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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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These days huge portions of population are moving from rural areas to urban areas. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

In the modern era, many people migrate from rural to urban areas. They get more exposure and opportunities in cities as compared to rural areas.

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Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school. Do you think the benefits of home-schooling outweigh its drawbacks?

Many parents select to educate their offspring at home instead of school. In my opinion, the demerits of home-schooling outweigh the merits.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could taken to solve them.

It is true that in many countries the people’s weight averages are going up. Moreover, they do not pay attention to their health and the volume of fitness is going down. In this essay the causes and solutions to tackle this problem will be discussed.

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In many parts of the world, it is common for one parent to stay at home and raise a new born child while other works full time to earn money. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there are several options for parenting such as both parents fully focusing on their work and only 1 parent that focusing on their career. While there are several peoples that still argue, from my point of view it will be better if at least one parent is commit 100% to their child compared to fully becoming a fulltime working parent.

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Some people think that advertisement on TV can be useful for TV viewer. Do you agree or disagree? Support your opinion with relevant examples.

It is sometimes argued that the advertisement while watching something on television could be beneficial. While I personally believe that this would create irritation sometimes. So, I disagree with this Statement.

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Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noising and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience

Education is a long learning process and students are future generations. Schools are students' homes where they spend more than half of their life and become knowledgeable there. Indiscipline students are troublemakers and disrupt the educational environment. Therefore, some people think that students who are disobedient could be separated into one group separately. It disagrees because for several reasons which I explain below:

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Some doctors show it is important for the old people to have regular exercise. However, some old people cannot get enough exercise. Why do you think this happens?How can old people be encouraged to exercise regularly?

Nowadays, the topic of elder people whether should do exercise, which is popular in modern society. It is a social problem , which probably influence their body health. And government should pay more attention to these situation and produce a plan to solve the phenomenon.

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Some people believe teenagers should follow the examples of older people, others believe it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give ypur opinion.

While some argue that teenagers should take examples from older people, others think that is better for the young generation to have their own way of thinking. People who learn from others' mistake, can make progress faster and safer but sometimes, new ideas create a better world which has a great contribution to society. This essay will elaborate on both ideas and a personal conclusion.

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Technological innovations have affected our lives. Do you agree or disagree?

It is of common notion that the constant technological advancement has lead to various changes in humankind’s general lives. Personally, I completely agree with this view for a variety of reasons.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's society, Education is an aspect of life has given utmost importance. While in many countries young people choosing to endroll in vocational training instead of pursuing university education. However, this practice brings about a mix beg of both and bane. I believe that work-based training surely brought positive benefits for a students. Therefore, the advantages clearly outshines the disadvantages.

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Some people think that to ensure a happier society, there should be only a small difference in the earninings between the poorest and the richest members. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I am not totally agree with this statement. It is true that much earning will elevate our happiness in a society. But, there are several aspect, besides earnings, to ensure a happier society, as follows: tolerance, coordination, and humanity.

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More and more people want to buy clothes,cars and other items with famous brands. -What are the reasons? -Is that a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many people are spending amount of money purchasing fashionable items like clothes, bags, cars and others in brand name. In the following paragraphs, this view will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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In some countries, health care and education are only partially funded by the government. Which do you think is better in terms of quality: free public healthcare and education or privately paid health care and education?

Health care and education are vital to every citizen of a country. In recent years, these two sectors have been the most discussed topics by the government. Most of the nations around the world have partially funded health care and education. However, the question will always be if it is better to access the free ones or the private ones. In my opinion, private hospitals and schools provide high quality services to people.

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The most important aim of science ought to be to improve people's lives.

It has been claimed that the main goal of science is to make everyone's life better. In this essay, I would agree with this point and give some potential reasons for it.

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In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe these measures restrict our individual freedom.Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

Presently, The number of video cameras in the public places are rising in order to decrease crime. However, some individuals argue that it must have sabotage our individual freedom. In the following essay I will discuss the pros and cons of utilizing video camera over the city.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two maps illustrate the change in the park named Grange from 1920 to the recent day.

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In recent years, online education is becoming more and more popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? Use specific details and examples to explain your opinion.

Online learning has surged in popularity in recent year. This essay suggests that while this mode of education may reduce costs typically associated with traditional schooling, online education can potentially impact children’s health and learning but also their current gaps in equality.

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Many students find it is harder to study at university or college compared to when they were in grade school. Why is this? What are some possible solutions for this problem?

Many college students encounter dificculties to study at university when they compared to when they were attending grade school. One of the main cause is that college requieres complex reading and some possible solutions are that the stduents need to read more academic readings and get support at tutoring center.

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Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Presently, people interact with each other through different methods due to the rapid change of technology. In the following essay, I will discuss how technology affects the types of relationships between people. In addition how it became a positive development for the people.

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Internet is an important part of our lives and we cannot imagine our job or studies without it. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?

It is certainly true that in this era the internet play a significant role in our lives, and it is impossible to imagination our life without it. There are many merits including, gives us to information, help us to communicate and demerits of using internet such as ,physical and mental issues.

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