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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health and healthcare. Others argue that it is the government's responsibility to provide healthcare services. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is still a debatable issue regarding the ownership of an individual’s health and healthcare. Some people argue that it should become everyone’s responsibility, while others think that the governments take a main role in providing healthcare services. In my opinion, I believe that health status is an urgency that should be paid attention by individuals.

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Today single-use products are still very common. What are the problems associated with this? What are some possible solutions?

In recent years, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals questioning the consequences of using the popular single-use products. One of the main dangers of this worrying trend is linked to their harmful effects on the environment. However, there are solutions readily available to tackle this issue such as the government banning any further use of these products.

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people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

There are different views about whether aging people may cause some problems for authorities or if they are practical for society. I admit that the retired people may have more benefits, such as transferring information to young people and gathering family together, than their drawbacks, like pensions and caring in communities.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

The topic under consideration is the role of punishment in teaching children the difference between right and wrong. The problem lies in the potential drawbacks and limitations of using punishment as a primary tool in shaping a child's understanding of morality. While acknowledging the importance of instilling moral values early on, I disagree with the notion that punishment is necessary for this purpose.

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Freedom of speech is necessary in a free society. Agree or Disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

One of the widely discusses issues nowadays is freedom of speech and it's importance to freedom society.Lots of states,political parties and no clarity.Personally,i tend to thing that it is the most necessary and must be everywhere.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is an ongoing notion that students at high school should do free community service for the government as a part of the curriculum. These services include working for a charity, teaching sports to younger children etc. Nevertheless, I fully disagree with this belief and will present its possible disadvantages.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, number of patients who rely on their own medical knowledge for treating disease is growing rapidly. This phenomena not only is not considered as a positive development but also can affect individuals general health harmfully. There are some reasons for this notion and following essay will discuss it.

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More students are deciding to study science-related subjects at university rather than more traditional subjects. What are the causes of this? What affects will it have on society?

A rising number of students prefer choosing science-related disciplines at the university instead of opting more conventional courses. It can be caused by a growing demand in STEM fields and by the desire to solve global issues affecting the world. This imbalance might lead to societal development in particular areas and technological proficiency.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, Technology has become a role of vitally important for people because it can support for daily activities such as working and studying. In the following paragraphs, from my point of view, personally, I entirely believe that it is a positive development because of some reasons.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

When it comes to the topic taking risks in life either profession wise or personal wise, people are often divided into two parts. There are ones advocating accepting the risks because of the lessons or achievements they can bring out in the end. Meanwhile, the opposers hold the view of risky things making life way too stressful and even miserable with the potential loss awaiting ahead of them. From my perspective, 'we only live once' saying has been the inspiration for my opinion that we should live life to the fullest including taking risks and even the failures following them.

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Crime rates among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions

It is essential to acknowledge that rate of crimes is significantly increasing among teenagers worldwide. This essay discusses, unemployment and alcoholism of parents as reasons and provides some possible solutions.

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The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

When planning a holiday, many people will choose to specifically and carefully set up for it, while others prefer taking a trip in a spontaneous way. Someone supposes that the best way to plan your holiday is without organizing it. However, while I concur that this kind of trip is exciting and enjoyable, I also believe it can potentially become messy due to some reasons.

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School children and student of all ages now use technology a great deal in their studies. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the contemporary era, technology has permeated every facet of our lives, reshaping the way we communicate, work, and navigate the world. While technological advancements bring about myriad benefits, it is imperative to scrutinize the potential drawbacks and consider how society can harness this omnipresent force responsibly.

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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the bene fits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that the usage of online linguistic translation tools are becoming more common among individuals. I strongly believe that it has more adavantges than drawback since it helps to facilitate the work of translators and movement of people around the world.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that learning languages is a very important thing. While it is a commonly held belief that being in country where you must speak that country’s language cause serious problems, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that being in a foreign country is a good opportunity to acquire a new language. To begin with, a person desiring to learn a new language always needs to have some sort of motivation. In other words, your need

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

There is no denying the fact that nowadays we have plenty of new subjects to learn. While it is a commonly held belief that the arts such as music, drama, and theater have surpassed other topics in terms of importance, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that our living in a rapid digital world it become a necessity to focus on learning its language which has been translated into various new topics.

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An increasing number of people are changing careers during their working life. What do you think are the reasons of this? Is it a positive or a negative development for society?

Workers nowadays prefer to shift their career during their working lives, not only that, some of them even change their job more than one time. This case results from some reasons that will be elaborated in this essay, let alone the personal perspective of this situation leads to positive development for society.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the banefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Nowadays more people decide to visit places with difficult situations, warm deserts or lands covered by ice, as a tourists. This letter argues the advantages of these kinds of travels on tourists for, before turning to downsides. I believe the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones.

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals quesitoning whether people should take the chance for a change in their career and personal life. On the one hand, one key benefit is discovering the true potential of one’s abilities. However, a significant drawback is people risking their life stability.

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In some countries, the number of shootings increas because many people have guns at home. to what extent do you agree or disagree? give specific reasons and examples to support you answer.

Across the globe, many individuals own guns for self-defence or recreational purposes. Gun-related mortalities in the household, in particular, throw the ethics of such forms of private gun ownership to sharp relief. In this essay, i shall appeal to crime statistics to argue that a person is at a far more greater risk of being shot if there is a gun in the family circle.

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