is more responsible to climate change, but some people think that all coubtry is responbile to tackle this issue. Disscuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is widely acknowledged by people that developed countries are the main actors responsible for tackling climate change, while others argue that both developed and developing countries are liable to overcome these issues. I personally agree that all countries are the same since conventional sources related to climate change are still used by all states in the world.

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In some countries, many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food. It is , therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree ?

Junk food plays a major role in modern society, therefore most of people addicted for getting fast food and they trend to get non communicable diseases such as cholesterol, heart diseases diabetic and also cancer. Therefore , government should pay attention and take some option for avoiding future illnesses, whearas, government should establish tax for these sort of food. This essay agrees that a higher tax should be paid by each and every compan. Firstly, higher rate of tax should be increased yearly and if any company missed to pay tax,fund should be double. Secondly, introducing organic foods for the society.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example, working for charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to the younger). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the importance of unpaid community service activities has become a topic of discussion in contemporary society. Some argue that such service should be a mandatory part of secondary education, and I wholeheartedly agree with this assertion due to the myriad benefits students can gain from such activities.

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One problem faced by almost every large country is traffic congestion. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In modern era, many countries in the world are now facing the problem of traffic congestion. This essay will illustrate the reason why said problem exist and the solutions to it.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present days, social status and wealth becomes the success parameter as rich people and high-ranked individuals are more andmired. This makes human values such as trustworthiness, friendliness, and honour to be less appreciated. In this brief essay, I will describe how things have happened resulting to this phenomenon.

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In order to reduce crime, we need to attack the cause of crime such as poverty and lack of educational opportunities. It’s not enough to simply have more police on the street and put more people into prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a dramatically increasing crime rate can be observed and the main reason of this issue is that children from poor families are deprived of the ability to have a high education level. It is agreed , that poverty contributes to crime prosperity, therefore the growth in the number of police will not reduce the main problem. This essay, firstly, will discuss why illegal methods are so widespread these days,followed by an analysis of measures which can be taken to decline risks.

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Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary school children. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Language is one of the primary skills that a person can acquire. A group of people claim that teaching an additional language to the kids at the preliminary schools should be implemented. I personally believe that an opportunity to learn a new language can generate multitude of benefits which can overshadow its ramifications on youngsters.

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Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today education and sport play a very important role in our lives. Some parents think that studying the subjects of their children is less important than the activities they do which I strongly agree with that do exercises have to have more time and attention than studying and the reasons will be presented in the coming paragraphs.

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Should government fund public transport so as to be free for those who are using it? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some citizens believe that public transportation should be free of charge for the users, so that the State should fully cover its costs. From my perspective, this is a valuable point of view, as long as it could conceivably promote the use of this kind of transport, reducing the number of private cars circulating on the streets.

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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is a lot of people undertake extreme doings, beginning with hand-gliding and finishing with mountain climbing. It is undeniable that the feelings such as adrenaline has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement on whether people which are risk their lives or not.

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Has computer made man slave support your answer with relevant examples.

Technology has ushered in a new era but it has also brought some certain evil. The usage of devices like computers and mobile phones have been increased in the past few years. It is also believed that these device have made man their slave. This essay will present some supporting reasons along with the proper examples.

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Not the best people, it very hard good – without caught, potential to commit – Break the law, but ethical judgement wrong. Ex. Some people sentence into prison punishment because breaking law but protecting family relatives. They might convey negative message, protection outweigh the punishment, mitigating danger

In modern educational sector, the topic centering around whether criminals, who have become legal citizens, are the right people educating adolescents away from committing a crime has sparked considerable debate. I partially agree with the proposal, considering some criminals are not the best educators for teenagers.

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Q) The Internet is generally considered as a blessing for mankind. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Social media is regarded as a privilege for human beings. The benefits such as business to business transactions, communication tool and learning platform totally overide the drawbacks of cyber bullying and addiction.

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