IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 822

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

In today’s world, certain numbers of parents are used to purchasing for minors whatever they want, and also permit them to perform their all desires. Many people hold the view that such style of parenting can lead to a poor upbringing and a misbehavior their children, as well as to big challenges for them in the future. This essay will support this opinion and provide relevant examples.

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It is becoming increasly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is widely argued by some that, taking a gap year in order to work or travel before beginning one’s tertiary education is beneficial. Although this has some advantages, it also has some disadvantages.

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Some people think that success comes from hard work and determination . But some people believe that money and physical appearances are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that hard work and dedication are important in order to become successful while others believe that wealth and a persons outlook are more important . This essay believes that without hard and dedication no one can become successful.

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In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?

Classical music has fallen out of favor among youngsters in some parts of the world. While the causes of this trend vary, I believe efforts should be made to encourage this age group to pursue this genre of music.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Taking a gap year in some countries is commonly recommended to young people who have just finished high school. There are a number of benefits and drawbacks of spending a year travelling or working for youngsters.

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

Traffic jam is one of the serious global issues in the current period, they happen in many towns and cities. The factors of this problem and the ways to solve it will be presented in the essay.

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Counties with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nations having more working hours are leading the world economically as per the statistics. I contend that working continuously with no time to relax and refresh would have repercussions on the life of the individual despite contributing to the country's GDP. In the modern era where mental health crisis and lifestyle diseases are the hot discussion, stressful job hours is an issue to be addressed.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Large cities are seen as places of opportunities; however, life in urban areas can be dramatically difficult for inhabitants. Therefore, government should improve city life for migrants. In subsequent paragraphs, this essay shall see my explanations of some drawbacks.

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Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, a country is considered developed and prosperous when it has many skyscrapers in big cities. However, many people suggest that we should use that money for schools and hospitals instead of building impressive buildings. This indicates that the government has to consider carefully and develop both areas equally.

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Modern technology, such as personal computers and the Internet, have make it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office every day. What are some of the advantage and disadvantages of this situation?

Presently, many large as well as small scale companies providing facility to do work from home rather than travelling to office premise. Internet plays vital role in modern world for development of technologies. Initially, most of start up online business moving forward while working in any corner of the cities. The below paragraphs provided some of advantages and disadvantages.

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Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary epoch,there is heated argument over the issue that number of individuals believe sports and games are necessary for community.Whiles others oppose this notion that pupils should have to participate in leisure activities such as painting,chess,table tennis etc.This essay concurs in formal mentioned phenomenan.However,both the view will be discuss in upcoming paragraph with the logical conclusion.

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These days in many countries fewer and fewer people want to become teachers particulary in secondry school. What are the reasons for this and how could the problem be solved.

Teaching line is the best occupation in the world as they build children's future. It is a respected job from my opine . However, nowadays in numerous countries face an problem lacking of teachers in secondary school , people do not want to be specialised in teaching line ,well there are several facts behind it and I give a brief solution to overcome this complication in the essay.

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Modern technology is now very common in most workplaces. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology?

These days modern technology is becoming very popular and usage of technology has improved in workplaces. I strongly believe that technology has eased the jobs, it certainly some negative impacts too.

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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first months after the birth of their babies. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is universally accepted that many countries are already allowing their pregnant employees to take maternity leave in the first month upon they gave birth to their child. ,However my opinion is quite different from many.

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Many people rely on news reporting to their information. However some think that the journalists cannot be trusted. Do you agree or disagree and what qualities should a journalist have?

undoubtely it is true to say large amount of masses depend on news describing to their information.while other opine that we do not believe on the reporters.I agree with the fact that people depend on reporters as important source of information.I do no agree journalists cannot be trusted.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

Most people who work full-timetime jobs find themselves with little to no free time at all to enjoy their hobbies or to exercise. This situation created a health problem that you can find in most communities. In this essay I will explain the reasons for this problem and suggest some solutions also.

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In your opinion, what is the most important thing that individuals, businesses, or governments can do to ensure a sustainable future? Give two reasons why this is the best thing to do

The amount of plastic produced in a year is roughly the same as the entire weight of humanity, which harms the environment and threaten our sustainable future. To change that, individuals, businesses and governments must use and encourage eco-friendly products.

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Some think that people should not change th9eir jobs while others think they should because it brings advantages for themselves, the company and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that changing careers should not be done while others think that due to the advantages that can be received, jobs should be changed from time to time. In my opinion, individuals should be changed their jobs frequently to get the maximum benefit.

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more and more people are working from home rather then at the workplace. Some people say that this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the modern era, telecommuting has become a controversial topic. Some people opine that it is beneficial for workers and their families if they work from home. But others believe that it causes more stress in the household. I will discuss both prospects and my own point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People think that the secret life details of political leaders should not be released in news. I totally disagree, as they are role models for society, however, some personal space is everybody's right.

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