IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 458

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

In contemporary discourse,several individuals argue that the authorities are spending recklessly in large amounts of funds on the arts and that this budget might be invested more efficiently in other fields.However,I do not completely agree with this statement.In the forthcoming paragraphs I shall explain why art is necessary for all of us.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Regarding the o the rising of technology during last years. Many of children rens have dialy spended hours on using smartphones. This essay will discusses the case of this phenomenon, then will illustrates either it is a positive habit or not.

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In many countries, financial crime involving indentity theft is increasing. What are the causes of this trend, and what effect does identity thefts have on the victims involved ?

In some nations, economic offences involving recognising theft are increasing. This essay will discuss the problems of this trend along with some solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and museum, is a wast of money. Government must invest this money in public service instead. To what extend do you agree with this statement?

In mostly countries, spending of governments is a debatable issue. Overall, I agree that the government instead of investing money in the preservance of cultural heritage like arts and museums, must focus on maintaining public services.

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Some people prefer to shop for food in super market other people prefer to their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience .

In this modern epoch, for some people, it is preferable to buy their necessities in physical market, rather than on online shop. In this essay, I will illuminate both views and the reasons why i agree with the given notion, drawing on relevant examples.

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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is universally acknowledged that technology advancement has extensively penetrated into diverse spheres of lives and a criminal aspect as well. Some proponents of benefits of technology believe that it assists to decrease the crime rate in societies, however, some oppose this statement and maintain an increase due to technology. This essay will express both view points and also my orientation.

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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in tv, video games and other type of entertainment for children's leisure. How does this effect children? How do you think problem can be tackles?

In the 20th century, usage of the electronic devices has been increased drastically. People who are born and brought up in the previous generation had grown up playing the traditional games of their locality and they naturally had the habit of socializing with others because they did not grow up watching TV or playing with any other electronic devices. But kids in this generation are growing up depending on the gadgets.

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It is sometimes suggested that primary schoolchildren should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The approach of teaching in primary school children should learn how to grow vegetables and how to keep animals has many merits and demerits. In this discussion, I will talk about how advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

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To some people studying the past is the best way to help young people function well in the modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures could be effective in helping young people to function well in the modern world?

To many people learning the past is a good method to help young people function in the present world. I tend to agree with this essay because studying history can help them about understanding own country and they have activity well in the future.

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People should only buy food sourced locally. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In recent years, there is a big argument between the people about whether they should buy food locally or not. Even though some of them think that buying food regenaly can have a positive impact on the local economy, others may argue that there are a lot of drawbacks too. This essay will look at both sides of the argument and draw some conclusions.

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in many countries people are now living longer than ever before. some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. to what extent do the advantages of having an ageing populaiton outweigh the disadvantages? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Due to advancement in technology, people now are able to live longer than before. Whilst many think that ageing population has more problems for the government, I believe that having older people in community is more beneficial, and this has more poitives than drawbacks.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The first car touched United Kingdom's roads in 1888 and by passing more than one century the number of vehicles significantly increased to over 29 million. Some substitution forms of cars should be use either governments should enact some laws to confine car ownership. I strongly agree with this statement. This essy intends to express some suggestion among my personal and logical conclusion.

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Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Others believe that students should spend their whole day on academic studies. Discuss both the views and state your opinion?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is a school subjects and their importance to our life.And among various engineering subjects like math,chemistry,physics and humanitarian sciences like history or languages,loads of us believe that physical culture also has become an essential part of our life.However,there is no absolute agreement on whether physical culture should be in school program or not.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the modern era, numerous students are relocating themselves in foreign nation for further study or work. Due to this perspective some folks believe that in order to travel or work in a unnative region is the major reason for studing and learning a foreign language, while other people say that there are several other reasons also for learning a different language.Hence, both the views are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples and explanations.

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The image below explains the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain.

The given illustrations convey the basic process of how contaminants from the present time have an influence on creating polluted clouds, consequently, it has a negative effect on the environment and the food web.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people , however , think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Nowadays, due to the development of technology numerous higher authorities around the world give more importance to the economic progress, whereas some individuals believe that other major progress different than economic sector are also essential for a nation to grow. Hence, both views are further elaborated in the upcoming paragraphs with valid examples and explorations.

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In many countries, the costs of living are rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.

Due to urbanisation and modernisation, living costs are increasing around the world everyday, so there is a negative impact on people and society as a whole. This essay shall discuss about various issues that are arising, and also some solutions to overcome them.

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Because of the rising cost of housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30’s. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether the juveniles have been forced to live with their nuclear families due to severe economic condition specially the housing matters is a crucial subject of public concern and debate. Although there are a number of welcoming points with regard to this statement, I will argue that the demrits of living with parents outweight the its benefits.

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Many people believe that it is easier to lead a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there are health benefits to living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, The development of technology helps people realize the benefits of healthy lifestyles. However, not only technology, every aspect of life is constantly evolving. So, Everyone also desire to change for the better. In my opinion, whether you live in the city or in the country side, you are easily lead a healthy life and also have health benefits too.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

It is an arguable topic that children should start learning the language of other country while they are in the primary school instead of secondary school. In my opinion learning a different language at folk school has more benefits than drawbacks.

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