IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 714

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

A growing number of people are adopting modern technology to socialise.however ,there are predominantly two contrasting views. Where a section of society claims that the use of the internet has brought people together. While others emphasize that people and communities have become more isolated than before.I personally believe that advancement in technology surely brings people closer.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is considered by some that taking risks is impeartive in both personal and professional facets. From my standpoint, although there are merits from from accepting risks, I advocate that a lot of drawbacks may happen alongside outweigh the prositive sides.

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It is better to learn the way people lived in the past through films and video records than written documents. To what extent do you agree or this agree

These days, understanding how people lived in the past is crucial for gaining insights into history and culture. While films and video records offer a superior means of learning about the past, I would argue that written materials should have traditionally been the primary source of information and considered more valuable.

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. What are the most serious problems associated with obesity and what solutions can you suggest?

It is undeniable that nowadays in developed countries have been facing an overweight problem, especially in many young people. in the following paragraphs, causes and some sensible solutions for this issue will be outlined.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? What measure can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Car helps mobility for some people, especially in urban areas. It will be easier too to work with a car than with public transportation because we can start driving from home to the office without jumping into another kind of transportation. Not only that, we can freely decide the destination from where we are.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others fell that having a balanced diet it's more important.

It is widely argued that exercises is more useful for health, however others opine that balanced diet is better. Although while activities key to health, well balanced diet is good.

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Every day, millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? And how can we solve this problem?

In recent years, the amount of food that is thrown away uneaten has increased, achieving a great deal of media attention. Given that food waste has far-reaching effects, both nationally and globally, identifying the reasons behind it is key to finding the solutions.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important for children's development as other subjects so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree.

I disagree with the above statement that art classes, such as painting and drawing are as essential for a kid's development as other subjects therefore, they should not be compulsory in high school.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In recent decades, people have become more interested in historical stories of the buildings where they stay. There are several preconditions for this trend and various methods are used to find the stories behind people's houses or buildings.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Some people tend towards buying a branded products which are made up on a large scale by watching advertisements and marketing than choosing local goods.This leads to various consequences such as regional individuals will lose employment ,and the equipment will gradually disappear.By promoting awareness regarding the importance of property which are made by natives.

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Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.

It is true that young generation have some issues when they live in developed cities. This can be attributed to several consequences, which can require possible solution to be adopted

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some prisoners after completed their sentence, they become noble citizen in society. It is often argued that these people can be work as a deterrent from dangerous activity to youngsters. I agree idea that allowing such people speaking to the teenagers about their experience is the best way to discourage them from breaking a law. In this essay, further I will explain this with several reasons.

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Unversities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Some people claim that in each university major should be the same number of male and female students. I completely oppose this idea because, otherwise lots of people that pass their entrance exams successfully will not get into the univerity and the students that were accepted, probably will not be able to change their major due to this reason.

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Water resources around the world are falling deficient. Analyse the possible reasons and provide your suggestion ?

Nowadays,there is no doubt that resources depletion has increasingly become evident , water resources depleting throughout the world . In this essay , I will discuss many potential causes that play role in minimizing them and I also prepare my proposal on this issue ．

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, the technologies of the smartphone have become popular among youngsters. Worryingly, the advancement of phones such as social media has affected them in the way of communicate. The reason for this trend is the flexibility of smartphones for the users, ,however it can be solved by encouraging them to do an outdoor activity and reducing the screen time in daily activities.

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Many people believe that playing games and watching TV programs is beneficial but others say it doesn't improve the mental ability of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Playing games and watching TV are an enjoyable activity for many people. In fact, I strongly agree to those who argue that playing games and watching a program on TV are leading to many advantages for children.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As year goes by, the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries not only in the big cities, but they are now can be seen in the village. As a result there are many local business which become unable to compete and finally out of business. But, some people think that the closure of local busniess will bring about the death of local communities. I completely agree that the rapid developemnt of supermarkets will bring out the death of local business.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the development of science and technology, working and studying virtually from home or anywhere has become a trend. People become aware that access lesson and job task can be less costly and less time consuming when they do it from their comfort areas such as home, cafe, or library rather than participate onsite.

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Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet, to communicate. What are the advantages of international online? Are there any disadvantages to this?

The advancement of technology has brought us to a new way of communication like we have never imagined before. Plenty of online communication platforms have been established by far, such as WhatsApp call and video call, Skype, Zoom, Instagram video call, etc. The following essay will share about the advantages that these tools may give us.

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Many mesuems charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Since the industrialization period, which we can characterize a fabric work place, when you particularly know what you will do and what kind of profession you should choose, the time is gone. Now we become frier and more creative in choice of future profession, than the last and we are exposed of the risks of the instability in the same time. There are two opinions at this view.

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