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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very iportant for people Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation.

Nowadays, the number of countries that choose to own a house is quite a lot. This case could be considered whether as a positive or negative situations. Hence, I will deliver my opinion below and discuss from the both sides.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education is a key part to make our society better. The ratio of literacy and educated people count have been increasing rapidly. People now understood society gives respect to educated people.Since ancient ,times it has been observed humans used to go to school for education and development, while some believe teaching at home is best. I think both have their own advantages and going to emphasise this in the below paragraphs.

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Modern children are suffering from those disease which were once consider to be meant for the aduts only.obesity is the major disease prevalent among the children.what are its causes and remedies?

In today's world, children are being attacked by diseases which were previously thought to be related to adults only. Now a days, obesity is a major sickness which is very common among children. This essay will present its causes and remedies.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Some would argue that parents should mould their youngsters how to be a good citizen while others think it can be taught in school. Parents is the first teacher of the children and would love to listen and mimic them so it's important they show the correct one. On the other hand, in school they learn differerent things and develop their creativity and social skills. I do believe, that it's the responsibility of the caretakers to mould this young children because home is the first classroom.

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Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons is it possitive or negative development?

While there are some benefits associated with consuming capital, the main drawbacks are more substantial.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Globally, there is a fast growing trend of people seeking for alternate treatments and medications rather than visiting their regular doctors.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, many students find it difficult to understand the lessons. There are several compelling reasons to attend classes. Students often find their classes boring. In this essay, I will give several reasons for this and explain how to solve them.

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In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

The ratio of crime has been increased by youngstar in many nation. There are manifold reasons of this situation which I will explain in the ensuing paragraphs and, also many methods can be taken to tackle the issues.

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Fossil fuels (e.g. coals, oil and gas) are the main source of energy for most countries. However, alternative sources of energy (e.g. wind and solar) have been encouraged for use by some countries. Is this a positive or negative development?

In the current Era of industrialization, the role of non-conventional sources of energy is increased in some country which I think is a positive development. In my essay, I would discuss the benefits of using the alternative sources of energy worldwide.

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Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what step can society benefit from the contribution that older people can make?

In the last few decades, advancement in technology and medical sciences has helped to increase human life span greatly. Early detection and treatment of diseases , together with general population's awareness of illnesses have helped many enjoy much better health and lives, especially in the elderly group. This is a positive change that can bring many positive impacts to our society and nation as a whole. In this essay, I will elaborate further on how senior members benefit us all.

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Each year, the crime rate increase. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity.

It is believed that the rate of delinquency has escalated and each year there is an increase in this issue. I totally agree with the above statement. This essay will discuss some of the reasons for this increased rate of crimes along with some solutions and in the end, will give a valid conclusion.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, as a result of progress in a significant number of areas such as technology some people think we have more choices than in past days which I agree with. But why is that?

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nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed What is the reason for doing this? is this a negative or positive developlment

There is no doubt that Parents always going to love their children and wish them all the best. Sometimes we can see that they are putting an overload of pressure on their children to succeed, but is that going to mark a positive effect on their children or a negative effect? In this essay, I am going to discuss what are the reasons behind this thing and whether is it good or bad for the future of the child himself.

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list someof the causes and effects of global warming. offer one solution that might slow or stop the problem associated with it.

The biggest threat in this technological epoch is global warming rather than poverty. The upcoming paragraphs deal with the reasons for global warming along with it, I will explain certain parameters to rescue as well as slow down the process of the rise in temperature.

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Nowadays, more number of crimes are done by teenagers. What are the possible causes and steps to prevent this?

In recent times, we can see the numbers of crimes have been dramatically incresed by most teenagers across the globe. However there are several reasons for this phenomenon, and we need find solutions in order to stop this.

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With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

Nowadays, population has increasing so, land of housing decline. As a result, people construct their houses by deforestation. It creates various of problems. I explain benefits of nature and what people do to decreased environment issues.

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Some people think that all lawbreakers should be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays , each and every individuals love to become criminals because they think that there is more oppurtunities compare to normal life . Few people say that the person who had taken such step should given strict punishment like life long jail also other speak that not every one is lawbreakers and they must have second chance for living . I Completely agree with first statement but I would like to give both side view and my opinion in the further essay .

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For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and Math. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skills be made as fourth skill to the list. To what extent do you agree?

For the past 100 years, Reading, Writing and Math took place as the important skills in education, Now the skills of computers are top-notching people who argue that computer skills should place as the fourth important part of education. I Agree with the statement given by the people.

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Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a nations success, while other think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a nations success. What are these factors? Which of all factors, do you think are most important?

Nowadays, nature is badly affected by a rapid growth in the production of variety of items which are available for the usage of people. In this essay both reasons and solutions followed by a conclusion will be discussed.

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In some countries, more and more adults choose to continue living with their parents after they graduate and find jobs. Do you think the benefits outweigh its drawbacks?

Due to the high cost/price of accommodation, a growing number of people decide to stay with their parents, even after graduation and starting working in some countries. I think the trend has more negative outcomes than benefits.

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