IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 882

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this?

There is an ongoing discussion regarding the gap between school and university education. Education plays an important role in our daily lives.An ignorant cannot compete with an educated one.Nowadays,it becomes a trend that before going for graduate studies pupils take some years pause.This situation has both pros and cons.However, as far as I am concerned,its drawbacks overweight to the advantages.

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fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet

Fast bread is increasingly becoming widespread around the world and is commonly included in our daily diet these days. Some believe that the consumption of this type has a detrimental effect on our health and disrupts lifestyles. This essay will discuss whether this type of diet is disadvantageous.

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Some children find some subjects example mathematics and philosophy difficult so these subjects should be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the curriculam of school, there are some subjects for the juveniles which are compulsory like mathmetics or philosophy. There are some debates about whether these subjecst should be mandatory for children or not because of their complexities. I personally agree with the situation because courses like mathematic and philosophy is essestial to fulfill the education of children.

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Most countries allow 18year old to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow driving at that age.Others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25 years.Discuss both views.

Most countries accept that young adults starting driving a car. Although some would argue that there is no problem to allow them to drive, I believe that the right age to star driving is 25 years old becuase they are more mature to make choices while driving, and they need to have a job.

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Should a city try to preserve its old , historic buildings or destroy them and replace with modern buildings? What is your viewpoint on this ?

It is often argued whether ancient monuments should refurbish for modern structures or preserve for future . Personally, I agree with the latter view because old buildings are an emblem of distinct culture and heritage .

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

There is no doubt sports play a crucial role in society. increasing sports facilities will be motivated the people of any country .however, while some believe that these facilities would not enough for people's health and also it needs more activity for them. I would agree with those who argue that improving one facility should not be the best way for civilians.

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Sometimes, companies choose people based on their personality rather than skill set. Why do you think that is the case? What do you think is more important – personality or skills?

Rhinomaxillary mucormycosis located in the periodontal tissue (gingival and alveolar bone) are rare. Most often, the clinical presentation is that of a non-healing extraction socket. Initial signs are non-specific necrotic ulcer, which later turns into a characteristic black necrotic lesion.

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The uses of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

A 58-year-old patient with controlled diabetes reported to the Department of Periodontics with a chief complaint of painful multiple boils on upper left teeth along with mobility from past 20 days. The patient had recovered from Covid-19 infection two months back, for which he had taken steroids. Past dental history revealed extraction of carious 26 one month back. Clinical examination revealed generalized periodontal abscesses and periodontal pockets in relation to maxillary teeth , multiple pseudoclefts, grade III mobility wrt teeth # 22 and 25 and grade II mobility of teeth # 21,23 and 24 [Figure 2A]. Also, grade I mobility was present in teeth # 11,12,13,14, and 15. An unhealed socket was present in relation to tooth # 26 and soft non-tender palatal swelling was present on the left maxillary arch. The patient was already on antibiotics and analgesics prescribed by the previous dentist. Mucormycosis was suspected and therefore a CBCT was advised. The findings were suggestive of...

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Television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family we jus watch television. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that television breaks our social life and, consequently, a person who watches TV stops communicating with their family and friends instead of it they start watching television. Many including me disagree with this point of view and consider it nonsense.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with health issue involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent you agree or dis agree?

In the modern era, the number of obesity among people has dramatically increased, which contribute to more workload for public health organization. Some people believe that the promising strategie to decrease this disastrous condition is to put physical program more seriously in school. In this essay, the reason to support my agreement to the view will be presented in the following paragraphs.

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Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the world around us is facing new trends such as small businesses are being disappeared to alternatives like multinational companies. But, what can be the possible drawbacks and feedback of this trend?

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In some companies, social skills are given priority over qualifications when screening their possible employees. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

When screening employees, social skills are one of the factors that are more important than qualifications. However, there are several advantages and disadvantages of this situation. Here I will discuss on both sides.

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The best for the government to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport per day, 7 day a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays by increasing population and personal cars in the cities, stock in traffic became a normal routines in such cities. One idea to solve this issue is develop free public transportation services for 24/7. Although this idea may solve most of traffic issue, I believe it is not the ideal solution against traffic congestion.

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fast food is becoming one part of life everywhere this has bad effects on our lifestyle and diet

Fast food is increasingly becoming widespread around the world and commonly included in our daily diet these days. Some believe that the consumption of this type has a detrimental effect on our health and disrupt lifestyles. This essay will discuss whether this type of diet is disadvantageous.

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In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

IN this modern era, tourism is a global opportunity to make wealth in various nations, Although, this approach has also countless terrible imapcts . In this essay we will further elaborate adequate and awful points of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly money is the deciding factor in the selection of a career. Many people believe high earnings allows them to provide financial security for themselves and their families. Whether or not money is a significant factor in choosing a job, considering each person's interest. In this ,essay I will give my opinion and describe why am I agree whit this statement.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly money is the deciding factor in the selection of a job. Many people believe high income allows them to provide financial security for themselves and their families. Whether or not money is a significant factor in choosing a job, considering each person's interest. In this essay I will give my opinion and describe why do I agree whit this statement.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some states, for people to buy a house is significant instead to rent one. This essay considers a positive statement, because to have an ownership it means to have stability and safety, which in our days is difficult to obtain, because people don’t have enough money to buy a house and to reach their goals.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some states, for people to buy a house is significant instead to rent one. This essay considers that the case might be the importance of something to be owned by somebody, which is a positive statement, because to have an ownership it means to have stability and safety through the years.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Many companies make their products with a great quantity of sugar, which leads to a several health diseases. This essay displays the cost of aliments with sugar should be increased to promote people eating less sugar. Although it might be a solution, I don’t agree to this topic.

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