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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people say that completing University education is the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills are important Discuss both sides and give your opinion

In this era, getting a new career is a big problem for some fresh graduates. the majority of fresh graduates have not upgraded their skills when in college and the minority have diamond skills that they got when joining a community at university.

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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modernized world, numerous people are working from as well as from the office, whereas some individuals think that it would be a better option that a huge amount of employees should work from the house instead of going to the office. From my standpoint, it has more demerits than its merits. So, in the forthcoming, paragraphs I will support my stand and besides ,that I will mention a few merits too.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, more and more businesses and companies are trying to prove that their products are bringing something new to consumers' life and are different from other products. In this essay, I will bring two reasons for this phenomenon as well as explain why I believe it is negative progress in general.

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Scientists and technologists are seems to be more valued in society than artists and musicians in what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, some people believe that scientists and technologists play an essential role in promoting the development of society. While others argue that artists and musicians are also a vital part of our life. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and explain why I support the first view.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

As the saying goes, home is where the heart is, being sheltered has always been one of the basic needs of human beings. Nowadays many people prefer to own a house instead of living in a rented one. In this essay, I am going to examine the reasons behind and review the merits and demerits to reach a conclusion.

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Some believe that showing people happy pictures (pictures in which outstanding achievements are made in helping the poor) is more effective in encouraging them to take action to solve poverty than sad pictures ( that show how hard life can be for the poor). Do you agree or disagree? Why?

Showing two kinds of photos to the folk who are trying to solve the issue of poverty, one is positive, the other is negative. If someone is in difficulty, he needs to strive to do his best to change his life and needs help. There are two ways to help him; one is showing an individual a happy picture, which contains some achievements made in helping the poor; the other is giving him a sad photo that shows how hard life can be for the poor.I think it is eventually a decision of how to push a person in the right way: constructive way or deconstruction. Which one is better? However, I agree with the last.

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Many people say that applying heavy taxes to industries will prevent industrial pollution. Others believe that there are other effective solutions to curb the industrial pollution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing discussion regarding controlling industrial pollution.A group of individuals claim that in order to overcome the poison of industries the authorities should implement huge taxes.on the other hand,others believe that there are many more ways to hammer down this issue. As far as I am concerned,I would like to hold the former opinion due to some major facts.My above discussion is enough to support my position.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Adults have a vital role to play in teaching offspring to recognise and regulate their behaviour. Some people argue that abuse is essential to help youngsters learn to distinguish between appropriate and wrong. I strongly agree with this. torture aids a child’s development. Otherwise, the youngster would not understand the negative ramifications of their actions. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss my opinion and give supporting reasons.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengares. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

As we have always seen in sci-fi movies, we are getting closer to the technology of using cars and different vehicles without manually driving them. People will be all called passengers and drivers will be AI (Artificial Intelligence). This essay will argue that despite the existence of disadvantages, It will be more beneficial.

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Many companies use advertisements to increase sales. What are the main ‎reasons that make a helpful advertisement? Is it a good thing or a bad thing ‎for society?‎

There is an ongoing discussion regarding the many businesses man used advertisements to boost their profits.In this modern era,everyone is using advanced technology like mobile, MacBooks, laptops and tablets.While watching videos on these kinds of stuff we can watch different commercials.I can say something I get curious about them and want to know about them.As far as I am concerned this situation has both pros and cons.It is obvious to us its drawbacks are not sizeable but its advantages are up to mark.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially inetligent robots. What is your opinion?

Robotic technology is relatively new in our life. As we can imagine, this science will be developed more in the future. However, it has already started to replace some people's positions. Is it possible for all jobs will be done by AI robots? In my opinion, lots of professions could be done by them.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving chilren this message?

At times, some people from a few cultures maintain the notion any triumph will be attainable, should scions exert themselves diligently and sufficiently. This belief may lead to modifying children's turn of mind, so that renders them more ambitious as well as more hardworking, but there are some drawbacks to be taken into account.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like soccer while other people believe that taking part in individual sports is better, like tennis or swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Each individual has their own interest when it comes to sports. Few people like games that are one-player specific while others prefer team-centric games. Although both types of activities have their own pros and cons, I agree with the former group of audience.

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Scientists and technologists are seems to be more valued in society than artists and muscians in what extent do you agree?

Deciding which profession is of utmost importance in society is always a topic of debate. While some believe that artists and musicians are valuable as they provide creative expression of voice, I maintain that scientists and technologists are more valuable for the betterment of society. In this essay, I will argue that scientists and technologists are essential professionals for the development and advancement of society.

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Some people say it’s a waste of time when plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a considerable proportion of individuals are seeking their goals by setting some scheduled planning steps in advance, which I strongly believe that would be beneficial and practical in terms of fulfilment. Besides, due to the high reported success rate towards this issue and the rewarding sense of satisfaction and innovation, the majority of human beings are encouraged to follow this policy.

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Some parents believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by book reading. Do you agree or disagree?

Some parents support the idea that children should spend more time reading books rather than watching tv or playing computer games which should be restricted and also replaced by book reading as well. I totally agree with the statement.

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some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs ( for example working on charity, teaching sport to younger people ) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The incorporation of social welfare activities into high school programs is at the forefront of national debate. While a host of people argue that these services should be made obligatory for high school students, others are against this notion. However, I am, firmly, in favour of this statement and provide a few reasons in the following essay.

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People have a better quality of life than in past centuries. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

Nowadays , people have a better quality of life than in the past centuries,and I shortly agree with that. In fact, there are a lot of facilities that are improving and making our lives easier to live. In this part of the writing , an essay I will explain , why I am thinking so.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In order to hinder serious health problems such as obesity, people blame manufacturers for producing high-level-sugar food and drinks and suggest that raising the prices will be an adequate solution. In this essay, I will argue why I don't agree with this idea and it would not be good prevention.

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Nowadays children has become more addicted to TV and because of that their physical activity level is decreasing. What can be the cause and possible solution to that?

In this day and age, the vast majority of youngsters could not live a day without sophisticated technologies such as TV, smartphone, laptop and etc. Consequently, more and more undergraduates are suffering from low physical activity which causes both psychological and physical obstacles. In the forthcoming ,paragraph this essay will discuss its possible consequences and solution with relevant examples.

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