IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Most people think that in recent times we have too many choices. I completely agree that they are plenty choices this days.
Arts reflect the heritage of a country and depict the creativity of an individual. While many believe that financing in arts is a wastage of money, I am of the opposite view as I believe that financing in arts is a good idea for the government.
Raising children should be equally shared between parents. I completely agree that father and mother are having the same degree of burden for it as not only it can prevent intense stress to one of them but also children with balanced care will feel more love.
In the past few decades advancements in technology significantly enhanced many instances. It is a prime role to the human social life such as mobile phones, tablets and computers through several applications like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and many faces to face interacted apps. most people feel that technological advancement has caused individuals more communicative albeit, the opposite has the case. Personally, i partially onagreeing the statement. This essay will discuss both sides to demonstrate the main points and prove the arguments.
While some people think that sharing many contents about scientific discovery, business, and theoretical world is either extremely crucial or worthy to be widespread throughout the world, others have the opposite idea that it is great if releasing the much information in the possible time is independent. This essay will illustrate the controversy of both views and give an apparent reason to understand simply.
It is undeniable that language explains the identity and character of a nation, including but not limited to their perspective in perceiving the world and how they think on something. Based on this background, some people argued that language is crucial and it should be mandatory to be taught at all primary schools. In this regard, I am of the opinion to accord with such statement, however limited to the most useful language only, such as Mandarin and English.
It is still believed by some people, that only governments and large organizations can make a positive change in the issue human kind is facing due to the environmental crisis, and individuals are not strong enough to make a difference. In this essay I would like to evaluate both views and share my own opinion.
It is still believed by some people, that only governments and large organizations can make a positive change in the issue human kind is facing due to the enviromental crisis, and individuals are not strong enough to make a difference. In this essay I would like to evaluate both views and share my own opinion.
Nowadays, with the advancement of science and the advent of cellphone, human-machine life has developed, so using apps makes works done faster. In most countries, it has become widespread use from apps mobile phone and the increasing cost of using these applications. In my view, technology is a tool, and if this tool develops our life, we must pay for it, and I agree this development has more advantages.
It is true that our planet’s ecosystem has been affected so much by technological advancements. Although some people claim that adopting an eco-friendly lifestyle is the only measure, I would argue that environmental issues could be dealt with by the improvements in technology.
Nowadays, technology is developed quickly. The more time passes, the more the technology is improved in an exponential way. Undeniably, technology is around us as one of the important objects for living in daily life. For example, we communicate with one another by phone instead of letters. We use many kinds of vehicles that fasten transportation. All technology is made for helping the human more convenient, even safer. The technology is used in cases of increasing security. Somehow, the human has a limit to work, technology is used instead. For example, the security camera expands the view that gives convenience to the security guards. Moreover, beyond expanding the view of the security camera is a cellphone tracking that monitors what people say. Even though this technology is helpful for security, people are concerned if these technologies affect them worse.
It is considered by some that to be successful in life it is necessary to have a higher education. However, there are people who do not have a university education but are successful. In my opinion, higher education is not the most relevant because many celebrities and businessmen have succeeded in life.
It is argued that children should be encouraged by parents to take part in some activities in their free time while some say that it is the child that needs to develop his interest and occupy themselves with activities of their own. This essay agrees that a child should have the liberty to occupy themselves in their free time without their parents intervention. This essay will discuss both the views.
Nowadays, many people prefers to shop online rather than going out for shopping but there are many concerned individuals who feel that offline shopping is much safer and enjoyable as compared to online. Others, however, believe that online shopping is a convenient and a time saving option. I completely agree with the latter statement and in this essay, I will support my view with examples.
In recent years, there has been a significant increase in various types of pollutions. One of them is air pollution. Some believe that we can only prevent it by restricting air travel. In my opinion, limiting it is not entirely effective in today's modern world. This essay will argue the same.
It is true that the consumption of sweetened drinks has been increasing significantly. This esay will discuss some main reasons why this tendency is formed and suggest some vialbe solutions before coming to a reasonable conclusion.
Whether or not the investment should be given to the new transportation one is an issue of interest. While some believe that the government should invest in new pathways of trains, others argue that the old public transport needs to be well-developed rather than the aforementioned one. This essay points out rationales behind the two contrasting views and reaches my own conclusion that both former and letter should be taken into consideration.
Due to the high population of people traveling, there is a dramatical rise in the requirement of more airplane. This essay will discuss the problems and suggest some possible solutions to deal with this issue.
Hanoi, which is the capital city of Vietnam, is fascinating by millions of visitors because of its popularity and friendliness. Located in the north part of the country, Hanoi is one of the most ancient cities in the world due to its age, which is greater than one thousand years old. This place can offer both comfortable temperature and classic design, as Hanoi has the tropical climate and talented architects.
To be successful is always the desired final of everyone. It is said that study is important to success, but others believe there is no relation between study and success.
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