IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 501

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree?

Over the past few decades, the change in our alimentary habits has caused poor nutrition and obesity to become more frequent, especially in many developed countries. That is why many people suggest that a tax on fast food would help us gain control over this worrying phenomenon. While a little bit skeptical about the long-term efficiency of the discussed measure, I agree that some adjustments to the tax system could benefit the society and diminish the impact of this transformation.

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In some cultures the old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the erlderly is appreciated in many countries. However the younger generation is more fluential in others nations. Both have merits but I am personally of the opinion that despite the benefits that the younger fostered, people should have gratitude towards the older people due to the fact that they bring about a lot of advantages to daily life.

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Every year more students to study online rather than attend classes on campus What you think the causes of this trends?What are the solution for that

Nowadays, the majority of students would sooner study online than study on campus. One of the main reason of that is easier accessibility and another one is cost of these kinds of classes. To encourage students to attend classes on campus, cost of online classes should be increased, also, some facilities should be provided for students on campus.

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More and more plastic waste has polluted cities, countrysides, and oceans. What problems does it cause and what measures can be taken?

A long with the advancement of technology and facilitating human’s life, some significant problems have emerged, such as an abundance of litters. It does have numerous effects on not only human beings’ lives but also animals’ lives. This essay will discuss the consequences of it and propose some practical solutions.

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The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important, and governments should spend more money on this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Prioritising education for younger generation is universally acknowledged, with countries investing significant resources in this endeavour. While educating adults who lack basic literacy skills is important, diverting more financial resources towards this cause may not be the most effective strategy. In this essay, I will argue against the notion that educating adult illeterate is more important, and government should allocate additional funds to the education of the adults who cannot read or write.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older. Discuss both these views anf give your opinion

Some people believe that children should start school very soon .But the majority of people claim that they should not go to school until they are older. It is clear that there are some advantages and some disadvantages in this issue and I will explain both opinions , Although I agree that children should not start school at a very early age.

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some people bekive that it is better language students in small classes other think the number of people the classes does not matter

Mini or individual groups are much more comfortable for students who are learning the language ,however, numerous people said, that groups are not important for learners.

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The tendency that news reports in media focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful for individuals and the society.

It is believed that the main trend of media channels, focuses on the serious problems and information society rather than positive news, this mainstream is harmful to social. The writer of this essay will consider the pros and cons to give own opion that follow the positive view.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their childen themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that homeschooling is becoming dramatically popular in most nations around the world. It is the writer who behaves that the benefits of inseparable connection between parents and their children and the development of independence far outweigh the drawbacks of preventing their improvement in debate skills.

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g.: goods, service, news) Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people’s demand to get things immediately is dramatically increasing. It is because of the hustle and bustle of life, the ability to get things instantly can give people a chance to promote themselves. It is the writer's opinion that this trend is positive due to its needs to develop in the service industry and as a potential trigger for an active lifestyle.

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For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, a significant portion of the employees work because of the money. This writer agrees that money is the main part due to the increase in cost of life and health.

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Some people believe that the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers instead of benefitting them individually. Do you agree or disagree

There are those who believe that guiding children to become benefical people for the community is the main goal of school instead of catering for individuals benefits. I totally agree with this point of view , due to the moral proplems.

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Many people who care for the elderly do not have enugh time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

Presently, there are some elderly carer cannot even take care of themselves due to their time management between work and life. However, this can be tackled by flexible working arrangements like working from home.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Overall, I agree with the statement that the internet is dominating the world, and because of its convenience and accessibility people prefer the internet to watch the news instead of newspapers these days.

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Governments should focus their spending on public services rather than on the arts(eg. music and painting). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Authority ought to concentrate their investing in community facilities instead of the arts such as music and painting. I think it is better to spend money on the public amenities because of reduction of pollution and support people in urban areas.

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Nowadays, more and more people from different cities are spending more time away from their families. What are the possible reasons and the effects on the people themselves and their families?

In this day and age, the number of individuals born in various regions who choose to stay far from their families most of the time is highly increasing. The essay will discuss why is this situation and some potential impacts it may have on people.

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Some people ay that all people should stay in full-time education until they are at least 18 years old . To what exten do you agree or disagree?

Education plays an important role in life of each person. Some believe people who are under 19 years old, should concentrate on education all of their time. The write’s opinion partly disagrees with this statement.

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Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment, discuss both views and give your opinions

Whether citizens can protect environment or not is a controversial topic. Although many people think that it is hopeless, this writer contends that individuals are able to make difference due to inspiration and the need of having initiator.

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Some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Whether what many people do being able to change things to save the environment is a highly controversial discussion point. This writer holds the belief that individuals can protect the surrounding for the reason of their enthusiasm.

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some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that the work of each individual cannot make any significant change while others tell the opposite. This author believes that many small contributions can accumulate into big difference and acceleration in solving small problem despite concerns about money investment in ecological events.

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