IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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In modern times, the behaviour of children keeps changing day by day. Many parents and teachers believe that children's actions should be controlled rigorously. Some think that freedom to act should be given to children. In my opinion, some restrictions should be imposed on children's behaviour. I have discussed both the views related to the above-mentioned statement followed by my own opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
The Government of the US is concerned for the safety and well being of youngsters which is why they imposed a curfew to ensure the safety of teenagers. I am a strong advocate of this approach and I'll discuss my point of view in subsequent paragraphs.
Vegeterians are a group of people with a special diet, that mostly consists of consuming green food and avoiding meat or for some of them even all of the products that are being provided by animals. Being vegetarian is a new trend of the twentieth century, which protecting animals is said to be the main reason of choosing this lifestyle. However, it is noteworthy to bear in mind that is not the only factor and I believe the majority of them are pursuing other reasons. The following essay will overlook two of those rationales.
A group of folks believe that the contemporary epoch is the best era in which we are inhabiting. I certainly believe that we are in the best time because of technological advancements. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate further to justify my opinion and also put my perspective towards consideration of another time period.
Advances in medicine have reduced the number of infant deaths through the invention of vaccines. The government should make early vaccinations mandatory for all children so that they are in good health. Although others argue that they should have the freedom to decide whether to vaccinate their children or not.
At present time we live at the age of renovations, that facilitate our life and make it easier rather than past. Due to this fact majority of people consider that any kind of created technologies is beneficial for us.
With the wide access to digital devices, people are more interested in digital pictures. Among them, the crime genre has become very famous because of its content presentation. It, no doubt, has a negative effect on society, on the other hand, it is a responsibility of civilized people to control them.
History has an important part to take in the knowledge acquisition of children. There is no doubt that local history plays a vital role in understanding their ancestors' sacrifice, but also I contend that they be taught world history to widen their knowledge.
With the advent of technology, youths in the present world are considering themselves as superior and intelligent than old generation people, because of which, they are behaving in a rigorous way or misbehaving without any respect to others. I personally agree with it and think that politeness has to be developed in today’s young people.
The workdays' lenght has always been an issue for employees and employers. While the employees have always wanted it to get reduced, the employers have preferred the traditional six days. It is argued that decreasing the working days not only does not weaken the industry but also the apportunity of spending time with families helps the employees to work better; however, I believe although the new lifestyle has made this change feasible, reducing workdays is not beneficial for a country. The following essay will overlook two rationales that support my idea.
In modern days, it is vital to conduct trials of new products on wild life. Because human life is important. It is fair for a small number of animals endure pain rather than risking peoples life with untried merchandise. I completely agree with the statement and this essay will discuss the reasons.
It is generally acknowledged by certain individuals in some countries that people are increasingly want to discover the historical meaning of their houses. There are certain reasons to as why they want to know the tradition of their buildings, and there are some methods which should be taken into consideration in order to figure out it.
Traffic has always viewed as the integral problem of big cities that has wasted the major productive hours of residents' lives. The public transportation was offered by the government to solve this problem which failed due to the expensive transportation's fee. Thus, the free public means of transportation is being disscused as the final solution for this predicament. However, I believe this suggestion will fail to overcome this phenomenon. The following essay will overlook two rationales that support my idea.
The earth's population is significantly becoming more and more,and it means that is an enormous problem, so we should solve the issues. I totally agree with this statement that it is an issue. I think, there are many problems,and I try to discuss all of them.
Technology has simplified our lives and has become part of our lives. It is believed by most people that way of life has been advanced with the help of technology.This essay agrees with this view because technology has made life simple and assisted human beings in different ways.
Newspapers have an impact on the thoughts of the human and may lead them to change their ideas. This essay will discuss the causes especially on the elderly, and it will argue if it has a pros or a cons impact.
Music is everywhere in society. From coffee shops to elevators to working out at the gym, music is around us and playing constantly. Music is needed for society to function.
In the past the advertisements emphasized on their products’ quality but in this modern days, most companies are advertising their products have something new. I believe this development has been compounded by two factors: claiming that there is new feature acquires more attentions from customers and makes their brand unique in the market. In this essay, I’ll explain this is a negative development because it urges people to buy new things while it is not even a need to do so as well as effects the environment indirectly.
Governments, police and policymakers have long sought ways to decrease crime. While some people believe that lengthy jail sentences are the best way, others think that there are better alternatives. In this essay, I will consider both views and explain why I feel treatment and education programs are vital to curb crime.
While some people believe in spending on events and celebrating special events is beneficial for individuals and society, some people think it is a waste when too much is spent on such things. In my opinion, if rich people in the country spend money for celebrating can benefit the society as party planners can make money but if poor spend too much money to celebrate is a waste. I will discuss the further in the following paras.
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