IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 826

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries, the legal drinking age is 18, while in others it is 21. What is your opinion on the appropriate legal drinking age, and why?

It is seen that drinking is quite common around the globe there are around 180 plus countries in the world and all of them have their own set of rules for the age of drinking, some of them make the legal age of drinking 18. On the other ,hand others set it to 21. In my ,opinion the legal drinking age should be 21 and I will explain it further in this essay.

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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movies do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples.

The entertainment industry has become a huge part of people's lives. Various movies, songs, dramas etc, tend to grab public's attention and it gives them a chance to blow off some steam from their usual day-to-day routine. Movies play a major role in capturing our minds as it has varied range of categories, from action to horror. However, some stories can guide and teach the audience about life, while stories are just to help the folks relax and let go of their stress.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Other say these are the not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people are encouraged to be able to communicate in English. In this case, people can have an opportunity to go abroad for travelling and working in there. However, there are other aspects of why the language is learnt. In this essay, I will elaborate more.

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Many people believe that the priority of the government should be to ensure growing economy. While others believe that the government should focus its effort on uplifting the less fortunate? discuss both views

Some people believe that the government should prioritize economic growth. However, others believe that improving the lives of the lower class people should be its main focus. This essay will discuss both views from different perspectives.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As a young adult, thinking of a career path is very vital. It motivates you to keep on moving forward to achieve your dream job. Some people say that knowing early your desired job and staying with it will likely bring more satisfaction in life compared to those who often change careers. In my opinion, chasing your dream job would benefit more a person's life.

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Some people say that the current level of air travel is acceptable where as other people believe air travel should be reduced and the government should play a role in this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Some argue whether we could reduce or accept the recent percentage of flight transport used, and say that regime agencies have to take part in this. I think, compared to all modes of transportation, flight transport reduces time taken enormously and provides enough comfort. Hence, we can definitely see this as a positive change in the society.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people believe that music is a wonderful way to conect everyone in every countries together, no distinguising about ages or ethnicity. In my opinion, I completely agree with this comment.

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The children spend most of their time taking part in sports in a serious way (…not only for fun). Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The children should consider to invest most of their hours to take a part in sports, not only for fun but also for serious way. I believe that there is a negative development considering not all children want to be good at sport.

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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Some people think it is a brilliant idea and brings a lot of benefits to young students; others, however, deny. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Performing a job while having education has become a matter of debate, among people. A section of society believes that it has manyfold merits whereas some disagrees.This essay shall explicate both viewpoints before approching an opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people say it’s a waste of time to plan for future. It’s more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether one should prioritize focusing on the present or planning for the future is a topic that elicits diverse opinions. While some argue that planning for the future is a futile endeavor, advocating for living in the present, others emphasize the importance of balancing immediate experiences with future aspirations. In this essay, we will explore both perspectives and argue that a balanced approach, acknowledging the significance of both the present and the future, is the key to leading a fulfilling life.

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Topic: Some people say it’s a waste of time to plan for future. It’s more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether it is more important to focus on the present or plan for the future is a matter of personal perspective. While some argue that planning for the future is a waste of time, advocating for living in the present, others emphasize the importance of balancing present experiences with future aspirations. In this essay, we will explore the merits of both perspectives and argue that a balanced approach, appreciating the present while planning for the future, offers the most comprehensive and fulfilling approach to life.

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will no longer be neccessary because people can see historical objects and works of art by uging computer

Nowadays, the internet is becoming increasingly convenient therefore some people believe that we can see historical objects and works of art online without going to physical museums. While I accept this point of view, I also believe that there are still many reasons some people prefer to visit museums in person.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept bad situation, such as unsatisftory jobs or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The life all about satisfaction. While some individuals believe that living at minimum and earning less is acceptable, however, other opposes that everything is worth a hustle. Analysing that I truly believe one must keep trying and improving bad situations in life in order to live a fulfilled life. This essay will discuss both the notions.

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Nowadays, people all over the world are spending more and more time apart from their families. Why is this happening? How does this affect people and their families?

lately, all around the globe, more individuals spend time separately from their folks I personally opine that this is happening due to the growing use of the internet specially social media this phenomenon leads to depression after not being able to emotionaly connect the family members and also it influences the families by not being capable of managing issues while being in trouble.

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Part time courses are on the rise and students are taking them up as an alternative to full time courses. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In this era, universities are offering irregular hours for studying as well, and the majority of learners are accepting it. From my perspective, it has more benefits rather than drawbacks and the same would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is certainly true that online shopping is has become more popular than in-person shopping and nearest future most of shopping centers in cities and towns will disappear. I totally agree with the statement, people theses days perfer to purchase their goods using technology instead of visiting stores, this because online shopping gives people access to global markets and it is convenient as well as environmentally friendlly.

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Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful, but they are also likely to suffer from negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

All around the globe, office durations and working days are usually the same which eventually helps the nation to gain economic growth. However, the working schedule often leads to fewer social meetings mainly because of the work stress and less time to meet friends and family. Analysing that I completely agree with this notion.

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Nowadays children watch lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently,more and more children have excessively watched TV and played video games as a kind of entertainment. It's no doubt that using advanced technology brings us tremendous advantages. However, this trend causes several drawbacks and mental problems. In the following, I will deliberate more examples of the negative side of watching TV and playing video games heavily.

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Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced Is it positive or negative trend?

Products are brought from other countries to supermarkets. It might be a cause for the development of countries...😕

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some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that could be better spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree with this view?

The art is creativity of our mind, significant number of individuals think that the government is wasting fund on the arts whereas other peoples believe that government need to spend money on other service such as healthcare and education sector. I partially concur with this statement. This essay will demontsrates both view.

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