IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 818

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people think that qualities a person needs to become a successful in today's world cannot be learned at university To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Receiving a high degree doesn't mean you are successful. To be successful there are many more attributes than education. Which are not taught in educational institutions. In this essay, I will state my clear opinion.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is becomingly increasing common that many manufactured goods for eating and drinking contain too much sugar and cause health problems for public. Some supporter argue that the government should increase the tax of sugar to encourage community to useless sugar . From my perspective while this approach is practice, there are other methods better than it .

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University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or dissgree?

Universities and schools are the places which help to make a bright future of any nation by educating the people residing there. Some people support the idea of same number of boys and girls in every class. I totally disagree with this said notion and In this essay, I will support my opinion with relevant examples.

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Travellers and business people often come into contact with other cultures briefly. What are the main advantages and disadvantages of doing so?

Local society has its own culture that represents the characteristics of how the civilisation was built. Nowadays, travellers and business people who made the short trip for their specific purpose to new places only have a brief interaction with the local cultures. I will shed some light on the pros and cons of this topic.

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Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of a bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today, the crime rate is increasing uncontrollably in developing countries. One school of thought holds that the cause of this increase is social issues as well as destitution, whereas others believe that it comes from the evil personality of man. The essay attempts to shed light on both perspectives before concluding that I am in favour of the latter notion.

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In order to improve a country's education system, young students should be allowed to openly criticize their teachers during class time. Do you agree with this? What are some other ways education systems could be improved?

In the times that we live in, open-mindedness and informality are considered more im portant than obeying value systems. Thus, we hear a suggestion from some quarters that students should be allowed to criticize their teachers openly, during class time. I do believe in open mindedness but I disagree with the viewpoint presented here.

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In many countries, there are a lot of students who commit suicide each year. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

Recently the issue has been brought into focus is a lot of students who commit suicide each year in many countries. This is an alarming state of affairs and we should pay more attention to this. I will point out the reasons and solutions about the problem in this essay.

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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

According to a few people kids should be sent to others countries because it is benefical for them.This essay will illustrate its merits and demerits. As for as my opinion is concerned it have more advantages.

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some people think that developments involving the internet have brought people closer together while others think that people and communities more isolated .discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some humankind think that developments like the internet have made them more nearer together, but some other consider that the internet causes isolation between people and communities. In our essay we discuss both these points of view, and I believe that the internet help a lot of people to become closer, so our world have become one village.

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Some people think that watching sport is a waste of time during leisure time. ‎To what extent do you agree or disagree?‎

Sports have always been a greatest pursuit, also serves as entertainment medium in every age group. Some people prefer to binge watch favorite sports games on television in their leisure time. I completely disagree with this statement and shall put forth my views in this essay.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this .

Over decades, there has been a belief that adults should support adolescents to work in a company or travel to another country at least one year before going to university. Despite the fact that there are many positive aspects of having experiences in terms of working and travelling before studying at university, with a careful consideration, there are also negative points of this.

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We find many countries around the world, paying for things using mobile applications (cell phone) is becoming increasingly common, so do these developed applications have advantages? Does the use of these applications have disadvantages?

In a somewhat futuristic world, e-commerce is growing day by day. People tend to pay online (bank card) rather than cash. This article will essay on the benefits of mobile hardware software, plus there are more satisfactory advantages of this technology than disadvantages.

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modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children .many children suffer because they donnot get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

In this day and out, majority of the parents are working in different fields such as doctors and engineers. They don't have enough moment for their offspring as a result, an individual becomes introverted as well as involved in illegal activities. I completely agree with the statement I will discuss both views and my pinpoints in the forthcoming paragraph.

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Experts say if the old people spend time and get along with others and excercise everyday will be healthier and happier. However, many elderly are suffering from loneliness and lack of fitness. Discuss the cause and solution

It is true that the elderly allocate their time to socialize and work out will have a chance to become healthier and happier, nevertheless, they are dealing with isolation and weakness. In this essay, I will discuss reasons for this phenomenon and present solutions to mitigate this problem.

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Many countries face the problem of low voter turnout in their democratic elections. What are the problems associated with this and what can be done to remedy it?

In this cutting-edge epoch, a number of nations face the problem of low voter turnout in their democratic elections. There are numerous problems associated with this occurrence and by taking several measures this problem can be tackled. Which will be elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Although there has been a significant increase in agricultural advancements, a number of people across the world are striving for food. This is mainly because of increase of population and loss of soil fertility. There are numerous solutions to deal with hunger problem all over the world

Recent technological advancements can make the productivity of agricultural crops and boost the number of population. However, despite of increasing food production, many people in the developing countries suffer from starving or need more food. Althoug it is difficult to tackle the issue, we can make a deal with it through the cooperation between the developing countries and developed countries.

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Some people like to travel to somewhere new and different when they go on holiday, while others prefer familiar places. Do you think there are more advantages and disadvantages to visiting new places?

Always people try to go somewhere after the work, or study for have a rest. Some kind of people want to familiar places for holiday but a large number of people want to see new places . Visiting new places have more advantages and disadvantages. I will explain my perspective in my essay.

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Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Discuss the two views and give your own opinion.

History elusidates the crucial historical events as well as the life of ancient people. While there are some critisisms regarding the necessity of teaching young individuals the knowledge in the past since those are not useful for a fast-changing world encountering extreme weather nowadays. I am in favour of the lessons people could learn from history, which could deter the younger generation from making the same mistakes, as well as being proud of their roots.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Technology developments have changed people’s lives in many aspects. Some people consider the changes are positive and some others hold counter arguments. In my opinion, modern technologies bring about positive effects more than negative effects.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Over-crowded metropolitans have become a major concern of the ruling party since this evokes some discomfort in terms of governing. This essay will examine the main influences of this inclination and purpose some solutions to tackle it.

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