IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 535

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, university or even after finding a job. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage ?

Whether young adults should continue to live with their parents after acquiring educational qualifications and jobs is a recurring debate. This writer contends that the disadvantages of being over-dependent on others and weakening personal finance skills outweigh the benefits associated with the surplus in accommodation.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

While many people sometimes argue that judgment enhancements are an effective way to reduce crime, others argue that there are more creative ways to limit the problems. In my opinion, I think a long-term project would be more suitable.

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In today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. this accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays anybody with the help of smartphones can capture and share photographs and it can lead to unemployment because that accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. I strongly disagree with this statement.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

In recent times, most people are dealing with obesity worldwide. The statistics illustrate that the number of people who are affected by this has increased significantly and these individuals can be at any age. This essay will look at causes of this and propose some solutions.

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Some people claim that young people are more creative than older people in business or in the workplace. Do you agree or disagree with this?

In Kazakhstan, when people are over 60, they are often asked to quit the job, where they have worked. Even someone who has many years of experience over them. There is a stereotype that older people work worse than young ones and they cannot provide fresh ideas. This paper will attempt to disagree with the statement.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and gives you opinion.

The most politicians commonly believe that development of a country in various aspects would be feasible if the economic progression occurred. Therefore, most them have set financial developments in their priority. Nonetheless, some people suppose that improvements in other parts could be also crucial for a society. In this assay, both views and considerations will be discussed and concluding remarks will be presented at the end.

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To succeed in a business, one needs to know math’s. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Understanding the role of mathematics in defining a success is subject of a considerable debate. It is my contention that one's ability to master the math cannot define him/her successful because being successful is not about solving every equation better than everyone.

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Some people believe that money for education mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the current education system, some people argue that it is demanded to prioritize more budget on digitalization or providing sophisticated computers to students while some individuals believe that giving more salary to teacher is more essential. Therefore, in this essay I would like to give meticulous explanation regarding both sides and explain why it is more urgent to provide higher wage to the teachers so that our education system can be better.

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Some people think that sport is very important for society. Others, however, argue that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（重复2011 年老题）

The majority of people believe that sports are very important for the community. While others believe that physical activity plays a very important role in good for people's health. In this essay, I will discuss both views and I give you my own opinion.

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

It is believed that numerous individuals are living separately today than in the past. This essay will explicitly be stated its merits and downsides too.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Social networking sites are thought to be a negative influence for its users. I partially agree to this proposal not because the sites themselves, but because there are devils residing on the peripheral.

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Some people thik that getting a degree from univeristy is the best way to guarantee the job, other believe that it would be better to gain experience first. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People believe that having a degree from University is the good way to secure a job. Whereas others think getting an experience from work is a better way. I believe in the second opinion and in this essay I discuss both views and give my opinion also.

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Some people believe that people living in the twenty first century have a better standard of living compared to previous centuries. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Part of the world thinks that twenty first century offers a better life to the people compared to past centuries. I also agree with the above fact because this century has the most upgraded technology which made citizens lives easier.

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It is important for people to risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Bungee jumping off a cliff? Swapping jobs every two years? These are risks which I believe are necessary in one's life. Besides having a little fun, risks are an important part of life that can wire someone's brain to make groudbreaking decisions which is why I firmly believe that the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages, my stance on this matter is grounded as I have some concrete examples within my life to prove that risk taking is an important aspect in people's life.

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Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society. To what extent do you support this view?

So important a notion for taking criminals to jail is a possible way to save citizens from them. Personally, I agree with this view to some extent which I will elaborate below.

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In many countries, online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Some people think that this is having a negative impact on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public concern regarding an increase of purchasing goods and services via online platforms is increasingly topical. Some individuals argue that this activity has drawbacks in social lives. In response to this aforementioned issue, I thoroughly disagree that shopping through online shops generate negative effects due to posititive developments in saving time and money.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

In this state-of-the-art era, the development of technology can be useful and harmful, connecting and dividing. This advancement has influenced the conventional ways of working because people are able to work from everywhere. This essay will elaborate on the merits and demerits of such development and show how the negative points outweigh the positive ones.

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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

The post-modern era has created many sophisticated information technology; hence, people can conduct their work out of their workplaces. Even thought the aforementioned phenomenon may lead to two drawbacks related to abominable social behaviour and miserable failure in their communications, I strongly believe that the issue offers more advantages that may intensely bring effectiveness and thriftiness.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Risk is a fickle topic to discuss. Often the concept is portrayed as reckless and brash, despite there being clear benefits to executing...less than secure plans in both work and home life. In this essay I will outline the advantages and disadvantages of taking risks in one's life.

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It is important for the people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Risk is a fickle topic to discuss. Often the concept is portrayed as reckless and brash, despite there being clear benefits to executing less than secure plans in both work and home life. In this essay I will outline the advantages and disadvantages of taking risks in one's life.

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