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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Open plan office no walls no barriers. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, planning to open an office has never failed to provoke debate among people. It is argued that offices should be constructed without any walls and barriers. While this thinking is valid to a certain extent, I would contend that it may do more good than harm.

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Nowadays many people choose to be slef employed rather than to work for a company or organisation.why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

For decades, the public are having a hard time reaching a consensus on whether being self-employed or working for a company is the better option. society choose to work individually due to the stress they often get in the workplace. the community can feel stress and pressure when the industry environment demands them to struggle in high intensity for a long period, tough competition with their peers, and bad relationships either with their bosses or workmates.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why? Who benefits more from this, the community or these young people?

There is a controversial notion heating a debate over the fact that numerous youngsters in developed nations are contributing their time to communities in under-developed ones by doing work without payment such as teaching or erecting accommodations. This essay is devoted to analyzing the underlying roots of this situation and showing whether society or young people benefited more from this.

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People are surrounded by advertising, which has an increasing effect on our lives. Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects ?

Nowadays, we use the internet for varied purposes and it become a key tool to keep up with the pace of life even if suddenly the internet connection went off, we are going to find out, we can’t do anything because most of our works rely on the internet also it will affect our economy enormously. It can be considered as a life and death situation,however, it consists of a few drawbacks too.

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THEY SHOULD KEEP SAVING ALL THE MONEY THEY HAVE EARNED AND SHOULD NOT PAY TAX TO THE STATE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

It would not be wrong to say that people are responsible for the development of their country. Even though many folks believe in not paying taxes and saving all their hard-earned money. This essay strongly disagrees with this statement because tax is paramount for the new infrastructure and economical growth of a nation.

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Some people believe that living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory has many advantages while others say that it has many disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment instead of a university dormitory.

After getting a high score to join a university that students prefer, they have to decide to live in an apartment or university dormitory, and this choice affects their academic performance and student life. While most students enjoy living in an apartment then some students prefer living at a university dormitory to an apartment. This essay shows the advantages and disadvantages of living in an apartment or at a university dormitory

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«In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in» What are the reasons for this? How can people research it?

Nowadays, people living in buildings which can be several thousands years. Our generation live after many significant and wondering events that can happened in our houses. Human is a creature that interesting in such things, so it is predictable situation when community starting research it.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discussion both these views and give your opinion

The majority ask to consider the scale of individual crime and situation which is they belong whereas, few people believe trials ought to be permanent for any types of violations.However, I thus ,believe before making a decision of the trial type of crime, the circumstance and surrounding situation should take into account.i shall analyse both views of arguments following paragraphs.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

According to many, recycling household items is not enough, and legal enforcement from governments is required. This essay moderately agrees with this statement as it discusses how legal enforcement is going to save the environment; thereafter, it clarifies how legal enforcement could hurt manufacturers of non-recyclable stuff.

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Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I believe unity is strength, but on the other hand, some believe that since the women are the final decision maker to whether have a baby or not, she also has to be the one who is obligated to raise the child by itself, so I strongly disagree with the mentioned idea due to the fact that the mother's role has changed during recent decades and the constant needs of children to their fathers.

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Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

Foreign movies such as Hollywood big IPs have achieved greater success than local independent films in terms of popularity. Several of the reasons could lead to this consequence which government should take responsibility for. Both factors and ways of saving local film industries will be discussed in the following essay.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that others measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion

These days, individuals usually get sick easily because of various factors, and some believe that the most effective way of decreasing this problem is to increase the play area. However, some believe that the expansion of play apparatus in every corner of the country could have a profound impact on the issue. This essay intends to analyse both perspectives.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that it is importance (wrong word used  important) to accept some negative situations when occur ( when occurring = when they occur) whereas others argue that it is better to try to seek some solutions to deal with hard times in life. I will discuss both views in the essay below.

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Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Food consumption is considered an essential part of human lives. Eating junk food might cause a detrimental influence on eating preferences, social life, surrounding eco-system, etc. Subjectively, I consider a ready-made cuisine inevitable for use especially these days, due to the needs of masses to intake cheaper food sources.

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Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In Life, no matter what profession is chosen or what kind of activities we involve in, ultimately we expect Happy living. There are arguments that the amount of happiness is directly proportional to financial status on hand, and on the other hand, it is stated that being happy is inclusive of many variables of life.As far as I am concerned, many factors ranging from health to relationships contribute to peaceful living.

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Getting promotion is one of the biggest driver for people to apply to themselves and work hard in the modern workplace. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

Promotion is claimed to be the most significant motivation for employees to work hard. Although the reasons may differ, the majority of the workers desire to get promoted in pursuit of a better salary and hence, superior living standards. Besides, greater respect in society and assurance of job security are other constituents that contribute to the diligent efforts of employees.

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?

Obese has become the most critical health concern in today’s children that in past only elder people use to have. The main reasons behind it are children eating fat food more often now and playing computer games at all times. The key solutions to this problem are expanding the prices of fast foods and increasing social activities for children.

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Some people think that criminal behaviour has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some, criminals commit a crime due to genetic characteristics, while others disagree and state that the reasons for such actions lay on the surface. I believe that genetics is slightly involved in criminal behavior, and we should rely more on the circumstances of each case and its offender.

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Some people think companies should employ old people to work as they have a lot of working experience. Others, however, think it is better to recruit young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Increasing community is a bigger threat to any rustic. Several factors contributed to the rise of the populace of nations. The following treatise will explicit the reasons behind the same.

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Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organizations to continue their development. Some people argue that practical aid or advice is more useful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

People's opinions differ as to whether or not financial help is needed for developing countries to continue their advancement. While there are some strong arguments against financial help, which I still believe that it is a necessary aspect of improvement.

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