IELTS Writing Samples Band 5. Page 896

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by many that communities would be come across with many selfish or introvert people, if their members had taken freely decision about their routine issues when they were child. However, others appreciate having the right of choice for every human in every ages. While, sharing children some situation can help them to be more independent, I believe that being an effective person for society is more important than independency.

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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle.Both parents and schools are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays most parents come across children's health problems. I agree that the idea that parents and teachers are responsible for solving this type of problem.

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The advent of new technologies has led to changes in young children’s recreational activities. In my view, the drawbacks of those changes are more significant than the benefits

These days, technology are booming in the whole world providing new opportunities for the general public. As well as it also replace the physical activities like exercises in differenent fields. All these new facilities change the lifestyle of pupils and it has more disadvantages than advantages. Here I'm going to discuss the main factors with relevant examples.

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Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree?

How people learn and how they can learn better ? This kind of question has always been the theme for lots of discussions for a long time. Some people claim that intellectual skills can be honed better when doing group activities. I support this notion and in the following paragraphs I I shall further my

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Nowadays many people have an unhealthy diet and do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons behind this trend? How we can encourage these people to live a health life.

Citizens consuming unhealthy foods and not workout regularly are issues that are concerned by many people in a present day. I will discuss why this is the case and will suggest some practical solutions.

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Q. An increase in production of consumer goods results in damaging the environment. What are the causes of this and give a possible solution?

It is irrefutable that increase in manufacturing of consumer goods have led to the damage of the environment. This has caused due to many reasons like rising population and modernisation. This essay will elaborate on these two causes and thus provide a feasible solution to this.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas and towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can this cause?

All around the world, humans migrate from rural areas to cities for a variety of reasons. In my opinion, this phenomenon is existing because of a plethora of opportunities in the job market in urban areas but it causes problems for residents, and this essay will examine them.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits from this, the communities or these young people?

In the contemporary age, increasingly more people from industrialized nations are travelling to undeveloped parts of the world as volunteers to assist with education and construction. I personally believe that this phenomenon is of great benefit to both young individuals and the communities they work in. In this essay, certain reasons will be introduced which might explain their motivation.

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In some countries , more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building the live in What are the reasons for this ? How can people research this ?

In some areas throughout the world, people are becoming enthusiastic to know about all the facts and the past of the house or flat which they are living in . This say will consider the reasons for searching . When it will discuss many ways for acquire information.

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested that children should learn more local historical courses instead of global history in their educational terms. I completely agree with this statement because the knowledge of local history plays an essential role in children's self-development for the future.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.

These days, people are having a hard time reaching consensus whether characteristics we are born with play a more essential role than experiences we learn from others in our life. Some people are in favor of this statement. However, from my perspective, individuals' experiences are the major influence.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

In contemporary society, public debate has been going on in my country over if people should keep changing in lives. Some individuals deem that no change is better. From my perspective, I support that people should spend their time doing a variety of things. I will analyse both sides in detail in my essay.

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People nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

A common trend of change in sleeping patterns among people is quite noticeable these days in comparison to a few years ago. In my ,opinion the sleep cycle is disturbed due to ever emerging use of various social media and online platforms. Perhaps individuals use internet platforms for their entertainment purpose but sure it does have a negative impact on everyone.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is hard to deny that the public prefers to accept a worse situation instead of trying and enhance such conditions. In this essay, I will present both sides of this issue and conclude by giving my own point of view.

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Nowadays, eating habits of people aroud the world are chaging causing them many health problem including obesity . Why do people tend to eat so badly? What can be done to improve their eating habits?

In recent years, the frequency and the amount of food that people eat have been increasing rapidly. These changings could lead people to experience diet related diseases such as obesity and diabetes. In this essay I will discuss the potential causes and solutions of this event.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

The convenience of modern transportation shortens the distance between places and people embark to go vacation abroad more frequently than it has ever been, whether travelling domestically or abroad becomes another dilemma when plan a trip. A short joy domestic travel seems optimistic for the masses. However, exotic culture and various weather that are offered when travelling to somewhere will never be found in travel at home. I strongly disagree that more people will choose to spend their holiday at home instead of abroad.

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Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are two controversial perspectives heating up a debate over the tactics to cope with perpetrators. While some claim that putting the lawbreakers behind the bar is the optimal method to cope with them, others make a statement that another far-reaching solution is to educate and train them to become a job holder. While the former is valid to some extent, I would regard myself as an advocate for the latter.

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In the future, robots will do more and more jobs instead of humans. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

Today, we can see the rrogress of creating artificial intelligence machines. There are no doubts that in a few decades, robots will carry out the most jobs people are doing now. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of robotization.

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You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house.Talk about it to your friend.

I hope you're doing fine and your family doing great.I couldn't wait to write this letter since I came home back .

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in many countrie, a small numer of people earn extermly high salaries. some people believe that this good for the country, but other think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. discuss but these views and give your opinion.

people have different views about the government getting to the maximum wage in society. some people think a high wage is suitable but I believe government do not have access to people who get a top-of-level salary.

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