IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 890

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem

A large number of criminals who release from prison after having the first punishment do more crimes. All is happening because of unemployment, and rehabilitation . There are some effective solutions that should be implemented to deal with issues.

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some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in orter to be successful at school. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some individuals feel that youngsters should not be assigned homework on a daily basis, others feel that in order to be successful in school, they must complete homework every day. In my opinion, give homework everyday can build pressure of the student and make him/her hate the school.

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Most people prefer shopping in supermarkets nowadays. How does this affect the local shops? What are the positive and negative impacts of this development?

These days most of the human like to buy day to day essential item from supermarket. Because overthere plenty of varieties available and convenient way to purchase daily essential.Therefore, shopping with single retail shop dramatically reduced. Then I would like to discuss in this eassy positive impact and negative impact.

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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?

Nowadays, with the advancement of technology and the improvement of living standards, the average life expectancy has increased, resulting in a larger proportion of older people in society. This trend has more negative effects than positive effects on society.

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In many countries, prison is the most common solution for crimes. However, many think that better education is the most effective way to prevent people from committing further crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In recent times, crime rates increasing especially in urban cities. In some countries, implemented severe punishment law on offender. However, some people harbour a belief that education is the feasible solution which prevent people to not involve in the crime activites. From my perspective, the partially agree with the given statement. In this essay, I will elaborate on the beneficial and adverse aspects of this thread and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Mostly the popular issue in metropolitan areas is traffic jam since many people prefer to live in this place to get better life. Because of this issue there are any two problems that give bad impact in the earth , but there have two solutions to tackle these problems.

Mostly the popular issue in metropolitan areas is traffic jam since many people prefer to live in this place to get better life. Because of this issue there are any two problems that give bad impact in the earth , but there have two solutions to tackle these problems.

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Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest solutions

The world has been witnessing few significant changes in youngsters life. Most of them egazing toward the bad offends,which effect in rising of misdeeds among metropolis.This eassy will articulate causes as well as solutions in looming paragraphs.

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People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

Advertisements influence the human being drastically in the last three decades .It provides a strong impression on our lives, as most of the time we are surrounded by ads. I believe that, it has ample of positive impacts when we compare it with the negatives.This essay will discuss the effect of Advertisements on humankind in either way, whereas there are high advantages as compared to demerits.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Apart from making profit, firms must play an important role in social responsibilities. In my opinion, I agree with this statement as corporate gain money from society, therefore it should also returned back it to society.

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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, education and training are better solutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are several crimes happening all around the world. Most countries use imprisonment as a punishment for people who are identified as a defendant by law . Some countries have good facilities for prisoners and some countries do not contain the basic facilities for prisoners. Most countries try to rehabilitate and empower prisoners during their jail time by introducing different pathways. There are a lot of people who have committed crimes because they have financial problems fulfilling their daily needs. In my opinion education and training provide the prisoners to empower their lifestyle and prevent further crime in future and it will be a great solution to reduce the crime rate in the country.

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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, there is a growing awareness among parents that visual stimulation from television and computer games is having a negative side to their children's behavioural growth. While some argue that it has little to no effect on kids' motoric skills, I believe that spending more time playing games and watching television would bring more disadvantages to younger generations.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems asa result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, many public are missing the opportunity to perform physical activities in the course of their working day or in their leisure period. Consequently, they suffer from many health-related issues. This essay will discuss the reasons behind it and remedies that can be taken to address the issue.

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In spite of technological developments in transportation, many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach any destination.What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

It is true that scientific advancements have progressively increased the development of a multitude of transport facilities. However many individuals think that the cycle is the most efficient means of mobility for travelling. This essay will discuss both the merits and demerits of using them in the forthcoming passages.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and the disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

It has become easy access to reach anywhere in the world. At present time, many people are going to places where conditions are difficult, like the Sahara desert or Antarctica. We will discuss the pros and cons for tourists who visit these corners of the earth.

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Some people think that giving aid to poor countries has more negative impacts than positive ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some people that to help poor countries have much more drawbacks than positive sides. I totally disagree with this phenomenon and believe it should be the best solution to overcome for decreasing poorness.

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the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

The given map illustrates a reconstruction plan for a house,compared to the current one.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment

Nowadays, crime rates are increasing at an alarming rate. So, it is essential to punish culprits to maintain law and order in society. According to my point of view, before taking any verdict it is also very important to consider the circumtances and motivation of crime.

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Fewer and fewer people want to become teachers especially in secondary schools. Why this happening and what can be done to tackle this problem?

It is irrefutable fact that nowadays more and more people are not interested to become educators especially secondary school. But it is not good thing for education of society. In this essay I will highlight principal causes and give solutions to resolve them .

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In some cultures children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

In some countries, people generally tells their children that they should try hard for attaining whatever they want Which I believe has many negative effects on children's life.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Plastic is made by petroleum, a scarce source, and it takes millions of years or even more to degrade. We, as a society, have been debating about different ways to save our planet, but the truth is that we can start with small attitudes on our daily routine to improve our planet and give the next generation a chance to experience life as we know it.

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