IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 463

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that to get success university education is must, but others don’t believe so. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Whether advanced education will lead to phenomenan success or not is a subject of public debate and concern. Although being in university's environment could provid an inspirational motivation, this factor is not indispensable to achieve the goals in life. In following essay, I will argue that passing the educational courses is not the only path of gaining significants.

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Recent research has shown that media like the Internet and TV have a greater influence over people’s lives than politicians. Which do you consider to be the greater influence? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

Many people opine that means of media such as internet and TV is increasingly popular and has a strong effect on people’s life rather than politicians. From my poin of view, both of media and politicians have similarly effect. I will discuss both views and give my opinion in this essay below.

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Nowadays, there is more and more competition for getting into university. Is this a positive or negative development?

High education institutions now are constructing strict policies towards students admissions. While others may point out the negative impacts due the pressure caused by alleged "unreachable criteria", in this essay I will discuss the certainly positive impact that this meassure provides to prospect students due the cultivation of ambition in young minds, as well as a the creation of a high steemed cohort of future makers.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is generally claimed that development technology makes easier in educational life. In the coming days, no one will purchase physical material such as papers and newspapers or books because the internet has provided them a lot of information without paying. I personally agree with this statement every one use online platform for reading in the future.

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Many people are doing their shopping on the internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.

Nowaadys,The majority of people are buying the shopping from the internet in this essay I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those times than they are now. What problems will this cause? What can be done to solve these problems?

In ancient times, cities were cemented on societies' sustainability for living, in contrast to the towns and households constructed in the present time. This could potentially create cluster neighbourhoods and foster an imbalance between living units and industrial development. In order to attend such issues it is important for goverments to have a strong urban planning departments, that could work around equitable solutions to create more suitable and livable cities.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is controversial topic whether people might aspire to enhance their life conditions or accept when they encounter an unfulfilled job or a lack of money. In my opinion people should always pave their way forward and surpass their limitations. This essay will discuss both distinct perspectives.

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many people believe that family has the strongest influence on a child's development, while others believe that external factors such as televisions, friends and music play a big role. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many schools of thought discuss the biggest influence on child's upbringing concerns internal factors such as family. Whereas others mantain that the roles played by external sources like social circles, or streaming services such as music or TV, influence their growth in a larger escale. In this essay I will discuss both of these views, and state beforehand that the familial factor corresponds to the major influence in childs' development.

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Some people think that it’s a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is thought by some that socializing with office colleagues after work hours is ideal, whereas, others say that this should be avoided. In my opinion, I strongly believe that there should be a balance in managing both these aspects.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The rising popularity of cosmetic surgery as a means to alter one's appearance reflects a complex interplay of societal, cultural, and individual factors. Several reasons contribute to the increasing number of people opting for such procedures.

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Some people argue the government should support the funds for arts, while others suggest the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different points of view regarding whether the state should pay fundings for artestic topics or for other issues like healthcare services and educational system. In my opinion, although areas like health and education play a crucial role in our lives, more funds should be utilised for the promotion of arts.

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It Is Important for People to Take Risks, Both in Their Professional Lives and Their Personal Lives. Do You Think the Advantages of Taking Risks Outweigh the Disadvantages?

In the modern world, most people like to take risks both in their career lives and private lives. But what do the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? some people agree say this is important to take risks in their professional and personal lives. I completely agree with this idea and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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In some places, teenagers are encouraged to get part-time jobs while they are still in school. Do the advantages of teenager working outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a common belief that having part-time jobs is not helpful for teenagers, in particular. However, there is a more persuasive argument that working as part-time jobs is one of the experiences that teenagers cannot achieve and learn from school. I personally believe that we could encourage them to taste the experience of being an adult as a part of society.

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Some say that the best way to help poor countries is financial aids. Other say other forms of aid should be given. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some poeple believe that giving financial aids to poor countries is a good way to help them. Others, however, deem that there are other kinds of aid which can sum up against poor nations' plight. In this essay, we will analyse these two different points of view and then, my opinion will be given.

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Many people believe that modern music can have a negative impact on the young. Others believe the effect of modern music is positive. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

These days, there is some argue that contemporary music maight give an inappropriate effect to youth, and others think that contemporary music have advantages.

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Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by a small number of people ,some people say that government should spend public money on saving these languages ,while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Although, many believe that the leaders need to save minority languages by investing in it, others think it is a complete waste of money. From my perspective, the government should put public funds into building infrastructure. Even though a lot will argue that saving the mother tongue is a way of preserving our cultural heritage. Will cultural heritage add any value to the future generation?

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Many people think that the place you were born affects your success in later life. What is your opinion about the relevance of one’s place of birth upon future success?

Success in life is often associated with birthplace and geographic background. There is an ongoing debate whether birhplace is the most important factor that influences success in life. While perspectives vary widely, I agree that personal success is tightly bound to birthplace, as I will agrue in this essay.

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Trees are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world do you think this is a positive or negative development give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge

The man and women can purchase simelar product from any where as the source of three being one In my opinion, is completely positive because the life style of selling product is change for example amazon. the other reason to reduce the cost of products.

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Many people are afraid to leave their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be dome. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Numerous individuals have refused to step out of their houses due to constant fear of being attacked. Although a lot of folks think nothing can be done to save the situation because it is impossible to withdraw guns from the streets, some others reckon that effective measures can be enforced to eradicate lawlessness in the community by reintroducing capital punishment. I completely agree with this deterrent measure. This essay will discuss both views and my opinion.

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Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge, while other people think that they should learn only a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education plays an important role in a person’s life. There has been an ongoing debate on the current education system, especially regarding the choice of curriculum. Some argue that students should enrol on multiple subjects, whereas others believe in focusing on the smaller scope of majors. Both views are valid, and this essay will explore the reasons for both points, as well as my own opinion.

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