IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is better to run your own business than to work for someone else. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

Entrepernurs are arising in the upcoming years as small industries raising with it. Some people believe that its is a good model to act as it provides freedom and somethig of your own. However, the risk factor is involved in the growth veruses, a employee in multi-national company where benifits are given . In my persespective, intrest a one well-being involving the factors can consider the suitable type.

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Some children spend long hours each day on mobilephones.why is this? İs this a positibe or megatibe development?

Nowadays ,increasing number of children spend majority of their time on their mobile phones.I think main reason for that is enjoyable activities that today's Advanced phones can offer to children and in my point of view it is a negative development.

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Some people think that water is the most important natural resource. Others believe that other resources (such as oil and gold) are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this era every sorts of material is so vital for different purposes .Some individual claim that water is very crucial natural resource. A few people say that gold and oil are precious resources. In this essay I will explain both point of view along with examples.

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To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it's important to do so? What will be the effect if children are not taught history?

It is said the past can build the future. However, Some argues that studying history is not a necessity anymore in this contemporary world. In this essay, I will discuss about value and imprtance of history and also the impacts of neglecting the past on the future children.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Risk is part and parcel of our life.Taking risks in a good way always help people to be successful in lives as well as in their career growth.In this essay,I will discuss both pros and cons and in my opinion,I believe that pros of taking risk has the upper hand than cons.

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some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly with. Consider both sides of this debates and present your own idea. You should give reasons for your answer and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience

Some Individuals argued that a one-year gap taken by high school students before joining the Universities is better idea as compare to keep study continue without any gap. I am agree with the former statement because break helps students to save money for their college and in other point of view, study consistently helps people to achieve their career goal in shorter time period. I will discuss both viewpoints in the following paragraph and state my reasons behind my opinion.

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Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animal and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that in the protection of wild animals and birds much concern and many resurces are given by us. This essay totally disagree with this statements because people are not aware about wild animals and birds still now and they also attact by the human violence.

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Many teachers assign homework to students everyday. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students?

It is argued that many tutors give hometask to students everyday. I agree with this statement and think it is essential for students because it helps student complete their daily lesson and engaged them with learning.

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Giving pocket money to children is very common in many countries. Discuss both advantages and disadvantages and what your opinion is.

In many nations, allowing to spend pocket money to their children is normal phenomena. This trend has benefits and drawbacks, and this essay will delve into both sides with my opinion.

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Many teenagers believe becoming social media influencers is a good career choice. However, others argue that there are some major drawbacks related to an influencer career.

Social media has exploded since 2003. In the modern era, social media sites are not only the platforms that we communicating with friends or checking news in the morning, but also generate new occupation such as content creator and influencers which is one of the most popularity vocation. Becoming a social media influencer is considered an advantage for job occasions by many teenagers, whereas other section of people believes that has detrimental effect related to this career path. This article will explore impact of social media influencers by providing perspectives on the positive aspect. There is a significant amount of evidence that supports the notion of social media being a benefit for job opportunity. In generation Z— people who age 11 – 26 years old— is undeniable that everyone has account in many popular platforms such as Facebook, Instagram and YouTube. These various channels can give a prospect for gaining income. For example, if you were famous content creator on TikTok,...

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people prefer to spend time for team sports, while others like to do single player sports. In my opinion, as long as they do any sports which is valuable, therefore, people need to choose sports that are suitable for their needs. This essay will delve into both perspectives with my own opinion.

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Robot and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact on society.

Human are developing artificial intelligence and robots to replace them in the workplace. These machines help people to do the works which are repetitive and boring. This writer think this will have a negative effect on society because it will make people become unemployment.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace Why is this happening Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact to society?

Nowadays, people and artificial intelligence are closely linked and depending on each other dramtical to develop and improve society, to satisfy the demand and advantage for future. The society is more up-to-date then robots and AI are more important and this is the possitive way to improve.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact to society?

The ever-growing demand of robots and artificial intelligence which humans will be replaced in the workplace. The primary cause of this issue stems from the modernized feature can provide exact outcome without being exhausted. However, I believe in some way this statement can create a substantial effect on the society.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have a position or negative impact on society?

is a fact that robots and artificial intelligence are being improved to remove humans from the workplace. This might come from the development of technology and mention to a comfortable lifestyle. However, it can bring many drawbacks to society.

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Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace hmans in the workplace. Why is this happening/ Do you think this will have a positive or negaative impact on society/

In this digital era, technology is becoming more and more popular, and humans are concerned about the replacement of robots and AI. Because of the dependence of humans on technology is increasing, I believe that this development will affect on society badly.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched area is a necessity. Advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Requirements for fossil fuels are increasing and so finding new sources in undiscovered areas is essential. I think this activity has numerous disadvantages because it will eliminate natural habitats and the environment so is better to find other solutions.

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Many countries spend a lot of money in art. Some people think investment in art is necessary, but others say money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both arguments and give your opinion

Many states spend a huge amount of money in the art sector. While others argue that it is not necessary, instead of that the money should be better to spend health and education. This essay will delve into both sides with my personal viewpoint.

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People sleeps less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effects does it have on individuals and on society?

Nowadays, decreasing quality time for energy recharging and relaxing on modern people is an alarming situation around the world. This essay will demonstrate about what are the reasons for the sleeping issues and how it directly affects individuals health as well as society.

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Some people think that schools should give prizes for academic successes. Others argue that it is more important for schools to give prizes for other achievements (for example, for sports, music and behaviour). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The majority of people think commite of schools should give a gifts to student who gain successes in academic subject. While the others, suggest the prizes should be prepare for student who reach special achievement in non-subject. Both paradigma have an own reasons, in the forthcoming paragraphs will discuss about the issue and i will explain why I agree with the latter.

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