IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 586

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

There is a growing issue amongst society regarding the excessive usage of smartphones for children. This issue arises from the fact that spending hours on smartphones brings a lot of fun for children. Despite the valuable knowledge that children can obtain from their gadgets, the adverse effects of smartphones are essential to consider for several reasons.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the number of youth increase significantly exceed the number of elderly. It is argued that the advantage of this situation outweigh the drawback, however, in my point of view, the growing number of youth has advantage in terms of greater economic growth and lesser dependency ratio.

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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

It is believed by some that living in an apartment is more advantageous than living in a house. Despite the fact that people can enjoy more scenic views by living in an apartment, I believe that living in a house has more advantages because it is less noisy than apartments.

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Schools are no longer needed because students could find so much information on the Internet and study at home. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Raising well-rounded individuals is condsidered as an essential task of schools for many years. However, with the invention of the internet, accessing information has become easier for individuals. At that point there comes a question to minds: whether schools are still needed in the modern world or not. It can easily stated that despite the invention of the internet makes easier to reach immeasurable information, educating pupils is still required the assisstance of a teacher and a school atmosphere.

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Today, people have become accustomed to living in “throwaway” society which means that they use things for a short time and then throw away. What are the causes of this? What problems may this lead to?

The phenomenon of " throwaway" is becoming more popular nowadays. Throwing away broken devices, clothes even people if they cause you a hussle !. In this article am going to discuss the causes of this condition and what are the consequences it can lead to.

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Some people say that Art ( eg Painting, Music, Poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that art is something special, which can not be made by everyone, in contrast, others think that anyone with a strong will might make a work of art. Individually, I assume, that every single person can craft art, even though not everyone can make it valuable.

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Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that it is crucial for zoos to be shut down due to their cruelty, while others believe that zoos play a vital role in protecting animals. Personally, I suppose that zoos should be maintained, though they have a few negative impacts on animals.

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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

The climate change is one of the most important topics discussed not only among people and analists, but also by the governments of almost every country. Which is due to the fact that it hides in itself the future survival of our generations. Yet, there are companies concerned more about their businesses around the world, standing against the reforms made to prevent scary outcomes from the climate changes. But, some also take it as an oppurtunity to start new types of businesses.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless.The only people travelling inside vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exmaples for your own knowledge or experience.

In our modern world, machines handling the process by itself is being observed in some areas thanks to the improvement in technology. In the vehicle industry, cars that have futures like auto-pilot or smart parking are introduced in the last decade. I believe that the future's vehicles will no longer be in need of a driver and the only people in those vehicles will be the travellers.

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Consumer electronics products are making our lives more comfortable and entertaining. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

It is widely believed that consumer electronics have significantly enhanced our lives by providing a wide range of products that contribute to comfort and entertainment. Personally, I strongly agree with this statement.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's education system has changed a lot when comes to learning culture. Nowadays, students are keener to learn additional subjects along with their major studies. There are other groups of students who only concentrate on how to clear their exams and get degrees. In this essay, we will discuss both the points and also I will provide my view on this education system.

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In many country people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

There is a rising issue among societies about the high number of people in many countries who do not often wear their traditional clothing and opt to wear suits and jeans (western style). It can clearly be seen that social media plays an important role in regard to the matter occurence and it leads to an adaptation towards the modern times. In addition, I personally think this is a part of positive development in society.

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In some countries it is now possible for people to buy products made in other countries to what extent the benefits of this development outweigh the problem

Undoubtedly, in this modern era, individuals are influenced by international products such as clothes, food and beauty care. I believe that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages of this trade, which I will hash out in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, there have been many debates surrounding spending too much money and attention on preserving balance of the ecosystem, and protecting wild animals and birds. From my perspective, I firmly disagree with this opinion from the general public.

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Many children no longer read books and instead spend their time using modern technology. While some people think this is a positive trend, others think it is a problem. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many children nowadays spend most of their time using new automation instead of reading books. Some people believe that this is a good habit, while others think it has dire consequences. In my opinion, I consider that using modern technology is good for children.

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory establishment? Explain your position.

In this era, no one can deny that technology and businesses are constantly on the rise.However,in this essay, I totally oppose when it comes to facing a company that wishes to build a large factory near your community and I will further elaborate on both arguments along with my own perspective.

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Organised tours to remote communities and other countries are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the local environment? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Thanks to technological advances, nowadays, there are a plethora of organised tours to diverse countries which are making people’s life better and more enjoyable. Some believe that it has numerous benefits on the development of the local people and environment, while others argue that it can lead to devastation of people and surroundings. But I strongly agree that organised tours should be avoided for the evolution and consistency of individuals and nature.

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Online games are becoming more and more popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online games?

Video games have become one of the world’s favorite pastimes, and gaming prevalence continues to grow every year. There can be positive effects of video games when played in moderation. However, there can also be negative effects when played excessively.

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Some people think that language should be taught in small classes, while other people think the number of students in a language class does not matter. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People have different views on whatever class sizes matters for language courses. While some agrue that large classes can allow teacher to focus more on providing quality content, I believe that teaching in small groups can cater to individual needs of each student.

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Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family

Many people today have argued that theyyou need to choose to spend time either with family and friends or dedicateing it to work. In my opinion, while spending more time for work demonstrates commitment and contributes to skill improvement, prioritizing time with family and friends is more preferable.

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