IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 534

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is quite normal for students to favor one subject at school over another. Some might prefer History for reflection and learning from the past, while others prefer to look forward with innovation by learning Science and Technology. This essay will outline the importance of History, and Science and Technology as a school subject and my thoughts on this topic.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views?

Transportation is an essential part of people around the world. Some believe it is crucial to invest in building new fast track railways as it will reduce traveling time. I believe that improvement of the current public transport should be given more priority and government should invest more on the infrastructure as it will gain more attention of people. This essay will discuss both views.

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Writing, reading, and maths are the three recognized traditional subjects. Computer skills should also be the fourth largest branch. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that computer skills are becoming necessary these days because every sector secures the data within files. So, writing, reading, and maths are the subjects that are considered to be basic in all whereas, now computer as a subject plays a crucial role in academic studies. Personally, I am in the favour of above statement because it has a positive impact on a child's personality, and also boosts the confidence of individuals when applying for the job. Furthermore, it also helps us to socialize around the world and do business from different areas. I will further elaborate on my points in this essay below.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Become expert in a such specialist qualification is a must amongst the students. Some higher educational institutions aim for their pupils to study not only fundamental ones but also additional educational program courses, meanwhile, others assume that it is more critical to allocate their time and pay attention to the subject that they are qualified. I perceive that this condition would have some impact on the students later on. Thus, I would like to explain both of those conditions and the following additional reasons.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

English is currently the most spoken language nowadays. Having English taught at school is definitely beneficial for the students. However, students must also be given the knowledge of their local languages too in order to prevent the extinction of it. In this essay, I will explain why is beneficial for student to have English taught at school, how to prevent the vanishing of local language, and why preserving the local languages is important.

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some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job,others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.

There is no disbelief that people should get a degree from university to get a good job or work and get a experience instead of getting a good job is very controversial and it has simulated and energetic debate among the communal across the world. one school it thought asserts that a university degree is a better way to get a good job while others disbelieve in that.

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Nowdays, many people complain that they have deficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

There is an issue among societies about the rising difficulty number of people who are not able to sleep in average sleep time. It leads to mentally and physically health problem and it can be solved by time management by each individual.

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nowadays many young people use social media do the advantages outweigh disadvantages

In a society of technology, it is not difficult to use networking, especially youngsters. In my point of view, there are more benefits outweigh drawbacks and this essay will discuss the reasons.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

most individuals are willing to live a high quality of life both in their working lives and daily lives. however, if they just repeat their regular life tracks and never improve their lifestyles and personal skills, they will not enjoy success and live in a better world of them which rather than they were before. In my opinion, I believe that it is significant that people can take risks for their lives, then they can step to a higher stage if they have gained the achievements. After all, bold people enjoy the world first.

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Nowadays a lot of young people use social media. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the society of technology, it is not difficult to use networking, especial is younsters. In my point of view, there are more benefits outweighing drawbacks and this essay will discuss the reasons.

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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV,vido games & other types of entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think problem can be tackled?

Recently, violence spread by TV shows, video games or online entertainment has increased parents’ concerns. This may be because children would imitate the behaviour in those media, since they are too young to self-critic what is acceptable and what is forbidden. This essay will first discuss how this process negatively influences Children, followed by a potential solution.

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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on the other planets.some people think that it is wastage of money and government should spend more money on addressing the problems of public.To what extent do you agree?

Some argue that the government is wasting money to discover life outside Earth and the money should be spent on solving problems in the society instead. I believed that as there are no significant discoveries despite the never-ending increase of budget, and there are more urgent matters in our communities, I totally agree the state should invest more on addressing social problems instead of discovering the unknown.

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Some people feel that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in country side discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that it is better to live in a metro area while other argue with the statement that they prefers to live in a rural area. I also believe that it is worth living in a rural area because of benefits like a clean environment. However, in this essay, we will discuss both the views with the help of suitable examples.

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Many people today would argue that cinemas are becoming irrelevant due to new streaming services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cinema is not only a branch of art, but also a good way for socializing. Since its invention cinema has created its businesses, actors and actresses. With amendmends in new streaming services, the alternative ways for watching a movie have increased. At that point there comes a question to minds: whether cinemas are losing their value or importance. It can be easily stated that thanks to the developments in new streaming services and new platforms accessing a new movie is becoming easier, however, the value of cinema is still existing in art society.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Developed countries should provide other types of help to the poor countries because, providing only financial aid is not sufficient for the poorer countries to solve poverty. I agree with the statement and this essay provides you with the supporting ideas.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that children should be motivated to be more competitive, while others feel that teaching them to be cooperative will be of more value as they enter adulthood. I believe that while competition can help young people be successful, cooperation is more important because it teaches them to work within a team , a crucial interpersonal skill.

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Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past. What may be the root cause of this behaviour? Discuss the reasons and possible results.

These days, it has become very common to see that both men and women give away a considerable amount of money on cosmetics and beauty care, whereas this trend was not usual in the past times. In my essay, I will explore the potential reasons behind this behaviour and discuss the possible its consequences.

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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

With the technological develepments we have reached today there is a common view like people will no longer buy books, newspapers or other paper based articles because they will have a chance to read them on internet wihout any payment. Even though they have good reasons to believe that, I partially disagree with them.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

There is an argument that any unpleasing situations like poverty or engaging in unsatisfied employment need to be accepted as they are, while others support towards putting effort on improving such situations. I strongly believe that a person should try at his or her level best to overcome any obstacles coming along the way to success. This essay will discuss both these opinions with examples.

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Are playing games more effective or harmful to children?

Some people believe that playing games has a negative effects on children whereas others consider it has some effective sides on their study and health at the same time. In my view, there are more drawbacks of allowing child to play games completely.

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