IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 826

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing are as important for children's development as other subjects so it should be compulsory in high school. Do you agree or disagree.

I disagree with the above statement that art classes, such as painting and drawing are as essential for a kid's development as other subjects therefore, they should not be compulsory in high school.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In recent decades, people have become more interested in historical stories of the buildings where they stay. There are several preconditions for this trend and various methods are used to find the stories behind people's houses or buildings.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

Some people tend towards buying a branded products which are made up on a large scale by watching advertisements and marketing than choosing local goods.This leads to various consequences such as regional individuals will lose employment ,and the equipment will gradually disappear.By promoting awareness regarding the importance of property which are made by natives.

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Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.

It is true that young generation have some issues when they live in developed cities. This can be attributed to several consequences, which can require possible solution to be adopted

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some prisoners after completed their sentence, they become noble citizen in society. It is often argued that these people can be work as a deterrent from dangerous activity to youngsters. I agree idea that allowing such people speaking to the teenagers about their experience is the best way to discourage them from breaking a law. In this essay, further I will explain this with several reasons.

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Unversities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Some people claim that in each university major should be the same number of male and female students. I completely oppose this idea because, otherwise lots of people that pass their entrance exams successfully will not get into the univerity and the students that were accepted, probably will not be able to change their major due to this reason.

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Water resources around the world are falling deficient. Analyse the possible reasons and provide your suggestion ?

Nowadays,there is no doubt that resources depletion has increasingly become evident , water resources depleting throughout the world . In this essay , I will discuss many potential causes that play role in minimizing them and I also prepare my proposal on this issue ．

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, the technologies of the smartphone have become popular among youngsters. Worryingly, the advancement of phones such as social media has affected them in the way of communicate. The reason for this trend is the flexibility of smartphones for the users, ,however it can be solved by encouraging them to do an outdoor activity and reducing the screen time in daily activities.

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Many people believe that playing games and watching TV programs is beneficial but others say it doesn't improve the mental ability of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Playing games and watching TV are an enjoyable activity for many people. In fact, I strongly agree to those who argue that playing games and watching a program on TV are leading to many advantages for children.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As year goes by, the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries not only in the big cities, but they are now can be seen in the village. As a result there are many local business which become unable to compete and finally out of business. But, some people think that the closure of local busniess will bring about the death of local communities. I completely agree that the rapid developemnt of supermarkets will bring out the death of local business.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the development of science and technology, working and studying virtually from home or anywhere has become a trend. People become aware that access lesson and job task can be less costly and less time consuming when they do it from their comfort areas such as home, cafe, or library rather than participate onsite.

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Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet, to communicate. What are the advantages of international online? Are there any disadvantages to this?

The advancement of technology has brought us to a new way of communication like we have never imagined before. Plenty of online communication platforms have been established by far, such as WhatsApp call and video call, Skype, Zoom, Instagram video call, etc. The following essay will share about the advantages that these tools may give us.

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Many mesuems charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Since the industrialization period, which we can characterize a fabric work place, when you particularly know what you will do and what kind of profession you should choose, the time is gone. Now we become frier and more creative in choice of future profession, than the last and we are exposed of the risks of the instability in the same time. There are two opinions at this view.

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Classroom attendance at universities should be optional. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays many people choose to continue their study to the university. There are some rules that need to be followed after they join the college as a student, such as dress code, number of credits, minimum GPA and attending class. Some universities make classroom attendance as a not mandatory thing because some people can follow the subject without meet with lecturer in the class. Despite this benefit, there are more problems about this idea, and I disagree with it. This essay will examine my opinion and provide the detail of the issues.

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Some educationalist think that international exchange visit will benefit teenagers at the school. To what extent do advantages outweight the disadvantages.

Some experts believe that international exchange visits might benefit adults at the school .Although, there are disadvantages.But , the merits outweigh the demerits since it helps to know a foreign language and culture.

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Today many children and teenagers are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons to explain why many young people are obese and give some solutions to fix this problem.

Nowadays, obesity is becoming a vital concern in youngsters. Because of this many children suffer from health-related issues. In this essay, I will be implementing the possible grounds and logical solutions to overcome this issue.

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Despite the environment concerned raised by scientists, people are not changing thier lifestyle. Why is this the cause? What could be done to encourage the people to save the environment.

Environmentalists have already spread an abundance of awareness among inhabitants for the conservation of nature, still they are not alternating their ways of living. In this essay, I will shed light on the reasons along with ways to motivate them.

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We live in a world of technology these days. The internet brings with it clear advantages and disadvantages. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

Technology is ruling over everyone's heart and mind these days. Internet has brought a revolution in one's lifestyle be it personal or professional. Certainly, this development has its own merits and demerits. The same shall be envisioned in this essay along with my opinion in the aforementioned paragraphs.

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Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Write 250 words.)

People working in or entering adulthood might question or have discussed why some higher positions earn more salary than people in the lower positions, the tasks of which seem greater. Personally, I totally agree with the points that senior or managerial levels should be paid a higher salary than elementary to middle levels.

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Doctors recommend that older people exercise regularly. However, many of them do not get enough exercise. What are the reasons? What can be done to encourage them to exercise more?

Despite the doctors' recommendations a huge amount of old people do not get enough exercise. Lack of facilities can be seen as a reason of this situation. They do not have enough state sports centres also they can not afford private ones. Governments can fix these problems with increasing the number of sport facilities.

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