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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others say that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Masses believe that there could not be any better way to improve public health than by increasing the variety of sports facilities. Others think that many measures are required like basic awareness, education and free medical camps. I will elaborate on these points in forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some that all of the experts who are specialist in different professional fields have to stay in that country which provides educational services for them all their lives and use their knowledge for developing those countries, while there are others who think these professionals must choose the place that they intend to live there in their life freely. There are rational arguments on the both sides of this contentious topic which will be discussed in detail, followed by the personal writer’s view on this matter.

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The charts below reveal the differences in reasons that motivated students to choose a college or university in the UK, in 2008 and 2017.

The given pie charts illustrate why students choose a college or university based on different reasons such as suitable degree courses and quality of teaching in the UK in 2 years 2008 and 2017.

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1.Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often said that governments should treat healthcare more seriously rather than other areas. Personally, I disagree with this opinion; although healthcare may seem a sophisticated area, it is not really more important than other areas.

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People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and others vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

The importance of tackling environmental issues has now become more controversial with many people claiming that the Administration need to broadcast policies that raise fuel prices to limit unnecessary journeys made by cars and other vehicles. Obviously, I agree with this opinion and this essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this suggestion, as well as recommend practical proposition to improve environment quality.

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Traffic and accomodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Traffic and housing issues are raising and authorities should motivate some businesses to relocate from urban to agricultural areas. Although this trend can bring drawbacks for rural areas including, create pollution, and housing promlems In my opinion the merits of this trend outweigh demerits because this trend can contribute to mitigate traffic congestion as well as accomodation problems.

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Some people believe that studying at unversity or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both view and give your opinion

It is often said that going to a place of further education is the best way to have a successful career, whereas others think that it is preferable to go work immediately afterwards going educational institution. It is the opinion of this writer that the former choice is the best opinion.

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Student should spent time on working before thier University Study ? Do you extent agree or disagree?

Some people believe that pupils should do part-timeday task before starting their University college . It is agreed by some students that should spend some hours working, therefore this writer will show the agreement with this opinion.

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Students should spend more time to working before begining University studies . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is often said that pupils use much time for working is necessary before starting the college studies . Personally, i definitely agree with the statement above and the reason why i will show in the paragraph below.

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student should spend time working begin studying university to what extent agree or disagree

It is almost said that pupil need to take time for working before they enroll in the university. This writer agree with this point of view and will give a reason why

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Student should spend time working before begining their university studies.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Attending a place of higher education is always the best way to achieve success. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement and the reasons will be demonstrated in the essay.

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Technology has become an essential part of everybody's life.Nowadays, many adults are working from home and the most children are prefer to study from home.

Technology has become an essential part of everybody's life.Nowadays, many adults are working from home and the most children are prefer to study from home.Because, technology become more accessible and affordable for everybody and opens a significant number of opportunities.Personally, i tend to think that it has a negative effect,development for youngsters but positive for adults.

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24.Learning at university would be more effective if men and women were educated separately. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

University is an essential educational stage for new generations. Some people argue that separating men and women to different universities will benefit their learning quality. Personally, I believe men and women can learn from each other while studying in the same area , so therefore, I disagree on the topic.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been argued that it is better to allocate much more governmental budgets on railways systems in comparison with roads.I strongly disagree with this statement and through examples I will justify my opinion.

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Culture is turning similar around the world. What are reasons? What are the positive and negative aspects?

Undoubtedly, with the help of the Internet culture and literature around the globe have started to become more distinguished and similar in many terms. Therefore, this development is going to be beneficial in several prospectives.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A group of individuals present the view that travel and work in another country are the reasons that people learn a foreign language, whereas others believe there are many reasons in order to learn a language apart from your mother tongue. I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is said that taking risks brings a lot of benefits. However, it also gives us some drawbacks. First of all, it is obvious that taking risks will cause a great loss if people do it and fail. In my personal life, this loss might not be so harmful. However, it will be really harmful in professional life, because people take responsibility not only for themselves but also others such as colleagues, customers and their families. It will even damage society from an economic point.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

Nowadays big salary and job satisfaction is a paramount issue that is getting worse and worse.A significant amount of people believes that big salary is more important than jon satisfaction however I strongly believe that, job satisfaction is much more important than your big salary. I would argue that if someone does not enjoy with their work that’s mean that he cannot earn enough money due to he do not want to their business.

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Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the last few years, particularly after the COVID-19 pandemic, young kids and adolescents spend much time watching television and playing online video games. This has been criticized intermittently by people who consider such activities, as dangerous to youth health and especially worrisome for a growing brain. I almost completely agree with this belief. In this essay, I shall explain my opinion with supportive ideas.

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Q:Research has shown that overeating is as harmful as smoking. Therefore, the advertising of certain food products should be banned in the same way as the advertising of cigarettes in some countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that overeating causes similar damage to human health just like smoking, so it is necessary to implement prohibition of advertisements for both some food products and smoking. In my opinion, the former view is well-founded, yet the latter seems to be rather unreasonable.

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