IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 454

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people، however, ، think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that the economic growth is the prominent achievement of a country leadership while others say that beside the economic progress, better education, social welfare, security and politicial stability also play an important role in a country's development. In my opinion, although the economics has a vital role for a country, other types of progresses should be anchored as well due to their remarkably contribution to the living standards of a country.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. Agree or disagree.

Whether it is essential to use money for motorways and roads or public transport systems, like trams and railways, is a conventional problem. Although many people support the former statement, this writer disagree with it due to financial burden and environmental impacts.

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Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (Steve no copyright)

In today’s society, there two various views in relation to triumph. While some individuals think that success is related to hard work and determination others opine that success has a connection with wealth and personal features. In my opinion, the first viewpoint contains some more inherent advantages than the latter one.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Criminal books and TV series are being liked in an increasing number by people globally. This essay delves into the reasons behind this growing trend and also states why in my opinion they should be banned.

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The movement of people from agriculture areas to big cites has caused many problems at both places. What are the reasons for this problem and how can it be solved.

In recent years, there has been a shift in population from the agricultural regions to the metropolitan areas, posing huge challenges to both places. This essay will shed lights on the possible reasons for such trend, and discuss the potential solutions for this matter.

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Some hold the view that ideas and information should be completely open-there should be no controls on what people can read and watch in the media (TV, newspapers, Internet). Do you agree with this view, or do you think that in some circumstances governments should limit the freedom of the media?

In modern times, people can access a variety of ideas and information by utilising various media such as Internet, TV, and newspapers. Thanks to the development of technology, more people are able to obtain information easily, however, in some cases, there are disadvantages when sharing ideas or details between individuals.

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There are a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. What are the causes and solutions.

In recent days, there are an increasing request for clean water and this issue is becoming more controversial around the globe. Shortage of fresh water can decimate a lot of humans in the world. From my point of view, the most contributing factors to this problem are through of rubbish into the water along with toxic oil and we should set off penalties for through of garbage into the water together with sending people to the jail who shed petrol into the water.

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The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

The internet has significiantly changed our lives recently. some of these changes are negative , while at the whole almost most of these changes is positive.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some people claiming how female is equally appropriate in the armed forces of a nation, while the opposite perspective points out this job cannot be well-handled by women. To the writer’s viewpoint, it is some aspects of the occupation that is where women are to perform better than their counterpart.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been a rising number of children experiencing homeschooling instead of attending traditional schools. In my opinion, I strongly advocate that the benefits do not outweigh the drawbacks.

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As is often said that “Prevention is better than cure,” For this reason, governments should spend national health budget more on the prevention of diseases than on treatment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is pointed out that preventing disease is by far the most important factor than cure, thereby some people argue that governments should spend tax more on the prevention of ailments than on cure. Both prevention and cure are important, however I think governmental authorities should utilize national budgets for treatments.

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Aircraft have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetables to some countries where such plants hardly grow or are out of season. Some people consider it a good idea, but some people oppose it Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Most countries import its organic product needs from overseas countries with the help of air logistics. Many people think that, it has bad impacts and the rest of the majority stays in oppose for the statement. This essay will discuss both sides and will explain why it has negative effects for both humanity and nature.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Many experts say that having a decent bank balance is a significant way to be happy in life. This essay will argue that it is true and having more money means, living the life,you have imagined,while healthy relationships and respect in society are also the source of happiness.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, there are some developments in many aspects of agriculture. However, some people are still struggling to feed their families. The main reason is the huge economical and gap between one city to another.

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Many elderly people no longer look after their families but are put in care homes and nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Currently, people have hectic lifestyle thus they do not have time to care their older family members. Younger population and middle-aged people put elderly members in old age homes. Both its pros and cons will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. While other people think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

There are different opinions about the problem of obesity in children. Some people blame the government for this, whereas others, including me, believe it is the parent’s fault.

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An increasing number of larger shopping areas, malls and department stores are leading to the decline of smaller corner shops. what are the advantages and disadvantages of shopping in larger shopping centers rather than smaller, more traditional shops?

Without a doubt, in today's modernized era, the small local stores place has been taken over by the huge shops. However, this leads us to pose a pivotal question, could this phenomenon has detrimental impacts on oiur everyday lives? In this essay, I will examine the perceived benefits and drawbacks of this improvement.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

One of widely discussed issues nowadays is more and more people have to move away from their families, friends in order to find work. It is undeniable that the economy is not good in all countries and 90% of these people who move away for work are from poor countries.

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Traffic on roads has become a problem in nearly every country in the world. What can be done to reduce the amount of traffic at a society level and at an individual level?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the need for military personnel.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

Learning a foreign language creates a lot of opportunities for all people. However, some people believe that only benefits their overseas travelling or working, while others argue that language acquisition has no limitations to its advantages. From my point of view, both of the above opinions are seriously appreciated agreeing.

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