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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a vital part of education.

Nowadays some peole think that having sport as a subject to study is a waste of money and time, while others argue that sport plays a significant role in education of pupils. However i agree with later statement because this subject helps students to refresh their minds and do some physical activities. This essay will discuss both statements and explain my opinion.

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Some people believe that children who are given pocket money every week have less problems managing money when they become adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

,some agree that children who are given pocket money every week experience few problems in managing funds during their adult life . For the past years in my country,this has become a topic of debate among school boards and parents whether children should be given pocket allowances or not considering the fact that they carry to school packed breakfast and lunch.

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Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the modern world, it is widely believed that children are wasting their time while they watch TV and play computer games. I completely disagree with this statement and I will be discussing the reasons behind my choice in the following paragraph.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The line graph illustrates the figure for passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain from 1950 to 2004.

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Some people think that libraries are a waste of resources ad money so computers should replace them.however others do not agree .Discuss both sides and give our opinion

It is suggested that with technological advancement libraries are no more needed, all necessary information could be found in Internet. Nevertheless, some people have the opposite view, they feel that books can't be replaced with computers. In this essay, I will overview both opinions and give my own in the conclusion.

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Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A portion of people believes the skill of handwriting is not required in our present time. I completely refuse this statement due to every child should know writing skills because it develops their brain.

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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?

A lot of people from poor nations do not have enough money to pay for the medicine that can cure their diseases. While some may argue that pharmaceutical companies should offer discounts to these poor people so that they can access treatment, I do not believe this can remedy the situation because these drug companies should run their business instead of sharing the responsibility to ensure drug accessibility to everyone. In addition, people will still have the financial burden often due to prolonged treatment courses.Reduced price level generates lower revenue, which can push down the research and development spending by the pharmaceutical companies, resulting in fewer drugs reaching the market and eventually exacerbating drug scarcity. In other words, offering a lower drug cost to residents of less affluent countries will not reduce their death rate from curable diseases because it is not the business of pharmaceutical companies to ensure people can obtain their medicine, but In...

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People should be allowed to obscure their identity online. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, the online world has a huge impact on human society. Compared to the last generation, it is natural for people to usually communicate in the online society. The interaction between people in online is causing a lot of various issues, and one of the reasons for these issues is whether people should be allowed to obscure their identity online or not. Personally, I am concerned about the side effects anonymity can bring.

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Some schools are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, while other schools have a very relaxed dresscode. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?

Some schools are extremely harsh about their school uniforms and the appearance of their students, whereas others schools without rules regarding dresscode. In my opinion, the merits of school uniform outweigh the demerits.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research thi

Nowdays , people has become increasingly interested for looking up about the history of their living house. The reason behind that the natural disasters and the right home price are essential for chossing their owners that they would to live in. However, today, individuals could find out the information about land further easily.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

There is currently a controversial argument over whether students can study other subjects in addition to their core subjects or they should focus on their courses to get an achievement. Although both groups have their justifications, I personally believe that the view of the first group is more outstanding. Both sides will be addressed in this passage.

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Due to the development of intelligent technology, computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people say this development will have a positive impact on humans. Others have a negative view on this issue. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

These days, intelligent technology is developing in its fastest speed ever. Following the development of intelligent technology, now it’s not wrong to say computer’s intelligence is catching up human beings. There are both positive views and negative views on this situation.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Based on the question asked, many possibilities can be formed to rather the advantage would outweigh the disadvantage in taking risks on both personal and professional lives. I personally believe that there is more advantage than that of the disadvantage.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children’s who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

There are opinions that a sense of competition in young people should be encouraged. However, other parts of society hold the view that youngsters who are taught to cooperate are better and become more valuable. The objective of this essay is to discuss both sides and I believe that healthy competition is beneficial in adulthood.

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Some people say that in our modern age it is unnecessary to teach children about the skill of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For decades, handwritten art are being decreased among teenagers since Technology has usurped this valuable role. I completely disagree with this point of view . In this essay, I will explain my view with relevant examples.

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Medical procedures for cosmetics purposes should not be allowed. Do you agree or this agree

The number of people who conduct plastic surgeries are growing in size nowadays, some are against such behaviours and suggest it should be banned, however, I am in favour of supporting such medical procedures due to various advantages.

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Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?

In recent years, doing unhealthy activities has been in the spotlight of public attention as well as that of the government. In this essay, the reasons caused by the phenomenon will be discussed followed by the measures that can address the issue.

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despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more walking?

There is an increase in people who exercise by walking nowadays, rather than before, but it is despite the advantages for health. This essay will discuss the underlying factors and some solutions to tackle this problem by encouraging more individuals to do that.

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Some people believe that children at secondary school should be streamed, i.e taught in classes according to ability, rather than being taught in mixed-ability classes. Do you think advantages of streaming children at secondary school outweigh the disadvantages?

The debate surrounding the streaming of children in secondary schools has gained significant attention in recent years. Supporters argue that grouping students according to their abilities provides several advantages, while opponents maintain that mixed-ability classes are more beneficial. This essay will explore both perspectives and evaluate whether the advantages of streaming outweigh the disadvantages.

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Nowadays individual take their family with them to abroad whenever they go for a business trip. What are the advantages and disadvantages on individual and on his/her family?

Business trip is where an individual is assigned for a travel to either internationally or domestically for work purposes. Many bachelor or bachelorette employees will choose to go for a business trip compare to married employees due to them having one less responsibility of taking care of childrens. However, there are some married employees that are being sent for a business trips will bring along their family members. And in this discussion I will write about the advantages and disadvantages of business trip on individual and on his/her fmaily.

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