IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 587

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music has been believed to be a means of connecting people regardless of how old they are or where they come from. This is true to me as well since music has no tangible border as it is assumed to exist, such as languages or generation gap.

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Plan A shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how a health centre has changed from 2005 until now. Overall, the centre has been expanded with more buildings and facilities for serving residents. Besides, there is a completely new entrance and more space for parking.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world area now "one big traffic jam". how true do you think this statement is? what measures can governements take to discourage people from using their cars?

Some people argue that the number of people who have cars has increased dramatically since thirty years ago in many cities around the world. As a result, these areas currently experience one big traffic jam. I strongly agree with this opinion because people who have cars tend to use their own cars rather than public transportation. In this matter, governments can take action to reduce the number of people using their cars by making a rule of add and even.

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Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advances in technology give some benefits to our industries. How technology brings advantages to ads and makes them easy to launch for kids. However, more people believe that advertisement has more drawbacks and should be banned. From my point of view, there are several reasons why we should stand for disagree.

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Some people think that money is the best give to give to youngster while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Under education, children always think that money can do everything. While some think money is the best gift for adolescent, I find it disadvantages. This essay will discuss why the benefits of giving money as a gift to youngsters outweighs the drawback.

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In many countries, schools have severe problems with student behaviours. What do you think the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There are an increasing number of problems regarding students’ behaviours at school around the world. This essay will discuss the causes of this attitude and suggest some possible solutions.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people claim travelling or working in another country, are the reasons to obtain foreign language. While some other people argue about that learning a new language can be caused with various reasons rather than vacation or business purposes. In this essay, I discuss both views and finally represent my viewpoint.

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It is important for children to learn the differences between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Children should be taught in infancy age to distinguish the good and bad. it is argued that in this way considering penalties is vital for them to comprehend this difference. I partially agree with this statement as I believe that there are other ways besides punishment to address this issue. Teachers and parents play an important role in bringing up kids and they can use banning and fining to punish children.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.

Nowadays, youngsters tend to spend most of their time on smartphones. This might be the problem the many parents are concerned of, and it has caused an argument of whether it is beneficial for the adolescents, or it has an abominable impact on them. In my perspective, the world has developed, and there are numerous advantages of the smartphones. Especially, in terms of education, it is very noticeable. In addition, it can assist the children to enhance their creativity using a fascinating method. There are reasons to substantiate the claim.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

The investment in training professional athletes are worshipped by some people for a country to outshine others in international sports, in addition to building facilities for general people to do exercise. In my perspective, whilst providing environments for individuals to practice sports could enhance public health, there are more advantages derived from cultivating professional sports players.

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Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that the Internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that while the internet has brought numerous positive changes and advancements, it has also given rise to various challenges and problems. This essay will show that this statement is completely correct due to the fact that internet causes cyberbullying and online thefts.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ( traditional methods of teaching versus the modern ones

In earlier years, the existence of advanced technology developed significantly. Some communities ensure that it will brings many advantages for the future in education sectors. Conversely, learning in traditional ways is more beneficial which meets the teacher in the class. In my perspective, learning subjects in a class has its own value, and online education will be an option for a student to study on many occasions.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a fact that in many museums, buying tickets is necessary while others are free. While this might have some disadvantages, I believe advantages outweigh them.

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The best way to solve the world‘s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, the world's environment has been affected due to many reasons. Some claim that hiking the price of the petroleum products are the best solutions to cure the world's environmental issue. In this essay, I will explain why I do not agree with this statement and provide examples to support my position.

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The spread of urban areas has led to deforestation and has caused many animals species to become endangered. Environmental groups are urging governments to protect these animals. What are the benefits of protecting animals? What can governments do to protect animals?

The number of animal species in danger of extinction has considerably increased over the last few decades resulting from human activities. Clearly, one noticeable human activity is the urban development. Therefore, it is vital that protection measures are taken before more animals become extinct. This essay will outline some benefits of protecting animals and suggest ways in which government can do this.

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Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Others think they should begin after 7 years of age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is an ongoing debate as to whether children start their formal education at a very young age or after 7 years old. While proponents of the early age starter argue that children may achieve early success in career whereas the opposites claim that children should have well developed physically before starting education. Although both sides make very valid points, I would argue that starting education at a very early age is better for most children.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days, migration has been increased from village to city due to being better lifestyle. Some claim that living in metropolitan is worse for the population's well-being, while others disagree with this idea. This essay will explain why I partially agree with this statement and provide examples to support my position.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweight the disadvantages?

In this contemporary epoch, the trend of studying abroad is surfacing day by day. The idea of attaining education from another country provide students an exposure to the world, but on the other hand learners have to leave their loved ones back home and face the universe all alone. According to my perspective, adavantages of studying in foreign country surpassed its disadvantages.

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Some people say that parent should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own discuss both opinions and give your opinion ?

Whether little ones should be full freedom to spend their time free time as per their wish is a topic of debate among our society and some people believe that parents should be responsible for planning their activities among their peers. This essay discusses both these viewpoints and in the end I will present perspective.

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Some people think that the best way to be successful in life is to get a university education. Others disagree and say this is no longer true. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that success is determined by a University education, whilst other's believe that success is a combination of multiple factors. In this essay I will discuss why I do not agree with this notion and form a conclusion.

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