IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 839

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot ?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over conveying value by art that science and technology cannot provide. I would contend that there are a lot of values of modern science and technology which the arts can convey and help people get more knowledge about life that the former cannot.

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Certain people believe that the only way to reduce crime sentencing criminals for longer time periods, while others believ alternative methods should be used to lower crimes. Discuss both vieve and give your opinion

It is argued that somes think about reducing crime sentences criminals helps to improve their behavior, however others believe that it is correct to alter another principle to relieve situation. In my opinion, according to committing should be sentence by authorities. The essay will discuss these ideas and provide with relevant answers to question.

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?

It is true that there is a significant population of the world is affected by stress. This essay will outline a number of reasons for this problem and a number of possible solutions to help tackle the issue.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both thesis and give your own opinion.

Many people think that we all have some kinds of gift when we are born, and it affect a lot for our lives. Then, can not we be good at somthing by education? In this essay, I will expain both side of view and my opinion.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent somewhere else. To what extent do you agree with this view ?

Art is the colourful field of life which can bring happiness in many of our lives. When we hear a name "art" we usually think about the sketches or paintings however, it is a wrong concept. It comprises multiple aspects of life i.e., acting, music, comedy, hosting, designing and photography along-with paintings.

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The advent of the internet has made it it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working arrangement has more advantages or disadvantages? Share personal experiences In your essay.

The ways of working are changing with the enormous development of technology. As a result, a growing number of people prefer to do their duty from their home instead of commuting to offce.In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of working from home and try to draw some conclusions.

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Some people belive that advertising has a strong effect on a person's decision-making process. Other people believe that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A handful of individuals opine that broadcasting has a strong effect on a person's choice in order to purchase something;however ,others think that it has little impact on them whenever they buy something. I agree with the former viewpoint this is an attempt to delineate both the conflicting views along with my opinion in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages togeather. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

According to some people music sole to life.It cherishes every moment we live and is one of the best ways to reflect your emotions and feelings.It has been suggested by some people that music is a great means of connecting humans from various cultures and ages and bringing them closer.i totally advocate the statement and this essay will elaborate on my opinion.

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

The majority of students want to manage their time by themselves. They require to choose when they need to study or let's say play video games and etc., (other leisure time activities). It is agreed that managing your own time resources is quite important or even compulsory. In my opinion, it is an important skill and it can make students very responsible and motivated towards education.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in over-weight people in the society? How can this problem be solved?

First of all, we are very pleased to have an opportunity to introduce our corporation, Korea Water Resources Corporation (K-water). K-water is a South Korea-based, state-owned water utility, responsible for water supply and hydropower, as well as waterfront development business across the country, as a full-service developer, owner, and operator. K-water has substantial resources and stable financial and technical background.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Many people with health issues are trying alternative medicines and treatment instead of channeling a medical doctor. Some people think this as a positive development. But, based on my point of view, I think this is a negative approach.

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In many countries, the crimes rate amongst underaged people has been rising. Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem.

Crime rates among underage people are a growing concern in many countries. This phenomenon has various causes and requires different solutions to tackle the problem effectively.

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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills ofhandwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most important questions concerns whether it is necessary for children to learn skills in handwriting. For decades, this question has persisted as a controversial topic and polarized the public view. While some strongly encourage their children to learn this skill, others have had the opposite opinion.

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The process diagaram details the steps by which liquid chocolate is produced from cocoa beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The given diagram depicts the processing of cocoa beans becoming liquid chocolate with three main steps from harvested beans to liquid chocolate produced.

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your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. he would like your advice about finding a place to live. write an email to your friend. in your email -describe where you lived when you were a student at the iniversity -recommend the best way for him to look for accomodation -warn him of mistakes students make when choosing accomodation

I hope you are doing well. It is delightful news to hear from you about your studies. First of all, I would like to congratulate you. According to your request, I can help you to find a place to stay while doing your studies. When I was following my undergraduate degree, there was a nice and calm place to stay. Additionally, it was located within walking distance of my university.

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Some people say that the Internet will soon become the preferred method of delivery of news and information, causing newspapers and magazines to gradually disappear. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, many people have argued that the public will encounter news and information only through the Internet not from newspapers and magazines which will be no longer used.

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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The population in the city is growing in size nowadays, due to the opportunity to have better future, however, I strongly believe such phenomena foster various downsides in big cities which lead to health hazards.

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Nowadays, the rights of young people are not respected. What solutions can you suggest?

Everyone should be respectful it does not matter if he is young or an adult. For example, many people do not care about kids’ emotions in what they think or like. I have some solutions that maybe helps.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Life in a country where a different language is spoken can be challenging. I agree with the idea that people who put themselves in this situation should prepare for significant social and practical problems.

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The arts including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

Skills are seen as a major aspect of society which comprises craft, sound and play. This essay will explain how skills is been used as means of entertainment in our society and how they can provide job employment in the future for the upcoming generation if incorporated into our institutions' syllabus.

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