IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 738

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that home-schooling is a better option. Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

Education is the key to a successful future or career. Some people insist that home schooling is the best way of teaching students while others believe that sending children to school is more beneficial. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages of both the ways of learning. In my opinion, sending children to school is the best way as it helps the overall development of students.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, in some countries, the population of younger adults are more higher than elderly people. I agree with the above notion and this essay will discuss how this trend benefits the society and surpass it's downside.

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Towns and cities are attractive places. Some people suggest the government should spend money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues to make them better to live in. Do you agree or disagree?

There has been a debate about whether more budget should be put in constructions of art-related facilities, and some believe that dong so can make towns or cities more livable places. I cannot agree with this statement, because there are many other areas that should be given priority to investment.

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as public safety is of the highest importance, it is often necersary to test new products on animals.It is better for a few animals to syffer than for human life to be placed at risk by understed products.

Recently, testing new products on animals has become a popular topic because it is necessary for public safety and many people think it is worth discussing. However, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether testing new products on animals is more beneficial than testing on people due to its importance to continuing life for society or not. Whatever each side of argument thinks, I strongly agree with the idea that when compared to tests on people, it is more risky, so animals are used for testing better.

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Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day. What is your opinion about this?

It is often thought that organizational departments should give employees some time for physical exercise during working hours. I strongly agree with this viewpoint and believe that they should be given some extra time in order to stay active during work. In this essay, I will give reasons why I support this idea.

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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly. Why is this case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?

Living in a world with cutting-edge technology, television has become an integral component of every household. It is undoubted that the younger generation spends more time watching television and less time being active. This essay will delve into the reasons for this phenomenon before providing solutions to the matter.

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Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?

The subject of money is one that is as old as time itself; though, some people think it is more important than others, knowing it's value lies in having the right mindset about it and how it can contribute to living a good and fulfilling life. Money or the lack of it determines a lot of things in our lives, where we live, how we live, and a lot major decisions we take are influenced by money. It's importance cannot be over-stated, it is a necesity that guides us in key decisions we take in life.

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Today, TV channels focus more on men’s sport than on women’s sport. Why has this happened? Should TV give equal time to women’s sports and men’s sports?

Nowadays，many find that there are more male sport activities than female sport activities on televisions. I will explain in this essay why I believe this is the case and why the TV should give equal time to male and female activities.

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Some people believe more actions can be taken to prevent crime, while others think that little can be done. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many have different views on how to tackle crime and whether or not it is possible to introduce effective measures to deal with this issue. This essay will demonstrate that more actions should be considered to reduce illegal activity in order to create a safer and more pleasant society.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating from high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is thought that pursuing higher education leads to a successful career ladder, while others believe that getting a job right after high school would be better. This essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am in favor of the latter notion.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that some time we must take a number of choices could affect on our professional or personal’s live. While it is a commonly held belief that it is crucial for people taking risks on their job and personal live, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that is highly risks and it may cost you a lot.

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In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In today's fast-paced world along with the technological breakthroughs happening all around us, communication has indeed seen different forms during its evolution. Some people believe that photographs have proven to be far more effective than the traditional means of written communication, while, few still are of the opinion of dominance of written mode of conveying thoughts and information. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and explain why a graphical form of communication is gaining popularity.

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this? What actions can be taken to solve this problem

In the recent past, traffic jam is increasing and that leads to problems. This essay will examine the main reasons which are individuals lifestyle and families size. However the possible solutions are changing in people choices and turning to smallest families.

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Some people believe that authorities need to plan for more vertical cities with really tall buildings since our land for the expansion of cities is limited. What are the advantages and disadvantages, in your opinion, of vertical cities that have really tall buildings and everything within these buildings?

Many officials need to shed more importance for town or city planning. The cities are growing wider with population density. Having vertical cities is beneficial as it has many advantages. The following paragraphs explain it in much detail.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems

Every country has a variety of languages which can be a reason for several problems ,social and real , My personal view is that is too hard for citizens and I will suggest some solutions that can be beneficial to the community of multiple languages.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health poblems. Sugary products should be made more expense to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

I strongly agree that sugary products should be made more and more axpense so that people consume less as much as possible. The below information describe about how increasing price can have good impact on people health.

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1. It has been suggested that cars and public transport should be banned from city centres and only bicycles be allowed instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the vehicles should be stopped from the urban areas and people should consume bicycles in order to get a destination. This essay completely agrees with that statement because many people use cars in city as the results it will lead to a serious pollutions and traffic jams.

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To meet the growing needs of food for the increasing population, country should make use of edible insects as foods. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but affect negatively the nature too. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

As every coin have two sides in the same ways eating insects also have two sides advantage as well as disadvantage.

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People believe that some individuals are born with leadership skills, while others think that leadership skills can be made. Discuss both views and give your idea.

We all know that skills are nothing but an ability of one person to do something in an good manner.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to ypur friend. İn your email 1: Describe where you live when you were a student at the university 2: Recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3: warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

first of all, I would like to congratulations to you. I am so happy for you. My friend, I want to talk about my university. My university is one the best universitiy in the country and world as well. There is a good education and good teachers. Morever, İt was located in the middle of the city. That is why, when you go outside, you can go to everywhere by walk. At the same time everything is centrilized thus, there is no need to use lots of public transport vehicle.

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