IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 454

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, the number of shootings increas because many people have guns at home. to what extent do you agree or disagree? give specific reasons and examples to support you answer.

Across the globe, many individuals own guns for self-defence or recreational purposes. Gun-related mortalities in the household, in particular, throw the ethics of such forms of private gun ownership to sharp relief. In this essay, i shall appeal to crime statistics to argue that a person is at a far more greater risk of being shot if there is a gun in the family circle.

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in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from healthy problem as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Obese and any other healthy problems become the things that common in many countries around the world. This disease gradually become justified by the community especially for those who are reckless on what they eat, especially junk food eater. However, governments plan to increase the tax on fast food to reduce the number of highly processed food enjoyer is not the right decision. And thus, this essay will state why the action is just not right.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Music can stimulate our minds and bodies and also offer some temporary relief from mental agony and sadness. Music probably can do many other things, but it can not bring people of different cultures and ages together. And this essay will explain why we can not rely on music to accomplish such a difficult task.

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In many countries import food from other contry of the world.what are the advantages and disadvantages of this kasur.

In the contemporary era, importing and exporting are very busy due to modern technology and many countries use this trend to import food like rice, wheat and many other items from different countries for their public. In this essay, I will try to explain the merits and pitfalls of this kasur.

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If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is true that if a product and customer needs are met, advertising becomes unneeded. However, the purpose of the product advertisement not only to promote the products, but in some cases advertising become the way produsers educate their customers.

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Some people think that art lessons, such as painting and drawing lessons, should be compulsory in secondary schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that art subjects must be thought in secondary schools. I completely agree that this development because of drawing and painting would improve student's creative thinking and reduce stress level.

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Some people think that children should aim to their best at what they are doing while others believe it is not necessary for them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In modern times, the issue of aim in life has become highly controversial. Some say that children should aim for their best, however, others believe that they should not. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.

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Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?

The issue of whether to have a fixed punishment for all crimes is certainly a controversial one. Despite the argument that some people believe that fixed penalties are more convenient, others reject this notion. There are several advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life,others think that its better to work for different organisations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Although some people think that working for the same company for a long time can lead to better results in their job positions, others believe that focus should be on working for different organizations. In my opinion, working for the same company can contribute to more sense of commitment and achievement on behalf of the employees.

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Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to anaudience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

Public speaking is one of soft skill that a lot of people think is hard to teach. Therefore, speaking in front of people should be taught in school. I agree with this opinion, and from this essay, I will explain why this is an essential skill.

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In future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash.All payments may have to be mafe by card or using phones. Do yoy think this will happen one day? Why fo you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash ?

Using cards and phones instead of cash payments has been developed during recent decades. The simplicity of utilizing new technologies like smart phones and cards, encourage people to substitute their shopping methods. Developing of these features may lead to decline of using cash money. Although some groups are not satisfied with the subject, but technology will proceed its way and makes individuals adapt themselves.

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Some people believe that technological advancements have made our lives simpler and more convenient, while others argue that these developments have led to a loss of important life skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people argue that technological developments have given us many positive sides to our daily routines, while others believe that these automatic discoveries have some drawbacks. This essay will demonstrate further about both sides and I will explain my perspective regarding this topic.

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The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. Give solutions to this problem.

A large city offers a better quality of life so many people get interested to come to get a better service and infrastructure . However, the problems also come along with the city developments. This essay will discuss the problems that young people face in big city and try to provide the solutions.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The charts illustrate the airport's present appearance and reconstruction changes which are expected to happen next year.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems

Nowadays,many people argue that extinction of certain species of flora and fauna is the major problem of biodiversity. Meanwhile others suggest that there are more crucial issues which cause grear damage to our planet. To my way of thinking,although diminishing number of habitat is important,global warming might effect more distruction to our ecosystem.

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Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, It is argued by some individuals that music mainly serves as a way for human beings to reduce their stress and anxiety and I strongly agree with this statement.

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some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it's wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

People view marriage in various ways; a kind of social contract or fruit of love. It is believed by a select few that choosing a spouse from an economic perspective is better, while others say marriage should be based on affection. I strongly believe people should marry whom they love. This essay will demonstrate both views and the reason why love should be the baseline of marriage.

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Some people believe that time spent on electronic games can be valuable for children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The communities state that gadget usage by young people will impact their future when facing advanced technology. But some others explain that is a bad situation for kids if they depend on gadget usage. In my opinion, I believe that the parent will protect their family from gadget usage illness. I will discuss some reasons why people must protect themselves from the bad habit of using the gadget.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people contain that replacing senior staff with younger staff is inappropriate. I do disagree with this statement based on two reasons; teenage employees are more talented, and they are better trained to deal with today’s problem.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can / should be done about it? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a large population of the best graduates in some nations today without jobs. In my perspective, this is because of limited jobs and skills. The best way to solve this problem is to provide more jobs and soft skills that must be taught in university.

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