IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 459

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that what children watch on television influences their behavior, while others say the amount of time children spend watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that children’s behaviours are impacted by either the content or intensity from television programmes. In my opinion, the content has a more significant impact on their acts because it can be adopted directly by them.

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In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss both views

In different parts of the world, there is a trend when a mature person continuously lives with parents even after graduation and finding a job. In my opinion, the pros of this outweigh the cons. In this essay, I plan to explore a few aspects to substantiate my point.

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23.Some people think the main purpose of schools is to turn the children into good citizens and workers rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Write an essay with no less than 250 words.

Eduction is an essencial element for any society to florish and grow in today's world. Today's eduction system is contributing to nation by producting good worker as well as responsible citizens. I agree with the notation that these values are higher than indivual benefits. I will eloborate the same in coming paragraphs.

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In school or universities, girls prefer subjects related to art and boys prefer subjects related science. Should this tendency be changed? What is your opinion?

The importance of art and science has always debatable but now has become controversial. There are so many pupils believe that females should take art subjects and boys should prefer the science stream in school or universities. According to my opinion, this tendency should be changed. Every candidate has the right to choose his her profession whether it is an craft course or science.

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Some people believe that children should obey rules and listen to their parents and teachers; Some others believe that less control will help children deal with their adult life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many schools of thought have been advocating for more elders to loosen their authority on their children. However, others pose that offsprings should be taught in being polite and obedient to their parent's and teacher's set of rules. In this essay I will dwell upon both of these opinions, and then elaborate on why I think the latter option is more suitable for the construction of a better society.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. So, sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the prices of high-calorie foods should be beyond the limit of consumers' purchase limit. I completely agree with this opinion because lower consumption of such meals helps to lead a healthy life and reduce financial losses.

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Some people believe that when people become old and need help financially, physically and mentally, young members of the family should be responsible to take care of them. Do you agree of disagree with the statement?

Allegedly, old people assistance is given a significant attention. Some individuals believe not only can their children support their old parents in their financial problems, but they can also aid them in physical and mental disorders, so their families play a considerable role in this respect. I totally agree their children have a highest responsibility in old people's lives, but sometimes they need additional assistance from governments.

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves?

It is assumed that affluent people are obligated to share their wealth with the impoverished, while others consider that the government is the one that should care about their residents. Further to this, the mandatory support from rich dwellers could motivate poorer individuals and innovate tailored solutions, when the government can implement large-scale programs and structural changes.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very importatnt for people. Why misht this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays, people in some countries prefer to have their own home instead of renting one. This could be due to a lot of reasons since in those countries, owning a property is a great way to invest your money followed by other causes such as inflation which effects the rent fees. This essay agrees with those who make this statement and will discuss more about it.

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Somepeople say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?Give reasons for your answer and incl

Tourism is one of the major sector which contributing towards the respective country's GDP, especially in the today's technology focused modernized world. However, there is a significant drawback on the countries where people use to travel, in terms of influencing their traditions, culture and environment. This essay will delve into the root causes of negative effects on the countries and propose viable solutions to address these pressing issues.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, it is possible to note that there is a movement among young people in choosing the short path to their professional development. In other words, they are enrolling in work-based training instead of going to the university. This essay believes that the drawbacks of this choice outweigh the advantages in personal and global aspects as well.

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Learning at university would be more effective if men and women were educated separetely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that higher education institutions should separate their students by gender, in order to enhance their learning process. I strongly disagree with such measure, since it could widen the gender gap in education. In addition, I believe that every student should be taught equally, regardless of their gender.

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Hình minh họa cho thấy sô cô la được sản xuất như thế nào.

Nội dung trong đồ họa thông tin là thông tin liên quan đến phương pháp sản xuất sô cô la từ ca cao. Nói chung, đây là một quá trình khá phức tạp, bắt đầu từ việc chuẩn bị hạt ca cao và cuối cùng là sô cô la lỏng, sẵn sàng để phân phối. Giai đoạn đầu tập trung vào việc chuẩn bị hạt ca cao để sản xuất sô cô la. Quy trình bắt đầu với cây ca cao ở Nam Mỹ, Châu Phi và Indonesia, nơi có môi trường thích hợp nhất để phát triển. Sau khi vỏ quả đỏ chín, chúng được thu hoạch và tách riêng từ hạt cacao trắng. Công đoạn tiếp theo là hạt cacao trắng được lên men và rải ở nơi khác để phơi khô dưới ánh nắng mặt trời. Bước này hoàn thành khi hạt chuyển sang màu nâu, sau đó chúng được phân thành bao tải lớn và vận chuyển bằng tàu hỏa hoặc xe tải. Chuẩn bị sô cô la lỏng để tiêu thụ là trọng tâm của bước sau trong trình tự. Sau khi hạt ca cao đến nhà máy, nó được đặt trên khay và rang bằng lửa. Bước tiếp theo là hạt cacao rang được thả vào máy nghiền để loại bỏ vỏ cũng như làm cho hạt cacao có kích th...

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed,rather than work for a company or organisations. Why might this be the case? What could be disadvantages of being self-employed?

In this twenty-first century, an increasing number of individuals prefer to do their own jobs instead of working under certain entities such as firms and corporations and the main reasons of this are the stress-free environment and the flexibilty of working hours.

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Some people argue the government should support the funds for arts, while others argue that the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both those views and give your opinion.

According to some, money should be allocated to support artists by government, others say that the money ought to be spent for health and educational aspects. In my view, although investing on art can promote culture, I believe that it should be utilized to support educations and increase people’s health because educated society might support artists.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as parctical problems. to what extent do you agree or dis agree with this statement

there is no a doubt that there are many people having huge issue when they traying to communicate with others in the city by any foreign language. while some people had super exciting when they dealing with any person in second language, however, this essay will focus on some points for both opinions and at the end i will express my expectations obviously.

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Some people think that cities are the best place others prefer to live in country. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.

It is always debatable issue whether live in city or village. Some people say that metropolitan places are the best for living while others consider that countryside is far better to live. This trend has advantage as well as disadvantages. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Some people think that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

There are opposite views that in order to be successful, higher education is not necessary. While it is true in some cases, I still think that studying in university benefits more in terms of being reassured to acquire proper-paid jobs.

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The satisfaction of occupation is more crucial than occupation security for several individuals, while others argue that permanent work is more essential because people cannot look forward to enjoying the job. In my opinion, I believe that job satisfaction is important because it makes the employee more productive and have good performance of their task, while permanent job is substantial for financial stability. There are two contrasting views will discuss in this essay.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

There is an ongoing debate surrounding whether the changes in the way children spending their spare times due to modern technologies are beneficial or not. This writer holds a notion that the drawbacks of being addicted to computer games is outweighed by the benefits of the diversity of hobbies and the easy access to modern entertainments.

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