IELTS Writing Samples Band 6
Many people work hard, but only a few succeed. We see this especially in professions that are always in limelight, for example, in sports, movies, music, arts and theatre. So many athletes struggle on the field, but only a few gain glory. Also, certain oriental cultures adopt a fatalistic thought process. Based on this, few people believe that indeed getting success depends on luck. But, I strongly disagree with this sentiment and firmly believe that success depends on hard work and perseverance.
Nowadays, we see an argument for which stage of life gives extra pleasure. However, in my opinion, I think teenage life gives more joy. In the following paragraph, I shall discuss both the view and explain why young life is having great happiness.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
It is widely thought by some that the practices of massive international companies could support the economies of the emerging nations, whereas some could be considered as threats for taking advantage of those countries. In my opinion, I believe that foreign corporations are essential for developing countries in term of opportunities and employment, while there are drawbacks to the environment and local businesses.
People have different views about whether History is one of the most important subjects in school. In my view, I disagree with the idea that science and Technology are more essential for people to learn in this modern life.
Few individuals comment that courses that include music,drama and creative writing,
A common belief of owning a home is developed in many countries of the world and the idea of living in rented accommodation is frowned upon by many people in such nations. I think wastage of money behind paying the amount of rent could be the reason why such is the scenario in some places and I believe it is a positive attitude.
There are many students who stay with their parents while studying in a university, while others go away to live alone as their educational institutes are located far away from their hometown. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of both situations in the following paragraphs.
Thanks to globalization, an international network is possible. People from across the globe are able to contact each other in a matter of minutes. Thus, the key foundation of a successful communication process is languages, over thousands of them being spoken across the globe. As the matter of fact, it can be challenging without mutual language. There is an argument whether the development of the same global language has a positive or negative impact which will be discussed in the following essay.
Advertisements are being aimed at children with different products and goods. In which parents are arguing that their kids are under pressure even when advertisers tell that their information is relevant. In this material will be discussed both views, the parents and the advertisers, wherein my point of view I display my consideration about this topic.
Many people feel that change should be embraced without qualification while others believe it is better to avoid new situations. In my opinion, though change can be positive in certain contexts, it should not be pursued as valuable in itself.
As my current work is focusing on improvement in the company that has already been running for years, for my future master’s lesson, I intend to focus studying on how to help Start-up companies or Small and Medium Enterprises that have just run their businesses either with their owned capital or with investment from foreign countries, allocate their capital effectively and efficiently. I am inspired by people around me who have just built their businesses, but have to close their business due to financial problems, especially in this pandemic. Therefore, I need to improve my knowledge in finance. At the same time, I would like to take part in realizing one of the sustainable development goals of the United Nations about decent work and economic growth that aimed to encourage the formalization and growth of Small and Medium Enterprises, including through access to financial services. I would like to start from my motherland, Indonesia.
In the last decades, as a consequence of the development in social network and entretainment world, many famous people are richer than politicians, the main reasons for these are the changes in advertisment and the government jobs seing as community jobs, being a negative development as people prefers other kind of education and jobs.
Some people are of the notion that nowadays, women are becoming more like men. Others, however, oppose such view, that is; they assume men are becoming more like women. From my perspective, women and men are not on the same wavelength, and as such, they should not become like each other, but if I should decide one, I am afraid that the former one is more likely to be true. One of the issues in this argumentation is the matter of job opportunities and the fact that men are preferred to women when they are applying for a job vacancy. The other reason may be that in the former generations women were miserable, the girls of the recent generation decided to take away this domination.
It is widely known that the companies’ tendency to highlight new products in advertisement is a common phenomenon. Some people believe that it brings about negative developments. However, in my opinion, a positive outcome outweighs the negative one considering the virtuous cycle brought from the high demand in the market. It can be said that pursuing high demand for companies’ products can be the major reason for the marketing strategy highlighting ‘new’ products.
It is often argued that should children learn about how to be perfect members of society from their parents or school? Even if school has a lot of benefits for children, I completely agree with children should learn to be good members of society by their parents.
It is often argued that some people think that when young people have some free times, they should be in voluntary community job because this job can improve teenagers and the community for different ways. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this idea and this essay will discuss that why this idea is true and why should teenagers be in voulntary job in their free times.
Some people are of the notion that nowadays, women are becoming more like men. Others, however, oppose such view that is they assume men are becoming more like women. From my perspective, women and men are not on the same wavelength, and as such, they should not become like each other, but if I should decide one of those, I am afraid that the former one is more likely to happen. One of the issues in this argumentation is the matter of job opportunities and incomes.
Nowadays, plastic bags are used extensively, which wastes are the main reason of water and land pollution. This is argued that prohibition of plastic bags usage may be an approach to address this issue. This essay will discuss the positive aspects and effects of this opinion.
In many years people concerned with the importance of music from one little child to a big nation, and its aim seems to accompany them in different environments where meet different ages also various cultures. From my point of view, I totally agree with the given statement above and try to give my reasons on the given question.
somep people think that art also play a vital role in our life but educational system doesnot give the value to this subject such as music rama anc creative other thing.So some people want that education department should allow the arts subject for students.From my perspective, Arts subjects is definitely beneficial in many ways.
🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!
- Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checksPractice with essays, charts, and letters.
- Personalized suggestions & mistake analysisSpot every mistake and boost your score.
- Topic ideas & vocabulary helpersExpand your ideas and use the right words.
- Progress trackingWatch your writing improve with every practice.
