IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 458

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people , however , think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Nowadays, due to the development of technology numerous higher authorities around the world give more importance to the economic progress, whereas some individuals believe that other major progress different than economic sector are also essential for a nation to grow. Hence, both views are further elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs with valid examples and explorations.

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In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

Due to urbanisation and modernisation, living costs are increasing around the world everyday, so there is a negative impact on people and society as a whole. This essay shall discuss about various issues that are arising, and also some solutions to overcome them.

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Because of the rising cost of housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30’s. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether the juveniles have been forced to live with their nuclear families due to severe economic condition specially the housing matters is a crucial subject of public concern and debate. Although there are a number of welcoming points with regard to this statement, I will argue that the demrits of living with parents outweight the its benefits.

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Many people believe that it is easier to lead a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits to living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, The development of technology helps people realize the benefits of healthy lifestyles. However, not only technology, every aspect of life is constantly evolving. So, Everyone also desire to change for the better. In my opinion, whether you live in the city or in the country side, you are easily lead a healthy life and also have health benefits too.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

It is an arguable topic that children should start learning the language of other country while they are in the primary school instead of secondary school. In my opinion learning a different language at folk school has more benefits than drawbacks.

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It is an arguable topic that children should start learning the language of other country while they are in the primary school instead of secondary school. In my opinion learning a different language at folk school has more benefits than drawbacks

The first and foremost positive of this is that a child’s brain is more active at this age. They have a better grasping power and learning ability as compared to high school children. Therefore it is easy for them to understand and learn a language that is different from their mother tongue. Apart from that, if they learn foreign language properly than this will act as an extra skill in them that will help them to communicate with people outside of their country. For instance, if they know English well and opt for studying abroad in future than they will be able to exchange their ideas easily with the people of that country. In addition to that, with the ability to speak and write another language young one’s will be able to secure better jobs in the multinational companies for example, get recruited in large import and export corporations to deal with foreign clients.

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There is a debate among many individuals that museums and art galleries should present the nation’s art, as opposed to artworks from other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate whether a country should treat foreign arts as its own has been a contentious argument. Proponents of foreign arts believe that there are no boundaries in art and every art museum should present both foreign as well as local arts equally. However, I strongly disagree with that notion, and maintain that a museum and art gallery should give priority to showcase artworks from artists within the country. In this essay, rational on this belief is delineated.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although many people adamantly argue against compulsory military service, saying it would take time from the youth to do what they want to do, I firmly believe the opposite. Putting the young, both men and women, through the military service is not only harmless, but also a boon to both themselves and our nations.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

It is often argued that the finding job which motivate people have to move away from the family and friends. In my opinion, I completely belive this has many advantages and in this essay will explain why.

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Nowadays in many countries young people have a hard time finding jobs. What are the causes of this and what could be the effects?

Nowadays, in several countries, there is a phenomenon where young people are having a hard time finding a stable job. It is happening as a result of less experienced young citizens and will lead to a declined in national economy.

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In many parts of the world girls and boys are educated together in co-educational or mixed schools. Some people think that girls and boys benefit from being educated separately in single-sex schools. To what extent do you agree with this view?

During the last decades, humans' thoughts and insights have changed, then types of teaching have also variated in order to equalize learning. For this reason, nowadays, lectures are imparted in classrooms where there are both gender with discrimation. However, many people still argue that it is necessary to separate classes due to its sexual characteristics by creating schools for men and women splitely. I completely disagree with this statement, and in this essay, I explain my arguments.

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Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value, discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that films should only be evaluated based on recreational activities while, others claim that they should be able to educate audiences as well. From my perspective, I believe that both of the opinions has their own qualities and will explain the point further.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebrations. While others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

It is a known practice for some families to host a celebration whenever there is a special occasion. Other people hold the opinion that this is not practical and is a waste of resources. This essay will discuss both views and highlight examples for both.

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In many countries, the government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Economic growth receives more attention than other concerns from the governments in many states all over the world. This essay will develop into pros and cons of this prioritization.

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Work is the most important thing in life without a career life becomes meaningless

As it is enunciated by a proportion, without a successful career individual’s life is worthless as well as occupation plays a pivotal role in human being’s lives.This apprehension has merit and demerits. Albeit there is a dichotomy of views on this concern I harbor the belief that this element is totally unwarranted.I will provide interesting justifications and essential elements to justify my perspective .

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home when they age, while others think they should stay home with family. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, Adults in some countries have the choice whether staying at home or live alone. While some argue that offspring to live alone when they grow up , others advocate that they should sit with their family. In this essay , I will discuss the both arguments. From my perspective, I completely agree with the second view with some supervision from their parent.

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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources,while others think it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is ongoing debate among people who think that studying of space is a waste of value,whilst some people think it is crucial for our world to continue to explore the other world beyond our planet. In my opinion,this question is one of the most significant and valuable for mankind and we should explore space.

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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree

In this day and age, facing with aliment are become one of the serious issue in the worldwide. Some individuals argued that authorities should priotize to solving the housing concerns and the enviromental pollution. From this writer perspective, i tottally agree with this statement because there are the problems which is appear currently.

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Nowadays many ecosystems in the world are experiencing problems because large predators are going extinct. Why is this a bad thing? What solution can governments implement to solve this problem?

In natural habitat, there are the cycle of the predators and preys which leads to the population of animals has the equilibrium. Predators play the vital role in enviroment, especially reducing the increasing number of individuals. In this argument, the issue surrounding the disappearance of hunters will discuss more meticulously and debate some fix that politics can restrict this problem.

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In the past school lessons used the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students in a classroom. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teaching students. Do the advantages of using technology in school outweigh the disadvantages?

In the previous period time, the lecture at school used the traditional way of teaching. However, in recent times, high-tech gadgets are becoming more prevalent in teaching learners. This writer argues that parents can control their children and teaching will be more easy outweigh the excessive screen time of learners.

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